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Oh my goodness, pregnant twins! This is evil!
But seriously, if we're choosing, I personally prefer the realistic red hair and one or two ponytails doesn't really matter to me, both look sexy and cute.
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But seriously, if we're choosing, I personally prefer the realistic red hair and one or two ponytails doesn't really matter to me, both look sexy and cute.
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Looks like it will be the Freckled-Ponyexpress. I'll make sure her skin is made smooth milky smooth white in that case. Freckles and ginger pony. So we can ride it all the way home... errrm, ignore me, moving along now.
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You are so going to be in trouble with her and that attitude. O man I can't wait for you to make some of the wrong choices
This will be entertaining.
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Not disagreeing with you, just saying she has her own personality. And who knows what attachments she comes with *wink wink* Before this gets the reaction "attachment" may bring out of some paranoid people. No, she will not have a donger. Just people in her life and stuff to improve or complicate your choices. Always a choice!
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Thanks for the kind words. In honor of that, I downloaded the game to try it.We have to lure @Ignatz in this thread. Besides having the best Avatar of all Time that man is a freaking marketing machine for Games he likes
A lot to like and a bit to have some issues with.
- Good storyline, first of all. Lot of plot threads, but no obvious "tell everyone what is going on" - that's smart stuff.
- Potential trope characters used more originally, not falling into the trap of "I saw that guy in game X" - that's smart, too
- Renders are pretty clean and the female and male leads are distinctive - another box checked
- The character-driven humor is excellent. The dialogues feel real.
- The narrator concept is a tough one, especially when it breaks fourth wall. I'm not feeling it.
- The dev concept is outright awful. It's a cute conceit that probably makes the dev smile but adds nothing to the story (actually detracts from it, in my view, by breaking immersion)
- Similarly, all the self-references to porn games constantly reminds the player that he is playing a porn game rather than focusing on the interesting story and getting submerged.
- Some significant proofreading would be helpful to make this game sing.
All in, I'm not sold yet. I really like the themes and story concept. The art is nice and the characters look new. I would recommend jettisoning the self-referential stuff and concentrate on the real writing. I think this story has some serious backbone to it and doesn't need the distraction of the forced humor of the narrator/dev comments.
Since that's a radical suggestion, I don't expect the dev will do that...nor should he, as I am just one voice and not even a patron. Plus, though I don't agree with his choice, I feel all devs should follow their own muse and not be overly influenced by outsiders (especially pirates...arr!).
I'm keeping my eye on it, though. This one has promise!
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Thanks for trying out the game. The stuff you see now is filler (The dev/narrator) until the actual update is released. I always clean up my own mess as they say. So it's not a permanent part of the game. And as for the humor, it's a hit or miss, like everything else in this world. Take care, and hope you try the next update.
PS you're right about what I'll do or won't do. Patron or not, if it is something I feel strongly about for/against God himself can't change my mind.
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Progress is going well. I am also "Proofreading" From the very first letter to the very last one on the script. I wish you all a great weekend, or what's left of it.
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Oops, yeah that was me pretty much saying night lol. Thanks, J, as always appreciate the love. Just got a new patron today HYPETRAIN! Now I can work even better. Next update will have at least 2 to 5 times the amount of renders in it. So got to keep working!Wish you a great weekend as well
And get yourself some rest soon ;D
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Haha figured as much
New Patron? hell yes, congratz mate, i will pledge next month too probably ;D
2-5 amount of renders? 0.0 i hope my heart can handle the next update ;D
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Well, it will come with a disclaimer. Do not play if you have a heart condition. Let's just say there may be a chance of goodness overdose... Melissa especially. But enough spoiling, back to work and make sure you have your medication nearby as you play.Haha figured as much
New Patron? hell yes, congratz mate, I will pledge next month too probably ;D
2-5 amount of renders? 0.0 I hope my heart can handle the next update ;D
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Let me take a wild guess...I am sure he meant it to be so hot, it will make your heart jump.
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Not spoiling a damn thing. I have done plenty of that I believe. All I can say is Moria is very warm. I've been working on this in my head for 5 years. This year was when I finally had everything I needed to put it into action. It will be ugly, or very enjoyable based on your choices. Remember I love choices as a gamer, therefore you will have to make choices that you very likely would in the real world. You can make it fun, enjoyable or woops that really was not a good idea...
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It was vague enough to go both ways, you just flipped a coin and got tails is all.i hope so
now after reading the post again i understand ...im dumb -.-