So, from what I've been reading there are some amount of bugs and the writing is cringy/cheesy in this release? That's pretty unfortunate. Oh well, I was planning to wait until the Maddie release anyhow. I do very much want to support this game on Patreon but only when content that appeals to me is being worked on.
If that's your prerogative, all power to you.
I think the update after the next one (cause this was only half the update for the dance, we still have to put Paulina and Star in), will have exactly what you're looking for. I personally haven't found the errors present that people are noting (minus the Dash one, that one is pretty obvious, and has since been fixed, soon to be updated), but I can understand certain people just not liking the dialogue all that much , even though I've seen more positive feedback than bad. Maybe it was just this update, but I've also thought they've all been pretty similar in terms of quality... minus the self inserts we added recently... oof...