I feel I should clarify; I wasn't trying to tell you to re-write the story, only to emphasize how committed down this particular story path you are now, and how that was tied to what was frustrating me with the story as when I originally read that the marriage could be saved without the husband being a wimp I wasn't expecting the husband to be so damn wimpy.All true, but that's how Henry was written to be and is going to be until something like what you said happens, but that's the thing with this type of story, is hard not to be too predictable with characters like him. But I said this to Mayosena and will repeat it, you won't see me rewriting the story to fit no one's tastes, especially because it would fuck up the endings I have planned already.
But again, I'm not trying to tell you to do a re-write, it's your story; I've written stuff before and if somebody told me to re-write to meet what they wanted then I'd want to slap them through the screen. I'm just offering some feedback and doing a bit of venting. After all, the artwork is excellent and while I have my suspicions as to what will happen, I am still curious to see how it does play out.
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