Ren'Py Abandoned Apartment #69 [v0.07] [Luxee]

[Zenithtb]

Just my little notes comment. Ignore if you wish.


'Persume' not 'Presume'





Should be 'its'


"I'd"


'Whose'


Capital D for Disney. Meh.


--W for Wednesday


--B and D


"Daughter's"


"Movie's"

 

[myuhinny]

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[Motoko Kusanagi]

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"Remake Nea Cock less veiny."

This made me chuckle.

 

[RG80100]

Who is Alicia and Preeti ?

 

[Havik79]

Did you post in the wrong thread, there os no one in this game with those names, the only game I know of is The Headmaster with Alice and Priti.

 

[enfurnoh]

Just started this game and it's a bit sparse...

The thing that will probably make it unplayable for me is that is supposedly takes place at ISU in Bloomington Illinois??? Hahahahaha! I went to Uni there back in the late 80's and early 90's. First off, ISU is in Normal, not Bloomington. Secondly it looks nothing like anything in the game. Wrong slang too, sound more UK than downstate.

 

[RG80100]

Did you post in the wrong thread, there os no one in this game with those names, the only game I know of is The Headmaster with Alice and Priti.

 

[Havik79]

Ah I see, I never bother to look at those, but I guess new characters.

 

[Skode]

Ah I see, I never bother to look at those, but I guess new characters.

I assume one is the teacher who he left an option in game to access a scene with but of course said scene isnt in the game yet... just that it was left there for a very specific reason lol. Curious were getting more characters added though before weve even met all the of the ones who have profiles in the game already haha

 

[Duke Leo]

Just finished the update. The story still seems promising, but the interface leaves a lot to be desired. The game also seems to lack any real choices. So why the pseudo sandbox? If everything should just be done in a simple order without any real branching other than (pursue this girl? Y/N), then why not just make the game a VN and roll with it?

 

[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

Just started this game and it's a bit sparse...

The thing that will probably make it unplayable for me is that is supposedly takes place at ISU in Bloomington Illinois??? Hahahahaha! I went to Uni there back in the late 80's and early 90's. First off, ISU is in Normal, not Bloomington. Secondly it looks nothing like anything in the game. Wrong slang too, sound more UK than downstate.

Give the man a break, he's not a native english speaker (nordic I think?) and considering that he's doing a great job, asking him to get the slang perfect would be a stretch. I've certainly seen less convincing dialogues from devs who actually are native speakers.

 

[lexdoll]

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Looks like Nea will be the main focus of the next update? The number of tasks for Nea doubles all of the rest of girls combined. Oh, this is beautiful Nea fans will be happy

 

[enfurnoh]

Give the man a break, he's not a native english speaker (nordic I think?) and considering that he's doing a great job, asking him to get the slang perfect would be a stretch. I've certainly seen less convincing dialogues from devs who actually are native speakers.

Really? Odd then that he picked such a specific location as ISU in Illinois for his setting. Really random. If you are going to pick a specific spot you should at least try to get it right. If you aren't going to bother then use a generic place.

 

[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

Really? Odd then that he picked such a specific location as ISU in Illinois for his setting. Really random. If you are going to pick a specific spot you should at least try to get it right. If you aren't going to bother then use a generic place.

Yeah, the last part I agree with. Maybe dev has visited it at some point and fond memories remain?

 

[TheReDeeMeR]

Looks like Nea will be the main focus of the next update? The number of tasks for Nea doubles all of the rest of girls combined. Oh, this is beautiful Nea fans will be happy

I wanna breed her tight brown hole until i make a baby

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[El_Loco]

Hi guys, it's time for us to elect a chairman of the movement "Nea once and for all"

 

[Havik79]

Pfft, I am here for sweet Eve.

 

[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

Pfft, I am here for sweet Eve.

I think I'm going for them all. But Nea will be the queen/femmeboy princess of my Harem.

 

[Havik79]

I think I'm going for them all. But Nea will be the queen/femmeboy princess of my Harem.

I thought unlike parental love this was a solo girl game, not harem.

 

[Duke Leo]

The plot, so far, would seem to indicate otherwise.