- Jul 10, 2017
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You meet a ton of people in the 1st chapter.
You go from broke unemployable living in his car nobody,
ready and willing to be the object of frat party initiation rituals
just for the promise of a chance to audition 4 a job ... yeah, MC is pretty hopeless,
...to ...
still unemployable, broke, feeling betrayed and also a homeless person,
but now fortuitously living in the home of a long lost school buddy,
while all the nation knows you left your nerd bff girl friend with whom you had same interests,
for the ball queen who is now the talk of said nation.
Oh .. and everybody in the world now knows that
your project with your bff girl friend is a wonder of technology,
same wonder of technology that ball queen former lover of yours
has been trying to replicate 4 the past 3 years
and failing hard.
You go from broke unemployable living in his car nobody,
ready and willing to be the object of frat party initiation rituals
just for the promise of a chance to audition 4 a job ... yeah, MC is pretty hopeless,
...to ...
still unemployable, broke, feeling betrayed and also a homeless person,
but now fortuitously living in the home of a long lost school buddy,
while all the nation knows you left your nerd bff girl friend with whom you had same interests,
for the ball queen who is now the talk of said nation.
Oh .. and everybody in the world now knows that
your project with your bff girl friend is a wonder of technology,
same wonder of technology that ball queen former lover of yours
has been trying to replicate 4 the past 3 years
and failing hard.
How is that 4 one mighty introduction?
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