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morphiospain

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What a great Journey and game. It was fun to watch the creative process and then see it come to fruition. I love the art and story!!!!

Yeah to a game completed that I Like. I am excite to see you arew jumping right into another one. I will be following it and enjoying. Thank you!!!!!
 

SpaceBall1

I knew it...I'm surrounded by assholes!
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Dec 12, 2020
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I wish more games had this kind of MC. Most of then are lanky, awkward, and weird looking. Byron is a breath of fresh air and a most welcomed change.

Love your work and keep it up!
I agree for the most part. The criticism I would give the MC, a long with many games, his dick is too big. Its unrealistic and unnecessary. Average size is 5 inches. very few humans have one that size. Not to mention, this MC is clearly on steroids and those shrink your junk. Its science.

However thats my only criticism. I just found this game and I couldn't stop playing. Not only are the girls some of the hottest I have seen. The storyline is just beautiful. It makes you remember to look for the good in the world. Good people are hard to find. I really love this game.
 

BigDaddyDom

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A lot of games are ruined (to me at least) because their MC looks a little too young to be in a porn game and would warrant my door being busted in by the FBI. (looking at all those Monstergirl RPG Maker games)
Yeah, that too. For me, I just can't identify with an MC that looks like a kid
 

Myrabelle

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Jul 15, 2021
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Just finished this game and I really did enjoy it. I did the Dallas poly option because Dallas was so hot that she was one of the main reasons I started it in the first place. I do think the relationships were too rushed to be realistic. It was basically like an On/Off switch as apposed to casual buildup, but I guess that did allow you to get to the "fun" parts sooner. The game was filled with jokes as well. A few made me bust out laughing, while others made my jaw drop in shock. That made things entertaining. There were even some pretty emotional scenes in the game that can bring a tear to a grown man's eye. The final sex scene with Avalon and Dallas was Amazing!! Oh, and the Bonus Act was a real surprise that I wasn't expecting. I really got to explore the whole "What If" story and it was very enjoyable.

All in all, a great game. I really enjoyed it. I do wish there were more acts/episodes to keep the story going. I was not expecting it to end where it did. I thought there would have been at least one more act to the main story. I know there is a spinoff with Penny, but I didn't find her that sexually appealing personally. I might still check it out, especially if more of the Avalon characters make an appearance in it. It looks like Penny and Leah are together from the screenshots I saw. Not really sure how I feel about that after playing the Bonus Act from Avalon. I know it was an alternate timeline, but I feel like Leah, Avalon and Dallas are mine now. So get your own girl Penny!! lol

Anyway, thanks so much to Lockheart for making such an enjoyable game. :)
We're so glad that you enjoyed your experience! Avalon was Lockheart's first visual novel. We know it felt a bit rushed with the pacing of the relationships in hindsight. We're going to try to do better with our pacing in future works.

Penny for Your Thoughts does have a male protagonist route which will be explored in more detail upon the next release. Currently, there is a prologue for Penny's game which allows you to get to know the characters. Chapter One will allow you to choose whether to play from Penny's perspective or from the perspective of the main male protagonist Cassian.

Thank you for the praise. I'll be sure to pass it on to Lockheart!

thank you for this intresting experience
And thank you for giving our little novel Avalon a try. We're sure happy you enjoyed it!

What a great Journey and game. It was fun to watch the creative process and then see it come to fruition. I love the art and story!!!!

Yeah to a game completed that I Like. I am excite to see you arew jumping right into another one. I will be following it and enjoying. Thank you!!!!!
We're happy to hear that you're eager to follow us on our journey. We're going to work especially hard on our next works. Be sure to let us know what you think of Penny and Petal's games too! Thank you, morphiospain!

This game needs more attention. I am now a subscribestar
Thank you, whisperpuppy! We always appreciate support. Thanks to fans like you, we've been able to hire on some extra hands which means faster releases and improved features.
 
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SeveredRealms

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Now the real question why cockhold Byron in this game by having Leah not accept the poly relationship cause of the lesbian side of it yet jump into bed with our big bad game destroyer aka Penny. Seems a little messed up she turns lesbian right off in that game yet could not handle it in this game.... seems to me a big FU to the cast of this story... ohh wait nevermind little Pet Penny was the only one that mattered once she came into this game.
 

Vollezar

Gingers are love. Gingers are life.
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Aug 14, 2020
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Oh well. Enjoyed the game. Up until the Avalon and Penny "date". Avalon had made no attempt to let Penny know that she and MC were dating and went on date with Penny. I lost all respect for her. And Penny at the same time (she had to know that Avalon and MC were dating considering how arrogant she is about being the best at her job). Sucks really cause4 I was interested where the game was going with the Gladstone thing.
 

Myrabelle

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Oh well. Enjoyed the game. Up until the Avalon and Penny "date". Avalon had made no attempt to let Penny know that she and MC were dating and went on date with Penny. I lost all respect for her. And Penny at the same time (she had to know that Avalon and MC were dating considering how arrogant she is about being the best at her job). Sucks really cause4 I was interested where the game was going with the Gladstone thing.
This was an often misunderstood scene in Avalon. Lockheart has said he could have clarified things better here. Avalon and Penny went on a girl date. It's a friendly, non-romantic type of date where two women who recently met go out to get to know each other better. Penny doesn't engage in romantics with Avalon or Byron. We're sorry we didn't explain this better in the novel. We hope you'll give it another chance. :)
 

TGafy

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This was an often misunderstood scene in Avalon. Lockheart has said he could have clarified things better here. Avalon and Penny went on a girl date. It's a friendly, non-romantic type of date where two women who recently met go out to get to know each other better. Penny doesn't engage in romantics with Avalon or Byron. We're sorry we didn't explain this better in the novel. We hope you'll give it another chance. :)
No prob for me. When I played it, I never saw it as anything other than an innocent girls night out.
 

Vollezar

Gingers are love. Gingers are life.
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This was an often misunderstood scene in Avalon. Lockheart has said he could have clarified things better here. Avalon and Penny went on a girl date. It's a friendly, non-romantic type of date where two women who recently met go out to get to know each other better. Penny doesn't engage in romantics with Avalon or Byron. We're sorry we didn't explain this better in the novel. We hope you'll give it another chance. :)
Thanks. I'll try to keep playing the game, but it really did threw me off. There is a difference between a "girl's night out" and a "date".
The story is really interesting. To be honest I am never really interested in these games for the porn ( I usually skip the sex scenes). The games that I download from here are mostly the ones that have a good story. And this one certainly has one. And fucking hilarious humour to boot, eh? So thanks for your explanation, I'll keep playing to the end then.
 
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VN..reader

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i am SO Loving this. :love: what is best part.?.?.? :sneaky: when i named my MC as 'ARNOLD" and did the voice over from Kindergarden Cop. with Emma Stone as Avalon. :cool: i haven't quite got the voices down for Octavia and Penny yet... but if i could... i would be peeing my self from laughter. :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: i need to finish this so a can give a Right Proper Review.!.! i think i am getting to the part when the Megalodong gets loose.. :whistle:

EDIT;
i got the perfect fit for Penny... Mila Kunis. i almost blew a gasket on this and need to start over to get the full effect. now i think the best fit is Claudia Black. as Octavia (was watching Farscape and BOOM her voice fit so fine) i mean Gina Davis would work too but not a well.
SO.. Here is the challenge (if you can) play the game thinking like the actors in each character roll. (this could be a movie.. anime...**#%^*)
 
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Semperaptus

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Apr 19, 2021
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This.. Is simply a motherfucking masterpiece. Finding this gem... and approaching it either requires certain "interests" or an extreme naivety.

This game... no... scratch that... the experience put forth here is... Intense.

There is an interesting (at this point I'm having to pause and edit... I literally don't possess the words to accurately explain the feeling).... Despite the fact, that I have been exceedingly proud of my articulation through life, despite my age.. and issues. This experience has been breathtaking and rendered me severely lacking in speech and wording.. for so many reasons.

((Major flags for fellow empaths/ Still worth it))

The sense of humor.... I give this a 4/5 piss yourself experience rating...

The feels... are full spectrum. I won't sugar coat this... I'm talking complete darkness, to unicorns running on rainbows as herds of halfling children play in a sunlit garden... (provided you invest yourself in the story, and possess a soul) This game... Experience will hurt. This game WILL make you cry, this game will make your ears rip ((pants too, you fellow sick fucks)) from how far your smile goes... This is not a game, it is truly an experience.

The story is magnificent, the rendering is deliciously beautiful (even if it does kind of make me feel guilty.. (( BTW guilt/ shame and regret are useless emotions, if you can, then you should learn to disregard these feelings if you're not hurting others)) , The bgm is endearing, and honestly, I had this running for days straight... for a few days it was a meditative and cathartic experience for me.

Some of the themes in the story really hit me in the heart. It resonated very deeply. Without the dumb luck, the guiding hand, and the open minds that I have encountered in my life, I would've been doomed.. due to experiences I had no choice in... I saw and felt a significant portion of myself in dear Avalon.

This experience broaches some of the darker sides of life, some of the pains that make us almost too fearful to do anything with ourselves, and in the short amount of time we have with these characters, their infectious positivity, love, philosophy and sense of humor... It disarms us.. It disarmed me.. It was one of the things that helped me feel more human... Than I have in a while.

TLDR: Thank you.. For the smiles and the tears, thank you for this strong laughter from deep in my gut, that made me worry I would wake the neighborhood. Thank you for the tears, that made me question if I should water my plants this month. and fuck you, for the erections that put holes in the wall if I turned around to quickly :p

To the team responsible for this beautifully loving, delightfully humorous, despairingly dark, and so over the top sinfully sexual experince. I have shed many tears, shared may smiles, and lost several gallons... I mean pounds... yeah pounds of weight :p love all of you in my own way.

Thank you from the bottom of my breaking bleeding heart, to the tippy top of my tumescent manhood. *kisses and hugs*
 
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Myrabelle

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Jul 15, 2021
56
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This.. Is simply a motherfucking masterpiece. Finding this gem... and approaching it either requires certain "interests" or an extreme naivety.

This game... no... scratch that... the experience put forth here is... Intense.

There is an interesting (at this point I'm having to pause and edit... I literally don't possess the words to accurately explain the feeling).... Despite the fact, that I have been exceedingly proud of my articulation through life, despite my age.. and issues. This experience has been breathtaking and rendered me severely lacking in speech and wording.. for so many reasons.

((Major flags for fellow empaths/ Still worth it))

The sense of humor.... I give this a 4/5 piss yourself experience rating...

The feels... are full spectrum. I won't sugar coat this... I'm talking complete darkness, to unicorns running on rainbows as herds of halfling children play in a sunlit garden... (provided you invest yourself in the story, and possess a soul) This game... Experience will hurt. This game WILL make you cry, this game will make your ears rip ((pants too, you fellow sick fucks)) from how far your smile goes... This is not a game, it is truly an experience.

The story is magnificent, the rendering is deliciously beautiful (even if it does kind of make me feel guilty.. (( BTW guilt/ shame and regret are useless emotions, if you can, then you should learn to disregard these feelings if you're not hurting others)) , The bgm is endearing, and honestly, I had this running for days straight... for a few days it was a meditative and cathartic experience for me.

Some of the themes in the story really hit me in the heart. It resonated very deeply. Without the dumb luck, the guiding hand, and the open minds that I have encountered in my life, I would've been doomed.. due to experiences I had no choice in... I saw and felt a significant portion of myself in dear Avalon.

This experience broaches some of the darker sides of life, some of the pains that make us almost too fearful to do anything with ourselves, and in the short amount of time we have with these characters, their infectious positivity, love, philosophy and sense of humor... It disarms us.. It disarmed me.. It was one of the things that helped me feel more human... Than I have in a while.

TLDR: Thank you.. For the smiles and the tears, thank you for this strong laughter from deep in my gut, that made me worry I would wake the neighborhood. Thank you for the tears, that made me question if I should water my plants this month. and fuck you, for the erections that put holes in the wall if I turned around to quickly :p

To the team responsible for this beautifully loving, delightfully humorous, despairingly dark, and so over the top sinfully sexual experince. I have shed many tears, shared may smiles, and lost several gallons... I mean pounds... yeah pounds of weight :p love all of you in my own way.

Thank you from the bottom of my breaking bleeding heart, to the tippy top of my tumescent manhood. *kisses and hugs*
Hey Semperaptus!

We appreciate such a glowing review. We're so glad to hear you enjoyed Avalon. There was a lot of heart and love put into it. What we wanted from Avalon was reactions exactly like this from readers. It was very much supposed to be a journey for the player to grow with the characters as they bonded with them and learned about them.

Thank you so much for playing and for your kind words! :)
 
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Myrabelle

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wait the monogamy routes - are they just with Avalon or can you get with Octavia
Hey BGRW2020,

The monogamy route will pursue an exclusive relationship between Avalon and Byron where they will be loyal to each other and not include anyone else in their sexual journey. However, you will get to see the side character (Octavia or Dallas) develop a lesbian relationship with another character in the novel.

Thank you for playing!
 
4.20 star(s) 113 Votes