Overall - I enjoyed this VN, it was enjoyable.........but having said that a few things can be improved for future works.
Suggested future improvements:
1. Fem masturbation/fingering .......... Me and I think the majority of us use our MIDDLE fingers (be it one, two, or three).
What's with this first two finger masturbation? It's stupid and deflated my anticipated arousal.
Looks like some nurse is trying to check her pulse, heartrate. Next time they can just roll-up their sleeve, instead of pulling down their undies - LOL! And now that I think about it, seems every time the male was being masturbated, there was always commentary regarding "technique, grip, grasp etc." - so why the fems poorly portrayed?
2. Why must every female be completely shaved?? At least a little Pubic Hair, here or there, once in a while is more realistic - esp when portraying Bi/Lez characters - who, in RL have not surrendered to the male's "Barbi Doll Fucktoy" fantasy.
3. Annoying dialogue (again - like in "Petal among Thorns") .......... Does EVERY character have to be from a : broken home/dysfunctional family/traumatized/raped/abandoned - and on and on. It's as if dev is making EXCUSES for their behavior and sends the message if you engage in (so-called) taboo behavior, you better have a damn good excuse. Well, (so-called)"Normal" people like adventurous sex too!
Lastly - as so many others have said her - the Renders are lovely. I know how difficult and time-consuming they were - is appreciated.
So......... going to give "Penny for Thoughts" a try......... curious about the fem POV and if it's "relatable".