kinda creppy how the autor try to make us care about the silly characters by appealing to our empathy "here, this girls was raped, do care!" if this is suppose to be a porn game.. is a bad one (cause there is no porn ON IT!) if its a novel, then is worst, its always trying to make "cheesy comments" his relief comedy, wich donst really help cause there is nothing to be reliefs off, is all bland, and then the autor try to make all the "rape stuff" feel like this is a more realistic game , while introducing characters like Octavia and Penny? what are those? miss "i can deal with everything cause i have 50 years of training even dou i look like 18 " come on! xD 80 min into the reading an i keep waiting for something to happen, but is all teasing "oh, we are soo perfect, but remember we are broken, so.. do care!" and is even bad teasing... i dont even got a boner during those 80 min xD sad dou, i really liked the first 20 min, and i liked that the MC wasnt a skinny, short, baby face guy (duno why every other male MC is like that)... but i guess the lack has to be somewhere else. The autor should stop being so indesicive dou, are u writing a porn game? or a novel? if u "limbo" for too long u get this game. BUT, for just 4 months of work, i guess its fine.
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You don't have to care about the characters if you don't want to. But if you're not reading a VN for the characters and plot, and you're only here for the sex, I recommend Pornhub.
I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the comedy. It's not for everyone. There are a lot of cheesy jokes.
Penny is a very complex character with a compelling background. Don't be so quick to make assumptions about her. Also, you didn't think she was kind of fun to watch? Not even a little? No enjoyment at all??
It seems like you want a game that is just one sex scene after another. This certainly wouldn't be for you then. And I'm truly sorry you felt nothing for the characters. I tried to write them to be interesting. It is a slow burn type of game so we'll be getting into the sexy content starting on the next release. But it's still not going to be just a complete fuckfest.
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Lockheart , A quite enjoyable update. It really sets the stage in the variety of paths for what's to come. I am really looking forward to seeing what is next.
Xianne is so cute. You really have a knack for making cute, unique characters. If you don't mind me asking, how do you do it? Do you find a asset that you like that looks a little similar to what you have in mind and move the sliders around until you get something you like, or do you draw or look for a photo somewhere and try to match it? However, you do it, great job. Your characters are all quite stunning and really don't look like any of the other common characters we see here in other VNs. They set your VNs (I'm including Mirabelle) apart, and gives them a unique style.
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Xianne is so cute. You really have a knack for making cute, unique characters. If you don't mind me asking, how do you do it? Do you find a asset that you like that looks a little similar to what you have in mind and move the sliders around until you get something you like, or do you draw or look for a photo somewhere and try to match it? However, you do it, great job. Your characters are all quite stunning and really don't look like any of the other common characters we see here in other VNs. They set your VNs (I'm including Mirabelle) apart, and gives them a unique style.
Bahaha. I don't know what I was thinking with Pteri, I just wanted something unique. I tried to make him look as... Umm, innocent? As possible? Haha. I was a little worried what peoples reactions were going to be but it seems positive so far. Maybe we'll see more of Pteri.(In Hushed Tone) Oh ladies and gentlemen what were seeing today is the rare winged pink pussy pounder, so majestic,so large,so Wet? I'am told they also come in Black.
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What a let down, like the art work but a pink bat like dong, OHmay did this story take a dead end turn. Well here is to hoping v0.6 will be much better.
So, some of the Artists that make these characters are just so insanely talented, you really don't have to mess around with some of these characters much for them to look absolutely amazing. Myrabelle, Avalon and Xianne were models I instantly fell in love with when I saw them. I scooped them right up. I morphed Avalon a good bit to make certain aspects of her more pronounced; biggers eyes, larger breasts and more athletically toned. Once I added a little eyeliner, it really made her pop.
Myrabelle is virtually the exact same as the way I downloaded her. She was just too perfect to mess with. I adore everything about her.
Xianne was tricky because she's a Demon. So I had to dramatically change her appearance to reflect that. And then when she's transformed human, she's very close to the way I got her. But her hair is really what makes her amazing. And I may have maxed out her breast size. Ahaha.
But Dallas on the other hand is very custom. I added freckles, a ton of toning, I combined two main morphs to her. She's probably the most custom.
I actually finished Octavia's date with Byron. It's very Beauty and the Beast and the location is perfect. You'll love it.
Thanks for the support, Smarmint!
Yeah, if you just skip everything for the sex scenes, it's going to be pretty disappointing. I haven't focused heavily on the sex scenes yet because I'm trying to build the characters first. It's sexier that way.
And yes, that silly bat dong was weird, right?? Dammit, Xianne! I can't believe she snuck that in. I'll have to reprimand her for this transgression! I promise, Jonah, I will spank her right proper!
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Penny is the shit!!! we need a "The Adventures of Penny" VN..
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maybe the polyamory will lead to polygamy...I suspect that the word you were wanting to use in the description is "Polyamory", not "Polygamy". These are not the same thing. You might want to fix that.
I have not enjoyed this update. Not have finished yet, and the mere fact that I have stoped playing it´s a bad sign.
REason?. Too much Penny. I have enjoyed Penny as a comic relief, but in this update she takes too much protagonism for my taste.
REason?. Too much Penny. I have enjoyed Penny as a comic relief, but in this update she takes too much protagonism for my taste.
Yes, we had Morning, Afternoon and Night. You're welcome to wait for the entire Act to finish but because there are four paths now, there's actually a lot more content than it might seem at first. It could take eight to twelve weeks to finish an entire Act now but I don't want you guys to have to wait that long. At the very least, the releases let you know I'm still working hard!