VN Ren'Py Completed Avalon [v8.2] [Lockheart]

[Lockheart]

I have not enjoyed this update. Not have finished yet, and the mere fact that I have stoped playing it´s a bad sign.

REason?. Too much Penny. I have enjoyed Penny as a comic relief, but in this update she takes too much protagonism for my taste.

This is a Penny heavy Act for several reasons. I'm sure sad to hear you don't like her. I have so much fun working with her. She plays a big part in the physical offensive against those who caused Byron's and Avalon's trauma. She helps them put to rest their past, while Dallas and Octavia are more supportive in a present and future capacity. A big theme for Avalon is the necessity for support from friends and family when overcoming traumatic experiences.

Penny is also really friggin' cute!

 

[Badboll]

music too loud and it's not tied to the music slider. Blasted my eardrums out, but the music after the entry into dr yu's therapy session is tied to the music slider.
Must have missed it for the first one then.
It's still too loud though.

 

[Lockheart]

music too loud and it's not tied to the music slider. Blasted my eardrums out, but the music after the entry into dr yu's therapy session is tied to the music slider.
Must have missed it for the first one then.
It's still too loud though.

Sorry about that. I haven't had that complaint before. Perhaps its a corrupt download?

 

[Boneprone]

This is a Penny heavy Act for several reasons. I'm sure sad to hear you don't like her. I have so much fun working with her. She plays a big part in the physical offensive against those who caused Byron's and Avalon's trauma. She helps them put to rest their past, while Dallas and Octavia are more supportive in a present and future capacity. A big theme for Avalon is the necessity for support from friends and family when overcoming traumatic experiences.

Penny is also really friggin' cute!

I never looked at Penny as "comic relief"..its pretty clear shes a key player in this story,which was made even more clear with her last visit (anus taser was f'n funny AF!)..Some people just want a quick fap VN,they dont appreciate character building or humor..Fuck um..do you..you're shit is on point,like tv show quality(minus the semi incest..lol)

 

[BoltonGuy35]

I enjoyed this VN and it's my first ever download of the game. The story is difficult to read yes but makes me want to protect the niece even more. Progression of the love between the mc and niece did feel a little bit rushed when they realise they each have feelings for one and other within 3 days but glad that they are building up to a sexual relationship by taking things slow especially after what she has been through, the jokes are just well ermm yeh! lol Not going to be a lot of content for me render or animation wise as it's a monogamous relationship all the way for me but still enjoyed the story and can't wait for the next update.

 

[Motoko Kusanagi]

Sucks having multiple playthroughs and your saves dont work anymore.

 

[Lockheart]

I enjoyed this VN and it's my first ever download of the game. The story is difficult to read yes but makes me want to protect the niece even more. Progression of the love between the mc and niece did feel rushed I will admit and the jokes are just well ermm yeh! lol Not going to be a lot of content for me render or animation wise as it's a monogamous relationship all the way for me but still enjoyed the story and can't wait for the next update.

The monogamy paths have content later but I’m trying to give them more love moving forward. It’s a tricky beast because it’s a slower burn. But I am giving them love in the next update! A lot of love! I promise.

 

[Lockheart]

Sucks having multiple playthroughs and your saves dont work anymore.

What’s wrong with your saves? I plan to do a more official release on Tuesday with some minor adjustments that should fix some of the saving issues. Sorry!

 

[BoltonGuy35]

The monogamy paths have content later but I’m trying to give them more love moving forward. It’s a tricky beast because it’s a slower burn. But I am giving them love in the next update! A lot of love! I promise.

Can't wait for it and thank you for a great story

 

[Motoko Kusanagi]

What’s wrong with your saves? I plan to do a more official release on Tuesday with some minor adjustments that should fix some of the saving issues. Sorry!

Its all good, anything from the last version seemed to crash as others had the indicated. Decided to just dump the whole save folder , going to start fresh again. Wont stop me from not playing this game.

 

[Landerk]

Hey Lockheart, Just wanted to thank you for the game, Avalon is very pretty, Dallas is a total bombshell. I love the Humor in the game, Byron cracks me up. Want to see more of the Circle game, that's awesome, love watching the digs between Byron and Dallas.

 

[bolondro2]

This is a Penny heavy Act for several reasons. I'm sure sad to hear you don't like her. I have so much fun working with her. She plays a big part in the physical offensive against those who caused Byron's and Avalon's trauma. She helps them put to rest their past, while Dallas and Octavia are more supportive in a present and future capacity. A big theme for Avalon is the necessity for support from friends and family when overcoming traumatic experiences.

Penny is also really friggin' cute!

First of all, thanks for answer my post. That´s really apreciated.

It´s may be just a matter of tastes. I dislike superhero/ninja style stuff, and the story of the game cames to me, in the first part at least, as some kind of "common people story". And I enjoyed it.

The first scene with Penny was great. Ok, a private eye, that compensate her small size being really competent and using the advantage that people understimate her. And overcompensate it being daredevil, overcharged and boastfull. I buy the character concept. And I like the end of the scene, when Byron pinch the bubble of her story.

But I find that, as the story progress, she becomes more daredevil, more overcharged. More armor plot. More superhero style. And that, for me, breaks the inmersion and the suspension of disbelive. I would, definetively, enjoy more a toned down version of her. More human capable instead of ninja capable. More smart that acrobatic.

Nothing wrong with it. Just not my cup of tea. You can not write for everyone tastes.

 

[Rock&Rule]

Once again the Merc and Lance banter was just good stuff. I can't wait to see how the nights go between all of them in the next update.

Also if I have dreams of flying pink cornish game hen penis monsters I know where to send my therapy bill.

 

[DerMelz]

Please ignore those whining Lads. Your Game is awesome. Stay Like you used to be. Sure its nice to witness Action between some Chars but it feels for myself Like the first Feelings from this Sensation of a Novel arent complete there anymore. I think you let yourself corrupt too much from some overcritic Users. If you ask me, Go at your own Pace and make the Relationship between those three again like it was at first. Dont rush Things too much. I love your Chars really much. My best Wishes

 

[hellkary]

You don't have to care about the characters if you don't want to. But if you're not reading a VN for the characters and plot, and you're only here for the sex, I recommend Pornhub.

did i say something about me not caring about the characters?

I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the comedy. It's not for everyone. There are a lot of cheesy jokes.

i just pointed out that the cheesy jokes was ur only source of comedy, and that many times it came in moments where it was not needed, i did never make a comment about it being bad, did i?

Penny is a very complex character with a compelling background. Don't be so quick to make assumptions about her. Also, you didn't think she was kind of fun to watch? Not even a little? No enjoyment at all??

i think that my comment was more in the "everything about the game feels real why this 2 characters look so out of place" did i say something about those characters being not complex ( i guess?) or something?

It seems like you want a game that is just one sex scene after another. This certainly wouldn't be for you then. And I'm truly sorry you felt nothing for the characters. I tried to write them to be interesting. It is a slow burn type of game so we'll be getting into the sexy content starting on the next release. But it's still not going to be just a complete fuckfest.

i want a game with the tag of "porn" to have... u know... porn, i dont think im being irrational here... i did put a big "BUT" in the end dou... but i guess people will read whatever they want...and low burn donst mean u have to wait 1 year or 2 to make a sex scene, u have to "low burn" the relationship part, not the sex, maybe u think ur characters cant have sex without love. wtv.

Good luck with ur project.

 

[Belnick]

saves from last version seem to have problems, unless it was the renaming character that is causing it?
lots of grey screen to press ignore on
have not tried to not rename and see if it works better

 

[Lockheart]

saves from last version seem to have problems, unless it was the renaming character that is causing it?
lots of grey screen to press ignore on
have not tried to not rename and see if it works better

I have heard that there have been problems with old saves this update. I'm going to try to put out an update today or tomorrow to try to combat some of the issues. Unfortunately since it's still in development, there's still always a chance saves might not load correctly. I sure am sorry about that!

 

[Shagrynn]

The writing is fantastic and the way he does the MC facial animations you can hear the tone of his voice by looking at his face

 

[Cruger]

I just want to say Thank You Lockheart .....

Great game.. love the characters, love the the relationship between MC and Dallas, so funny, keep it up Lockhart, really great writing and always love when lots of comedy is thrown in ... this has become my new fav.

 

[Belnick]

I have heard that there have been problems with old saves this update. I'm going to try to put out an update today or tomorrow to try to combat some of the issues. Unfortunately since it's still in development, there's still always a chance saves might not load correctly. I sure am sorry about that!

it is no problem, it was not like there was a sex scene that was missing because of the grey screens?
I still got to the end of update message