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Uhh.... Well I was going to ask what the NTR is in this game and if you can avoid it but... Judging by the last few comments maybe this isnt the game for me if I dislike NTR?
It's basically nothing, a little lesbian scene while you watch, and immediately get some action. It can barely be called NTR.
- May 19, 2018
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Oh, so not a dude trying to steal you're girl? Then i'll download and check it out.
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Not at all, it's just a lesbian scene, but if you don't like it you can avoid it
I actually gave this game a look because I had some people groaning about NTR and I wanted to kinda "screen it" for them to assure them (or warn them) about it.
If the scene with the twins and Raika is what's considered "NTR" - I hardly think that's anything at all. It feels like that was just the twins getting Raika riled up just to fuck the MC, anyway.
If the scene with the twins and Raika is what's considered "NTR" - I hardly think that's anything at all. It feels like that was just the twins getting Raika riled up just to fuck the MC, anyway.
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F95: NTR: Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.
I suppose it could be either M/F as the someone but I don't think I have seen anything like that.
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The Good: So far the story is holding my interest, and characters backgrounds and motivations are more complex than usual for the genre.
The Critiques:I applaud you for attempting to add animations. They are crude but you can always improve on them. Many of the scenes would benefit from better lighting and the overall visual quality is only passable or too grainy. I don't know if this is from lack of experience or a low end PC. Again with time these can improve.
The Ugly:
1) Don't get lost in the whole NTR/ non NTR debate. You will never please everyone, and attempting to do so will only lead to frustration. Think about what they are actually saying, "If you don't do the game my way, I won't pirate it any more." Okay cool.
2) Tell your story you way. If you want to add choices on content shown, that's great/ If you don't, those that don't like it can get their jollies somewhere else. I've seen too many potentially good games succumb to the slings and arrows cast here. Work on improving the overall aesthetic quality and story and you will do fine. Show you can provide regular updates: weekly, bi weekly, monthly etc. However you can fit it in, just try to be consistent.
The Critiques:I applaud you for attempting to add animations. They are crude but you can always improve on them. Many of the scenes would benefit from better lighting and the overall visual quality is only passable or too grainy. I don't know if this is from lack of experience or a low end PC. Again with time these can improve.
The Ugly:
1) Don't get lost in the whole NTR/ non NTR debate. You will never please everyone, and attempting to do so will only lead to frustration. Think about what they are actually saying, "If you don't do the game my way, I won't pirate it any more." Okay cool.
2) Tell your story you way. If you want to add choices on content shown, that's great/ If you don't, those that don't like it can get their jollies somewhere else. I've seen too many potentially good games succumb to the slings and arrows cast here. Work on improving the overall aesthetic quality and story and you will do fine. Show you can provide regular updates: weekly, bi weekly, monthly etc. However you can fit it in, just try to be consistent.
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Nice update, and good job with wrapping things up for the first chapter. I also greatly appreciate the warning before (1) peeking on Jen or not; and (2) your answers to a series of questions she asks. It's at least the difference between whether the MC has sex with her in the pool and whether she shoots Levi or not. I've taken at least two routes, since there might be small variants with other choices as well: Raika isn't a LI but Jen is, and Jen is a LI but Raika is not. I'm looking forward to seeing how those choices play out later in the game. You're doing well, I think; keep developing the game according to your vision.
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Okay the story is actually really good. The ending was enough to get me a bit hopeful for the next chapter. The English and sentence structure could use a lot of work, but it's not so bad to the point where I would drop the game. The renders seem grainy at points, but again that's not a deal breaker for me. If you could get someone to help you out with your English that would work wonders. Nice game, dev.
The NTR scene (yes I do consider lesbian activity to be NTR. Tho it's less annoying when it's a woman instead of a man) kinda pissed me off, but that's mostly because I hate losing fights even in games lol. Though what struck me as weird was the immediate sex afterwards. It just seemed like the dev was tryna add sex so people wouldn't complain. But eh it wasn't too bad
The NTR scene (yes I do consider lesbian activity to be NTR. Tho it's less annoying when it's a woman instead of a man) kinda pissed me off, but that's mostly because I hate losing fights even in games lol. Though what struck me as weird was the immediate sex afterwards. It just seemed like the dev was tryna add sex so people wouldn't complain. But eh it wasn't too bad
- Jun 19, 2020
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Great to hear and as for getting our asses kicked that's fine, some fights you win and some you lose
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Two girls tie you up and force you to watch them fuck your wife like a cuck is not NTR? Just because they are girls doesn't mean it's not NTR
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It's not just a "lesbian scene" two girls tie you up and force you to watch them fuck your girl.
It's no longer a problem because you can choose to avoid it and it does not happen at all so you are good to go
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