VN Ren'Py Abandoned Balance of the Force [v0.1.9.4] [Doubblenow]

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Overview:
The game will take you on a fantastic journey playing a male human, who is trying to survive while the entire galaxy seems to start burning in the flames of a civil war. Will you try to join the newly formed underground or rather work towards clearing your name in the ranks of the legal government? Or maybe it won't be anything of the above and you try to make your own way?
Are you pragmatic?
Or do you stand for your ideals, disregarding the possible consequences for you, and maybe anybody close to you?​

Thread Updated: 2020-03-13
Release Date: 2020-03-12
Developer: Doubblenow

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Version: 0.1.9.4
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English
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[LewdTheLolis]

another Star Wars Ren'py game, this one does look good though, it says its a tech demo? so how much content is there so far?

 

[doubblenow]

Currently it is just the Intro, with a few starting scenes.
Please be patient with me, this is my first game.
I gladly will take any and all constructive feedback and if possible try to incorporate it in my concept.

 

[Ennoch]

Naaah, we are impatient mouthy rowdy bunch in serious need of some SW lewds after all the fakes! Expect demanding, emotionally unbalanced ramblings Fitting i'd say, considering the title. We'll see if this brings Balance or not

 

[doubblenow]

Through passion I gain focus

 

[doubblenow]

And yes I know, the second story crawl is way too fast ... got to work on that too

 

[LewdTheLolis]

Currently it is just the Intro, with a few starting scenes.
Please be patient with me, this is my first game.
I gladly will take any and all constructive feedback and if possible try to incorporate it in my concept.

no I understand, mosty asking cause if this gets put up there will always be that one person whining about how there's nothing to this game so far and complaining about why it was even added to the site, so just be prepared for that. Lots of people don't understand what demos are or that versions 0.1 usually mean initial release. Although I'm always up for some SW lewds so best of luck, hopefully this goes great

 

[DawnCry]

Well for now I haven't seen something special, I mean the images aren't bad but for now... it's bare bones, even more didn't see any stat or something like that and it seems like a visual novel, that goes into what I find a bit boring. I prefer freedom over a pure visual novel.

But well, it kind of left me feeling quite "neutral", perhaps it is because it is too little to evaluate,

 

[playb0y44]

doubblenow do you want me to create a game thread of this ?

 

[doubblenow]

doubblenow do you want me to create a game thread of this ?

That would be nice.

 

[り乇ﾶの刀 ズﾉ刀ム 尺ﾑ刀ᄃ乇]

Edited and moved.

 

[RoadWulf]

Giving it a try since pretty much all the other Star Wars parodies on here suck dick, and not in the good way.

 

[Methos23]

Through passion I gain focus

There is no passion, there is serenity

 

[Endrju]

i must say im intrigued, didn't test the game yet but there is definitely to few of SW representatives in VN genre. im thinking about it myself for very long time now so who knows maybe we will be neighbours
from what i see though we are not taking same approach so that's a release
i wish you much of support and definitely find yourself a proofreader, that will help a lot

 

[doubblenow]

There is no passion, there is serenity

Yeah, but I have to admit,
doing a adult game where the protagonist has no passion issues, might get boring in the end

 

[Methos23]

Yeah, but I have to admit,
doing a adult game where the protagonist has no passion issues, might get boring in the end

Not if he is Yoda

 

[Zirael Q]

i must say im intrigued, didn't test the game yet but there is definitely to few of SW representatives in VN genre. im thinking about it myself for very long time now so who knows maybe we will be neighbours
from what i see though we are not taking same approach so that's a release
i wish you much of support and definitely find yourself a proofreader, that will help a lot

more Star Wars games, better. do it mate, definitely do it

 

[RoadWulf]

Alright so:
I like the fact that it's original story, that isn't just you co-opting some main character. That's a definite plus. The opening could use some more rendered screens, it feels like there should be some actual combat shown with the troopers. Even just freeze framing some blaster bolts mid air while our character hides or fires back. You also really need to do more scenes when telling his backstory, the single shot from space isn't enough when you start talking about characters. I got done reading through it and thought "I'm never going to remember these names because I don't have any faces to associate them with.

I'll give you a 3 of 5 for now.

Things that I hope to see:
Evolving story based on choices
Some form of combat and force power use that's actually useful, not just "Mind Trick Seduction" or something stupid like that.
Original antagonists.
Some of the main cast appearing would be fine, so long as they aren't the central focus and you don't devolve into something like seducing Rey since that would break her character.

 

[MLBnoob]

Nice to see you found a name for the game thats not oozing of sex.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

All I want to know is if I can become a Sith.