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darth vader has big robo balls
Currently it is just the Intro, with a few starting scenes.
Please be patient with me, this is my first game.
I gladly will take any and all constructive feedback and if possible try to incorporate it in my concept.
you forgot Force Choke out your pregnant baby mammaYou need to hear the tragedy of Darth plagueis the wise and cut someone hand and kill younglings Jedi masters separatist fight your old master get your limbs cut off and fall in lava and wait for the medical capsule and become half machine now you are a sith this is what Anakin did to become a sith can you do it?
Touche.Machines can't have sex? Of course they can!
Stupid youtube non-embedable videos.
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-The wall of text when describing what happened before was way too fast, and the lead scene kinda ended abruptly (also you can't pause it so you have to re watch it if you click at all)
-Maybe show some visual effects when mc is using his powers since him talking to himself for a while and staring at stairs was a little off
-Character portraits next to dialogue might be something to mess with, though it isn't too important as long as we know the characters and who is talking.
Thank you all for the warm welcome and constructive criticism.Ok i took out my notebook of fun adventures and looked into the game...
First of all i already like the feel of the game, you can almost taste the potential...
- You need a proofreader ASAP
- Definitely more renders, more "shades of one colour" if you catch my drift, so you wont sit through just one render and tons of text, it will be more interesting to add couple more angles and maybe some scenes where characters will be seen as moving living creatures, like normal ppl do
- I like the visuals already, there are solid and later when lightsaber's come to play it surely will get better
- Music top notch but i hope for more classics obviously
- oh and video sample with the story was to fast, maybe try to tight it up, so you wont give to much but there will be enough to get ppl interested
tight and clean, i liked it. definitely need more of that. keep it coming
Yeah, Mission Vao, now that was one hell of great character design.Sadly isn't Old Republic but has potential. Just need some more races like Miraluka and Rattataki.
And some Missions Vao too if you understand what i'm saying ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
and my answer is still....you forgot Force Choke out your pregnant baby mamma
the Handmaiden was a nice tease. I would fuck her insane, if given the chance.Yeah, Mission Vao, now that was one hell of great character design.
Visas Marr was great, but not comparable to Mission.