galadh

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Nov 21, 2017
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Wow. What an awefull "game". Horrible navigation, nothing to do. action icons you have to guess what they are for. A "story" thats stupid as hell.

.... :(
"awefull" ?

Horrible spelling. Misleading, quite. Many thank you much.

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See what I am talking about? :)
 

Trasher2018

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Aug 21, 2018
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"awefull" ?

Horrible spelling. Misleading, quite. Many thank you much.

^^
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See what I am talking about? :)
My bad :( - but I am not a native englisch speaker ... and in the end you still understand what I want to say. ;)

and ...

awefull ( awefull, awefull)

  1. Obsolete form of .
:tf:
 

galadh

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Nov 21, 2017
49
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My bad :( - but I am not a native englisch speaker ... and in the end you still understand what I want to say. ;)

and ...



:tf:
Yeah, I think the message went through alright :closedeyesmile: My bad, Trasher2018. It's just that I am obsessed with spellings :evilsmile: or... misspellings? :eek:penedeyewink:

And MyBad_2 = I honestly wasn't aware of the older version of the spelling :frown: Which is totally on me.
 

galadh

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Nov 21, 2017
49
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Anyhow,

Not to make this whole situation (regarding the translation) go sideways:

I would honestly not like it when I myself was sitting in the dev's chair and watch / read all this messages rumbling on over and over and over about how my version of Spanglish is...

So I would actually propose openly: I would commit myself to go through the whole text (narration + dialogues) of this otherwise beautifully written and designed and graphically presented game... should the author(s) accept. I hope, that I will be up to the task and just maybe when I am through I will validate and put Mr Google to a rest forever :)

It would be a ***SHAME*** for the author to abandon this promising project now due to all this negative comments and feedback. Especially, when the story line is this original and unprecedented as here.

Best regards,
 
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Jackbite

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Jan 2, 2018
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I agree, The translation is not up to par, But this Game is awesome, The Models are probably some of the best i've seen in any game! Animation are top notch, Most of Costumes are original,
So if the spelling is all that's at fault, Then i can live with it...
 

Double Shadow

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Jul 6, 2018
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Just got the mansion.
Why is it totally empty? Where are all my girls!?

Any idea?

(the three doors whre i guess they should stay are permanently closed and i never found them anywhere in the house or yard)
 

adicted

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Apr 27, 2017
74
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I cannot seem to increase affection with Karina. Is there a trigger to start her?
you need to spam "talk" at the school. If you had failed exams you need to recover because you have negative affection. So spam "talk" untill you can change to "flirt" and then change to "sport". Thats what i did and it worked. You can go back if you see you lose affection from flirt and try talk again till you have enough affection.
Go forth!
 

adicted

Newbie
Apr 27, 2017
74
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Just got the mansion.
Why is it totally empty? Where are all my girls!?

Any idea?

(the three doors whre i guess they should stay are permanently closed and i never found them anywhere in the house or yard)
the mansion is the death of the Sasha, Carol, Elena. You cant interact with this girls anymore in mansion. You will have some scenes with Elena and Paula but thats all. Carol and Sasha dont apear at the mansion beside the brekfest.
New characters that can interact at mansion are
Karina - to go to movies
Paula - going to park with Elena at random days
Alexis - Sunday. Saturday at the pool
If i miss something please reply
 

Firebane

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Feb 3, 2017
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Yeah, while there are events in the code for the girls at the mansion, something prevents them from happening. I don't really know Ren'py that well, and my Spanish hasn't been used in about 20 years, so I haven't tried to figure out how they trigger.
 

XKimky

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Jul 23, 2017
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Can't get the shop to appear -.-

Anyone know if I can get the camping set by the renpy console and if yes with what command ?
 

Hermit76

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Apr 15, 2018
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Anyhow,

Not to make this whole situation (regarding the translation) go sideways:

I would honestly not like it when I myself was sitting in the dev's chair and watch / read all this messages rumbling on over and over and over about how my version of Spanglish is...

So I would actually propose openly: I would commit myself to go through the whole text (narration + dialogues) of this otherwise beautifully written and designed and graphically presented game... should the author(s) accept. I hope, that I will be up to the task and just maybe when I am through I will validate and put Mr Google to a rest forever :)

It would be a ***SHAME*** for the author to abandon this promising project now due to all this negative comments and feedback. Especially, when the story line is this original and unprecedented as here.

Best regards,
I mostly agree. I also like this game A LOT! But the English is to terrible that I myself would not dare to make a better translation, because most of the times I am not really sure what the developer wants to say. And these tricky sentences are those that need to be improved. The simply imperfect ones aren't too bad, only the really bad ones are...
 
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Cesarbr

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May 8, 2018
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Can someone help me? In the Elena quest, there is no option to go with her to Rehab, she sits on the couch talking about Sophie only. Sorry for bad English. Thank's!
 

Firebane

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You may not be quite far enough. If Miranda is your lover before it starts, it takes about a week before the rehab begins. If Miranda is not your lover, it takes 2-3 before it starts.
 
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Headshunter

Newbie
Dec 23, 2017
61
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I found this game just a few days back.
I have played it for two days and I have to say...this game is AWESOME in every sense of the word, it is, in my honest opinion the most undervalued game in this forum, to me, it knocks milfy city, superpowered and most others out of the competition.
Pros:
1-great looking characters: The girls look beyond great, even textures are beyond belief (just look at the Alexia pool scene, you can literally see the pores and detail of her butt)
2-interesting setting: the sole idea of an island full of beauties ready to be conquered
3- sex scenes: although most scenes are pretty standard, the angles and motions look incredible ( like Paula's sideview scene in the photo studio, you could easily believe it's not CG, looks almost natural.
Diversity: every different flavor of girls, from thick (like Olivia or Miranda) to thin (Carol or Sophie) even Loli at some point (Anaís or the dolls)

Cons:
Translation: I have played in both Eng and Spanish versions (i speak both fluently) and I have to say that Eng version is far worse, but Spanish version is just slightly less flawed, I offer to help with both versions, as a game this good deserves to be as perfect as possible.
Navigation: there is just too much time wasted in that, and navigation in the mansion is just too damn confusing, even if you get somewhat acostumed to it.
Dialog: even if the errors in translation are corrected the dirty talk from the girls is quite repetitive almost all day the same things just in different order or with slight variations, a wider variety would improve the unique feeling from each girl.
Bugs and severed paths: most scenes in the latter part of the game can potentially be lost, like Olivia or Karina's mom.

The only suggestions I could make would be to improve of what is already there, like.
Pregnancy actual implementation:
All the girls, without missing a single one at some point say something about pregnancy, but up to this point, not a single one has gotten pregnant, one would think the MC is sterile at this point, later you can even send your daughters back from the future to add a nice incest tag to the collection
Replayability:most scenes are so cool, that is a shame you only get more than half just once (like Alexia's news station scene) if you can make the one time scenes available for replay, the replay value would be at least twice as much as it is now.
Apartment: ATM you discard the place once you get the mansion, I see no point of closing a perfectly good location specially since it kills most of Elena's replayable scenes, just treat it as a secondary location not entirely subdued girls (like a half way point between seduction and complete submission, like a place for prospect wifes or wifes in training.
 
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