VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Ep.1 P1] [The Typist]

[juneba]

Yeah I was upset with the gun scene. I mean it could still end up being good, but it was so out of nowhere, didn't make any sense.

 

[Dependable_223]

Regarding the Love route =
My thinking is that after yelling at Jason, he stops it and either Jason gets beat up or forced to leave. Then another gal could come onto someone else and they find out their drinks were "altered" or sth. That could explain EVERYTHING and offer an opportunity because some of the substance was left behind.

About the Lust route =
Why did the mc change his mind and pull a gun on them? That has to be answered.
Second, can we "reword" Daryl's scene in the hospital where instead of him blackmailing her, she willing does this out of guilt? At worst, he could say "Why should you even be here? You are the reason he shot me! Either get out or make it count!" And she'd be all over him. In this case, Claire would consider her relationship with the MC to be over. Or she could be conflicted. That would set up the MC having to figure out how to get her back.

As for Daryl i would rather the mc stop him before he is even able to enter the house i mean how the hell did he enter is there no door to stop people from wondering in unanounced ? if i have house like that i would have security guards preventing theft and all that. but it is just a game.

 

[BeardedJack]

I have to say i had high hopes for this game but.... All this wait for the update and this is the result? Tbh you managed to mess up every path, and im one of those who dont mind ntr and that actually wants swinging in the love path, where mc shares her with others but without feelings, without being cucked, without her stop enjoying the regular sex with mc. This game cannot have a regular love path because it lacks the depth in both plot and dialogs, but now tbh all the paths are just hilarious, zero plausibility. I feel that with this 3rd chapter it wont even be possible to get the game back in track, at this point just think about priorities. I understand that you like to have cool pictures of landscapes and some "filler dialogs" but for next updates try to focus on whats really important: plot, dialogs depth and lewd scenes... Forget all the other crap cause you cant take months for un update like this, its just surreal. Remember that you can just add details later on when the story is fully developed.

 

[Yamakasi20]

that moment when you play ntr route and dont get ntr... :feelsbadman:

edit: if i go ntr route, and i find out after 3 updates (dunno how many months) that the ntr route is on the love route... than I have the right to be pissed.

So yeah, dev, the bashing you get now is... Because we loved her

 

[Nathan Young]

This is a tesco version of Acting Lessons O M E G A L U L

 

[Buffalo Fred]

Yeah I'm going to join the choir of people saying this game is a let down. I usually don't complain about NTR in a game that warns against it in advance because well - I tend to stay clear of them.
But this game claims a non-NTR path - except the entire path still feels like you're playing this fool that can't please his girl, hell you even have another guy fingering her.

For anyone who dislikes NTR: Stay clear of this game, even the supposed clean path has a wrong taste to it.

 

[Deleted member 15555]

I myself have been keeping an eye on this game since the initial release, and I played the first release. It's really the AVOIDABLE NTR, the promise of that that kept my interest to wanting to play this further. But reading comments after update pretty much made me go "Nope!". I'm not a Netorare advocate, in my play-through I want none of that, or at least it MUST be avoidable/optional. And now this update I hear about Jenni getting some sort of action with some random dude, despite the fact that Jenni poured her heart out and confessed her feelings she has for MC, and MC himself has feelings for her, yadi yada, even on Love path, soooo, doesn't sound like optional NTR to me, sounds like no matter what turn you make, somewhere you'll get slapped in the face with NTR, no matter how hard you avoid it, sounds forced to me, and I don't deal with forced nor surprise NTR.

I understand, the game for the most part focuses on NTR, but if avoidable NTR is promised, then I for one expect that promise kept, forced and surprise Natorare is so angering, I rather know from the very start if something I don't like is going to be forced on me, so that I know to stay away.

EDIT: The reason why I kept my eyes on the game and checked the comments after each update was because I hope the NTR really is avoidable and that you won't be slapped in the face with it regardless the route you take, I like the models a lot, especially Jenni, but the fiancee too, guess I just keep hoping that for a person that doesn't like NTR can play this game too, but I'm kind of let down after each update, reading the comments.

it seems nowadays some people dont really understand what "ntr avoidable" means..... for me that is not seeing a potential lover get fucked by some dude, i can understand that we can get all the girls but dont throw us that shit in our faces if this is supposed to be avoidable. Im passing on this game from now on and i think any who dont like ntr should do the same. I agree completely with your comment and cant have said it better myself.

 

[numanumani]

Jeez... Seems like the dev managed to piss off his entire fan base, the NTR and the non NTR (well the promise of non NTR path) crowd equally, that's quite an accomplishment... Bravo...

Certainly not the entire fanbase. I was laughing out loud at the end.
It's just a game.

 

[BigBabs69]

i don't think the pool scene was really ntr,more like a test of who do you like more.Do you do stuff with your half naked girlfriend or do you push her aside to stop a drunk jenni from getting her lil cherry popped,which would upset claire cause you basically just said you care more about jenni than her.This would most likely start your relationship with jenni or if you don't stop it,begin her start to moving on from being friendzoned.As it said at the end of the update,you can't have both,so i don't really think it's ntr so much as just a choice of who you want gf or sweet virgin girl.Although i guess people who wanted both could consider it ntr...since at the end of the update it says you can't have both

 

[Kame-Sennin]

As with usual NTR stuff, people want to complain and cry instead of just avoiding it all together. You don't see me in ISIS forums giving them political views. I swear, some people just love to be negative.

Anyhow, I applaud the direction this guy is going in. Gotta say, he's taking a chance doing some stuff and I admire that. Keep up the good work, and no game is for everyone, so ignore the haters.

It's not the NTR, in fact I don't want to avoid NTR, the thing that I want to avoid is blackmail and rape. I thought that the NTR in this game will be consensual, that's disappointing.

 

[Cpt.Briggs]

Does anyone have a same error like this?

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Does anyone know how to fix it, please? Went through the thread, but could not find a solution :/

Edit: So, I found out what is causing it. If you go full lust choises, BUT do not look at the black guy in gym and not having a dream, then it causes error. Otherwise game continues normally.

 

[numanumani]

Does anyone have a same error like this?

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Does anyone know how to fix it, please? Went through the thread, but could not find a solution :/

Edit: So, I found out what is causing it. If you go full lust choises, BUT do not look at the black guy in gym and not having a dream, then it causes error. Otherwise game continues normally.

It was discussed three pages back but good that you found a way past it yourself.

 

[Cpt.Briggs]

It was discussed three pages back but good that you found a way past it yourself.

I apologize, I skimmed through posts in order to avoid spoilers and also unintentionally the solution too.

 

[numanumani]

I apologize, I skimmed through posts in order to avoid spoilers and also unintentionally the solution too.

No worries, don't forget there's also a search function.
Searching for something specific like "chapter1love" would have lead you to others posting about the problem.

 

[MrJ]

What the...?!

I think the game has all the potential in the world. The new girls, Krystal (BB anybody?!) and mom, look very hot. I was really looking forward to the Halloween Party. Some groping, some cheating, some fucki fucki

But then the MC pulls out a gun and is shooting the black dude? And the scene in the hospital?
What the hell?
Man, the party scene had so much potential. Getting some of Krystals Pussy. Or some good NTR.
But this was a big letdown.

Hopefully, the dev get things right in the future. Maybe reworking chapter 3?

 

[MudaMudaMuda]

A lot of the game is done very well. Will be watching updates.

Suggestions:

The shootting is a bit jarring both in terms of writing and game play. My suggestion, create a new path. If claire and MC have been receptive to ntr, the MC will get angry at the party and go into his bed room, show some of his thoughts of jealousy, but then he passes out drunk instead of returning. This allows Daryl and Claire to continue down a cheating path. This would be high lust + cheating route.

For the shooting path (blackmail) Claire should be triggering the ntr scenes but given the option to back out at the last moment without doing anything. Then the MC can see Daryl every time afterwards so he knows he is making moves on his wife and get jealous. So on this route he goes to the bedroom, you see some of his thoughts, he pulls open the nightstand to reveal the gun. Cut back to party, some more dialogue, MC shows up with gun, etc. This would be moderate or high lust but no cheating when given the opportunity in the shower/bar.

For the love path it seems people are upset that you didn't include a harem path. I agree with your point about not being able to have it all in real life, but I would recommend you just give people what they want because you will get more donations that way. The images are good so it should attract people to play it. On the other hand trying to juggle too many well developed routes will surely take it's toll on development.

 

[avent0001]

What the...?!

I think the game has all the potential in the world. The new girls, Krystal (BB anybody?!) and mom, look very hot. I was really looking forward to the Halloween Party. Some groping, some cheating, some fucki fucki

But then the MC pulls out a gun and is shooting the black dude? And the scene in the hospital?
What the hell?
Man, the party scene had so much potential. Getting some of Krystals Pussy. Or some good NTR.
But this was a big letdown.

Hopefully, the dev get things right in the future. Maybe reworking chapter 3?

Yea.. that scene was bonkers.. that whole story with chris (aka black dude) is a bit too much, she´s way too inocent, it seems more like a japanese fantasy. Where i come from girls, that crave cock like that, are totaly in control.

But man, just dont stare at the black dude in the gym. The other story arcs are better. Except the arcs with your BFF, those are stupid too.
PS: i like my games with ntr/cuck so my issues with this game arent those.
PPS: this game is ruining my BFF in porn games for me. Poor Liam from funny guy to asshole.

 

[mistkae]

Yeah, I'm gonna agree with what some people have posted. Interesting development in some areas, but the pool scene knocked me for a loop. A lot of things in general don't make sense.

-What was the aftermath of the glory hole scene? It was just glossed over. It was a major breach of trust between the two, and he's furious.
-If they're living in the city, why is their home in some mountainous resort?
-Why did he just go inside and get a gun? What the hell is that all about? There was no exposition on his thought process at all. Also...
-If the player is in control of the major choices he or she takes in the relationship, why would you force such a bizarre turn of events on the player? At least give us the option to give up control of the fiancee to the other dude.

There's probably more, but those are the most glaring holes I can think of right now.

 

[numanumani]

-What was the aftermath of the glory hole scene? It was just glossed over. It was a major breach of trust between the two, and he's furious.

What was the MC even doing there?
Was he following her? Has he tapped her phone? Was he going there to service the holes himself and everything just a big coincidence?

 

[mistkae]

What was the MC even doing there?
Was he following her? Has he tapped her phone? Was he going there to service the holes himself and everything just a big coincidence?

I think it's implied by the "unsurprised look" of her best friend that she called him there. But, good point, it was also a very weird situation with convoluted intentions on all sides.