VN Ren'Py Completed Become a Rock Star [v1.01] [Mr Jet]

[p22]

When you do actually get scene with her, you do not really know that she would be minor character.

Game author just stopped doing scenes with her and forgot about her, which is shame, IMHO.

 

[mugizib]

When you do actually get scene with her, you do not really know that she would be minor character.

Exactly, you don't know, but don't pretend you know what the author had planned in an ongoing game.

 

[Avaron1974]

When you do actually get scene with her, you do not really know that she would be minor character.

Game author just stopped doing scenes with her and forgot about her, which is shame, IMHO.

He didn't forget about her, he already explained that.

He didn't plan for her to have any more scenes. It was him forgetting, it was him not wanting to do any more with her.

 

[p22]

The way how story was written up to this point feels that author switched gears after that update, to not add more story to her.

Which is why it feels abrupt.
And yes, from story flow it does feel like he forgot about her (and well as main character).

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

The way how story was written up to this point feels that author switched gears after that update, to not add more story to her.

Which is why it feels abrupt.
And yes, from story flow it does feel like he forgot about her (and well as main character).

Disagree. She was always a minor character, I never got any feeling she was anything other than that from the way the story was being told. At most i expected a casual sex scene.

 

[moskyx]

Disagree. She was always a minor character, I never got any feeling she was anything other than that from the way the story was being told. At most i expected a casual sex scene.

Disagree. The way the scene was build up, from the first time they see her at the cafe to the shyness she shows at her home, can lead you to think she will be a love interest you'll have to "break" slowly. But MrJet has already said he just didn't came up with a satisfying story for her and that he will rewrite the script to avoid that weird feeling p22 is talking about

 

[Avaron1974]

Disagree. The way the scene was build up, from the first time they see her at the cafe to the shyness she shows at her home, can lead you to think she will be a love interest you'll have to "break" slowly. But MrJet has already said he just didn't came up with a satisfying story for her and that he will rewrite the script to avoid that weird feeling p22 is talking about

People seem to be excited about that but all he's doing is making her exit seem less abrupt. She's still being written out.

 

[DA22]

People seem to be excited aboutl he's doing is making her exit seem less abrupt. She's still being written out.

Well maybe she will return in a later game where her story would make more sense. She was a cute character and if MrJet could have found a strong storyline for her, she likely could have easily competed with the ex-GF and even the mains with way more scenes. Ah well, things are as they are and there are already plenty of ladies around, maybe even one or two too many.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

People seem to be excited about that but all he's doing is making her exit seem less abrupt. She's still being written out.

This.

She was a generic waitress/barista from a place John frequents. There was never any indication of something with her other than random sex.
Also Eva was a lot prettier model.

 

[supermanz95]

When does did the conversation she's referring to take place ? When she sporadically kissed MC in his apartment ? All he said was I don't mind this happening more often, where the fuck is she pulling more than friendship from ?

 

[moskyx]

When does did the conversation she's referring to take place ? When she sporadically kissed MC in his apartment ? All he said was I don't mind this happening more often, where the fuck is she pulling more than friendship from ?

Erm... from him saying he wouldn't mind to kiss her more often, maybe? Unless kissing your 'just friends' on the lips on an usual basis is something natural to you, in which case I applaud you

 

[Krull]

All credits to Mr. Vargas

 

[P4cc3r5]

All credits to Mr. Vargas
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Thread explodes with the desire to penetrate the MC's sister again

 

[cxx]

Thread explodes with the desire to penetrate the MC's sister again

she needs to be fucked, it's relaxing. just ask from any girls/women mc has banged so far.

 

[Abhai]

All credits to Mr. Vargas
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she is gorgeous, and you did a great job with lighting there
yet, i think that post, and those few comments related should go to the dedicated fan-art thread

 

[Meushi]

she is gorgeous, and you did a great job with lighting there
yet, i think that post, and those few comments related should go to the dedicated fan-art thread

Err, not really? This is a wallpaper based on Mr. Vargas original in the fan-art-thread.

It's pretty typical to put wallpapers, signatures etc. in the main thread isn't it?

 

[Avaron1974]

she needs to be fucked, it's relaxing. just ask from any girls/women mc has banged so far.

Some people need to let it go.

 

[DA22]

Some people need to let it go.

Inside Julia preferably. -Just teasing, since could not resist it-

 

[Raptus Puellae]

Some people need to let it go.

I know it won't happen, but they day I stop believing will be the day it really wont' happen, so I hold on.

 

[DA22]

I know it won't happen, but they day I stop believing will be the day it really wont' happen, so I hold on.

Nah I have accepted quite a while ago nothing will happen with Julia as MC's sister and it is way too late and too much work to rewrite her to be anything else as that in game. Besides then people would demand her to become a main girl and a weird patch would appear not approved by dev (in this case really not approved). I just could not resist the perfect setup Avaron gave.