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i do website coding. i can easily get everything out in plain text when the time comes. renepy is so lenient you could code in notepad and simply copy paste it. i sent you a dmIf there's any way you could just send me the text without me having to play the game, it would be better. I helped out the DEV for Bad Memories because he literally had a mistake on every line of text. It was extremely tedious work because I had to play his game and type every bad/good line of text into a DM. It was extremely tedious.
Another edit for you: the plural for NPC is NPCs, not NPC's. the ' denotes possession. You could say though, "The NPC's stats are important."
Thank you. it is quite short for now which helps. i could compress the pictures more but for now im not gonna brother for the small effect it would have. in the future it might be needed.
Is there a big desire for smaller size? if so I can probable halve the game size for very little difference in quality.
- Aug 14, 2018
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I am a grammar nazi.
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I am currently working with the DEV to give you guys, or gals, a perfect spelling and grammatical rewrite of the text/dialogue.
Every missing comma and period is being included with my work. English is great, Engrish not so much.
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I agree. I'll look forward to not having to wrestle a literary bear if I play this in the future.
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Don't worry, you won't. Not only am I correcting spelling and grammatical errors, I am suggesting rewriting some dialogue to better suit the situations. The DEV will decide if he/she wants to include my suggestions.
My hat is off to zyzonia in this endeavor. I hope he/she likes my work.
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very good demo , and i dont care if she ends up pregnant , can´t wait for next build
, can´t wait for next build
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Much better can already see the improvements from the previous version nice work
thank you!Much better can already see the improvements from the previous version nice work
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Demo huh? Well I would like to say this, for all my fellow gamers out there, if you read real novels, the dialog in the beginning is to establish base characterization. I understand the developer's thoughts to kinda guide us down a path. Great job and looking forward to your next release. Yea, spell check is needed again. Just a few oh-shits but nothing to outrageous. For the graphics FANTASTIC CGI!!! Background music, soft and light a bit classical but if you are eclectic it is easy on the mind. Once again, fantastic job!!
Interested in the way it will go. After title image i persume that, there will be many things to do with girls.
First pictures were too dark. First i was thinking, that there is something on a first plan, but i was mistaken. It was just a render error. Adriana looks nice, but in the sex scene her mimic [open mouth] looks strange. Overall she is hot And house made of glass. Even badroom. I would feel big discomfort
Keep it up.
First pictures were too dark. First i was thinking, that there is something on a first plan, but i was mistaken. It was just a render error. Adriana looks nice, but in the sex scene her mimic [open mouth] looks strange. Overall she is hot
And house made of glass. Even badroom. I would feel big discomfort Keep it up.
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Update
So i have written about 15 k words of dialog right now. which is about half of the next update.
i haven't started writing dialog for the "special" scenes either. so I'm estimating that there will be about 40-50 k words in the next update.