It will comeNot enough female characters
Next update will feature the classmates- Thread starter zyzonia
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umm..the update IS out..lookit the OP it just hasnt appeared on update page yet..because it's plague-sunday and everyone's off having BBQ's
it just hasnt appeared on update page yet..because it's plague-sunday and everyone's off having BBQ's
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Zyzonia with help from the firm of RobCencOzelWoodz Inc...made a trailer...go peek..click like..get zyz some traction going folks
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I've tried the game just now and I have to admit I have rather mixed feelings about it. I haven't read through all of the posts here, but I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one who noticed issues with spelling, grammar or wrong character name appearing at least once in a game. The plot seems to be interesting but there's not enough yet to tell that for sure; sex scenes - especially the 2nd one - felt slightly forced to me, but I guess it's not smth I shouldn't complain about in porn game. However the whole game did make an impression on me of being somewhat unpolished and rough on the edges. The thing that made me most interested and is making me wanting to stick around for next updates is the dom/sub play. I wonder how far into BDSM territory the game will go or will it go there at all, how cruel thw girls will be to the MC and vice versa, and what kind of fetishes will find their way into the game. The initial feeling is that it's going to be more on the lighter, softer side, but I wouldn't mind some - perhaps optional - harder routes or scenes. Whatever the dev's plan is I wish him/her luck.
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bunch of us are doing our best to help him..we are volunteers so it's a mixed bag of insane people
HAHAA!!!...stick with him...he keeps getting better...trust me..he's 286% better than when we first saw this game ...and soon..it'll be as polished as they come...
I am posting this just as i am about to head to bed. so sorry if this is rather short but:
the 2nd sex scene is rather forced or quick but there is reason for that, that will become apparent later in the game.
as for how far I will develop the bdsm type of content. it will be extensive. I am already going rather close to the definition of rape as it is but the plan is to progress that content slowly, I want to make those paths believe and not a rape fest.
This will of course go both ways.
as for the spelling mistakes and grammar problems... well I am trying my best, I try to proofread as much as possible. But until sucha a time I can get a proper beta and proofreader there will be problems.
There is probleby more I should write or that i will think of tomorrow but i am dead tired so this explanation will have to do for now.
Thanks for the feedback
I will hopefully outsource that to a guy that rob or cenc mentioned. or at the verry least get some help with that. If not I will make something happen within next week. I just don't want to download the sdk that demands legal names, businesses and a bunch of more private infromation....
Thank you for letting us play "Beginnings".
Some of my thoughts:
First off the language needs to be tightened. There are some misspelled words and incorrect phrases that should be quick to fix. Secondly, give the player more choices to make, they don't have to affect anything important but it will help the player feel more engaged with the story if they get to make a decision or two instead of reading a wall of text. Otherwise I am interested in the story, it has a good setup (even though I would like to toss the PA out the door), wish it didn't end in the middle of the day but that's a personal preference. Instead of labeling a character's thoughts as "Lily's POV" I'd suggest changing it to "Lily's thoughts", it's more the standard in these games and it "feels" better.
One thing I noticed is Lily introduces herself as Britney but then is referred to by the principal and is labelled as Lily.
Otherwise, it was a fun intro and I look forward to seeing more of the game soon!
Some of my thoughts:
First off the language needs to be tightened. There are some misspelled words and incorrect phrases that should be quick to fix. Secondly, give the player more choices to make, they don't have to affect anything important but it will help the player feel more engaged with the story if they get to make a decision or two instead of reading a wall of text. Otherwise I am interested in the story, it has a good setup (even though I would like to toss the PA out the door), wish it didn't end in the middle of the day but that's a personal preference. Instead of labeling a character's thoughts as "Lily's POV" I'd suggest changing it to "Lily's thoughts", it's more the standard in these games and it "feels" better.
One thing I noticed is Lily introduces herself as Britney but then is referred to by the principal and is labelled as Lily.
Otherwise, it was a fun intro and I look forward to seeing more of the game soon!
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Will do
That was perfectly fine answer to me
You certainly piqued my curiosity with extensive BDSM content in the future. The one thing I'd like to suggest is giving more freedom to the player. During the encounter with the PA I felt few times that after some portion of the dialogue I'll have an option to choose my answer, but nothing as such happened; also having the possibility - depending on the conversation/player's actions - where she doesn't allow MC to cum would be interesting imo (it could be followed with some additional short talk where the player would establish how the MC feels about that, which in turn would influence dom/sub and possibly some other stats).
I'm the opposite end of the spectrum, I don't have any interest in BDSM with the PA; I'd rather throw her out and hire someone else since the MC doesn't know if he can really trust anyone hired for him by his father. Especially someone who is living in the house before he gets there, knows everything about what is going on, but yet the MC wasn't made aware of until he walked in the house.Will do
That was perfectly fine answer to me
I actually turned down all sex so far because I didn't care for Adriana or the gold digger Lily/Britney. But I am sure that I am alone in doing that.
I love your Work Assasin the for all what you do for use I think you are a really good person!!!
While I cannot comment on the previous builds of this game since i have not played them, if this release was a return to the market you have done a real impressive debut.
The animations were smooth, the dirty talk= phenomenal I do not know how you have made it so good but there is barely any game in recent memory has come close to your approach. The scenes are lengthy and the character dialogue improves the scenes massively. Seeing the change-log saying you added 3000 sex lines now I can believe since playing it!
There were grammatical errors, typos, few glitches and errors but I am not gonna mark a return release down for that. They did not take away from the game for me at least.
I should say I only played the routes where I 'relinquished control' let's say, as I personally find that more thrilling so I am only commenting on those segments. As this build impressed me you'll get a patron in the July month
I hope all the above encourages you dev, and I get times are hard, you don't need to break your back making this game but I appreciate the effort nonetheless
The animations were smooth, the dirty talk= phenomenal I do not know how you have made it so good but there is barely any game in recent memory has come close to your approach. The scenes are lengthy and the character dialogue improves the scenes massively. Seeing the change-log saying you added 3000 sex lines now I can believe since playing it!
There were grammatical errors, typos, few glitches and errors but I am not gonna mark a return release down for that. They did not take away from the game for me at least.
I should say I only played the routes where I 'relinquished control' let's say, as I personally find that more thrilling so I am only commenting on those segments. As this build impressed me you'll get a patron in the July month
I hope all the above encourages you dev, and I get times are hard, you don't need to break your back making this game but I appreciate the effort nonetheless