I thought the way DPC presented that whole scene was very well done. The only thing I think should have been included (and I go back & forth on this)
was an actual indication of Jill climaxing (did she even climax?). I'm OK with it missing, mainly because she was a virgin, and Maya didn't finish her first time, either, and realistically, expecting that might have been a bit too much to ask. However, what the fuck does porn have to do with reality?
So, I'm now anticipating making her cum, just like I am for Riona. Maybe I'll be able to accomplish both in the same scene...