The Interlude could then have ended with her losing her grandma and heading off to get tattooed and not fuck any other dudes in San Diego.
I agree with your sentiment that The Interlude should have been about Tremolo and Zoey - together. A deeper dive into them falling in love, not realizing that little fact and then separating, and all the movie drama that goes with it. What we got was similar, but not the best or the most interesting story that could have been told from what we knew about them.
But the bolded part from your sentence is the thing that bothered me the most about the script. The
MC, in this case a female, was not having any sex at all!!! Tremolo bangs her in the beginning and that's it. I expected a lot more cookie in Zoey's nookie in California and instead got a really wierd
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that was mostly devoid of any sex.
A poor porn game showcase, but it also didn't truly capture and light up people's hearts and minds with the story it was trying tell, at least not like the main game did. DPC chickened out. Possible loss of revenue was more important to him then telling a more realistic story. I don't know, maybe I judged the character wrong, but Zoey did not strike me as a saintly type that would go celibate, be it a chick or a dik personality (though for me she definitely gives more of a dik vibe). DPC should have given the players a choice to make for Zoey: To bang dudes or to save herself for Tremolo
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Storywise, the realization for Zoey that San Diego is not a place for her to be settling down at, and that she's actually in love with Tremolo, should have came after she had sex with Bret. And than all the drama with Emma could still happen, but it would be more justified. I'd also change Bret from an effeminate gay guy who is not actually gay to either a true gay dude or at least a bi character that ends with Jonah and ditches the crazy.
Also... DIK Zoey would have definitely banged the surfing instructor, at least...
But we got what we got, it wasn't bad but it wasn't great either. A solid 3/5 showing. Better than 90% of other pr0n games. Peace.