VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Takkatakka]

What the game actually lacks is one time fucks on the others branch. Every side girl has their own mini-branch and stick around the story. Fuckface on massive DIK status and on others branch would have one night stands with girls he picks up at McAllens for example and then never sees again, they're just not there for some reason.

Because most of those are kinda developing into actual characters, like Lily and Nicole for example. I personally would find pure ons just...pointless. They would add exactly what to the story? More sex scenes in a game full of them? Then rather focus on more scenes with actual characters.

 

[Jumbi]

But episode 9, was just an another retcon. You basically had a second first time sex with Jill, but the build up, for it was, the new cringe era.
He might not admti it, but I deep down belive, he actually mocking the Jill fandom by making it the path this way. and probably the discord / patreon jill's simp brigade love it, so he can get away with it, becasue they are as dump as Jill who as Geralt pointed out, can't even see that her own best friend try and will fuck her boyfriend .

I'd like to believe this one, otherwise it's simply just garbage writing

I cannot quite understand because any author would want to purposedly shit on their own creation. That makes little sense.

She is beautiful (these are subjective tastes), a pleasant face, looks very realistic, not one part of the body does not look hypertrophied. A straight forward character that a lot of people like and again a lot of people like bad girls and there's nothing you can do about it.
I will add on my own that I find straightforwardness a good character trait and you know what to expect from such people, and it’s easier to talk to them.
Becky is an arrogant and toxic bitch who asserts herself at the expense of others and engages in bullying.
You will tell me: wait, but Sarah was doing the same thing! She treated Maya badly!
I will answer that this is not true. Sarah and Maya disagree about life and Sarah rather finds Maya's ideas absurd. In Episode 6 we can see Sarah's opinion on gender research.
She later apologizes to Maya and admits that it was too much.

Sarah and Becky have a good relationship that goes back in time as hinted in the game. I do not like Sarah much. I do not find her especially sexy nor do I like her personality much. And her ass is as dull as they come. But yes, I also prefer her to Becky.

 

[ChipLecsap]

I don't have a problem accepting that Jill acted differently when she is out of her element. Getting into a relationship and knowing it is leading to sex really put Jill on edge, so it kinda makes sense that she went back to normal if this did not eventuate.

When they fucked in episode 8, Jill was caught off guard at the idea the mc wasn't gonna use a condom. She wasn't expecting it and she was scared to say something. Silly behaviour but not out of character for Jill when she's so self conscious.

Later she asks that they get tested, the fact that they've already fucked isn't grounds for saying it's too late, all the more reason in retrospect to get checked out, now that she's had time to think about it.

In the context of a game, where the mc could be having unprotected sex with girls left right and centre, the same girls who are quite likely to fucking lots of other dudes too, in all likelihood the mc would be riddled all sorts of nasties, but we know he won't be because he has a magic cock. But Jill is like the serious girl in a comedy, real life rules apply to her whereas the rest of the girls live in a fuckfest fantasy world.

She also lets cum inside of her , so yeah it could have been to late, if she end up having Aids for example.
so yeah, it's either cringe for the soul reason to be cringe , or bad writing. May be both ,a Bad cringe writing,
You use the term of " out of character " but this is no longer relevant to dpc writing, He proved time after time, that what is matter for him is the actual scene to work, and discard any previous character behaviour or personality, for a joke, or a scene to write.

 

[sakuyas_mmaster]

In contrast, i struggle to understand where Sarah's apparent popularity comes from.

I think it's her DTF attitude. She gives the idea that you can have her anytime and anywhere you want. In a porn game that is likely something the players want to see. You don't have to solve any riddles or navigate a walkthrough to get to fucktown with her.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

You're certainly right about it being subjective, beautiful is definitely not a word i'd ever use. I think it might be due to how the textures used for her model don't seem to match the rest of the cast very well. In many renders she winds up looking awfully airbrushed and more noticeably artificial. But perhaps that's what people perceive as pleasant and beautiful.

People can have different tastes, what one likes, not necessarily likes another. I like this type of look in real life (Sarah, Josy, Riona) and judging by the thread, I'm not the only one. Petite, but not flat or fat.

No, i will tell you: that's exactly how Sarah acted with Mel, when they spent their entire time with MC bickering which of them deserves his cock more and whose ass looks better. Her most pressing concern was to make it all about herself and to make her excessively high opinion of herself known.

I didn't think much of Sarah before Ep.9 but afterwards? The less i see of her, the better.

But why? It's just a friendly competition, they both behave this way and I did not notice anything toxic in this behavior. On the contrary, their competition adds to the comedic effect and made me smile. It's funny.

We just don't really know much about her outside of being a hedonist. She seems to be pretty happy with herself more or less and for a character in a game/book/movie etc. that makes her just kinda boring, because generally issues are what make characters in fiction interesting.

There is truth in this, she is not the most interesting character and I only noticed her as a person in Ep 6 when she criticized feminists. Immediately the thought went: "Damn, this little devil is right." But there are characters that are much more interesting, but it all depends on the DPC, if he wanted to reveal Sarah, he would do it and come up with a full-fledged story for her. Many SGs have them.

The game really need less and not more side girls. Every additional "path" or option means that either the development takes more time or every girl that is already in the game will get less screen time.

But I want to bang hot asian nurse!

 

[Turki 10]

Yes, she is definitely interested.
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Damn she's hot, why isn't she a side girl yet?

Imagine if this happening, it would have happened only because of Jill's insistence on getting tested
Jill:

 

[NebulousShooter]

because generally issues are what make characters in fiction interesting.

We found the Maya fan

The game really need less and not more side girls.

Oh, yeah, we did.

 

[Darkwen]

100% Agree, Jill take a complete 180 turn in episode 6, and became a total different person, and as you pointed out it is funny how, when you are not on her path, or break up with her, she is actually act like her old self from episode 1-5

Jill didn't get fuck over its just part of who she is both the good and bad. I find Jill more likeable off her path but she not fully to blame for that she doesn't know how to act in a relationship not bad for a LAMMF

 

[shazba]

She also lets cum inside of her , so yeah it could have been to late, if she end up having Aids for example.
so yeah, it's either cringe for the soul reason to be cringe , or bad writing. May be both ,a Bad cringe writing,
You use the term of " out of character " but this is no longer relevant to dpc writing, He proved time after time, that what is matter for him is the actual scene to work, and discard any previous character behaviour or personality, for a joke, or a scene to write.

I said it wasn't out of character for her. Every time things get hot and heavy between her and the mc she kinda struggles to stay focused. So for her to not say anything about the condom and even him spraying her internals isn't all that surprising. Of course she later worries, and sensibly gets tested. It's not bad writing just because she didn't do something scientifically logical by your standards.

Also, what examples are there of characterisations being thrown out the windows for a scene to work? I'm sure there are some, but I'm curious since you make it sounds endemic to the story.

I think it's her DTF attitude. She gives the idea that you can have her anytime and anywhere you want. In a porn game that is likely something the players want to see. You don't have to solve any riddles or navigate a walkthrough to get to fucktown with her.

For a fucking price though, that greedy bitch!

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Imagine if this happening, it would have happened only because of Jill's insistence on getting tested
Jill:
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Poor Jill. She's already on her way to cuckqueen because of Bianca.

Oh, one more thing I want to advise you. You are most likely writing from your phone, you can adjust the size in the image upload settings. Because they get very huge.

Sarah and Becky have a good relationship that goes back in time as hinted in the game. I do not like Sarah much. I do not find her especially sexy nor do I like her personality much. And her ass is as dull as they come. But yes, I also prefer her to Becky.

She is a bad girl, cynical, straightforward, hedonistic. I understand that not everyone likes it.
As for the asses, it's clear that Camila, Quinn, Zoey and Sage have the best.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I think it's her DTF attitude. She gives the idea that you can have her anytime and anywhere you want. In a porn game that is likely something the players want to see. You don't have to solve any riddles or navigate a walkthrough to get to fucktown with her.

For which girl in BaDIK would this not apply?

 

[Lovetities]

Damn, people are really going all out on a virgin girl lmfao. There is nothing strange if a rich girl from higher social class ask you for sti test. (Especially if that girl has zero knowledge about sex and think first time is supposed to be like fairytale) Also, Jill was always silly and vanilla (for example when she tries to cheer up fuckface during tennis match). I am not exactly fan of Jill cause she is way too vanilla and her plot is least interesting for me. Jill not knowing that Bianca has crush on fuckface is not surprising since she sucks at reading people. For eg- She should have known Josy was fuckface ex when they meet at Library or Bella is fucking fuckface on the side(considering Fuckface staying with Bella). Jill is always extremely naive. (She is not street smart like Quinn) even, if I am not Jill fan but that banana outfit was hilarious af and is better than that weird looking bee outfits tbh.

 

[shazba]

As for the asses, it's clear that Camila, Quinn, Zoey and Sage have the best

I don't know about this. Zoey's glutes are glorious, followed up by Cammy's rippling rump. But Quinn and Sage? Sage's ass looks ready to sag, and Quinn looks like she's got nothing going on back there at times, even Sally would give her a run for her money in that department.

I love Sage and Quinn's characters, but Sage is one weird looking, gangly, chicken legged bitch. And Quinn could convincingly be post op trans.

... Sorry, I don't know where that came from!

 

[ChipLecsap]

Jill didn't get fuck over its just part of who she is both the good and bad. I find Jill more likeable off her path but she not fully to blame for that she doesn't know how to act in a relationship not bad for a LAMMF

You can pinpoint accurately can see when her character became a total different person then who she previously was.


from this point on, she became a mentally undeveloped person, in a 21 years old of body. it's like that movie with Jennifer Garner, 13 Going on 30, when a 13 years of girl, wake up the next day, as a grown adult woman, except her brain is still a 13 years old girl. That is Jill since episode 6. but yeah truth to be told, she was very consistent on this behaviour, until episode 9 and the "off Jill path ".

 

[BorgiaBou]

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This week I wrote dialogue and posed static renders.
I've estimated that I need to pose ~1000 renders for the scenes I have currently written. I have plenty of scenes left to write on top of that. But, based on the episode 9 render count, I believe the writing is over 50% done at this point.
1449 static renders have been posed, of which 100 are waiting to render. Static renders should be somewhere around 29-36% done.
I will likely work on writing and static renders in the upcoming weeks.
I have only posed a handful of SFW animations these last few weeks, so there is no news in that area. At the moment, I have 60 animations waiting to render. Animations are still hovering around 50% completion.


Poll news

The special render poll ended today and the winner is Zoey. She will receive a special render set dedicated to her in episode 10 alongside Sage.
Thank you for voting! That's it for the special render polls for episode 10.
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Have a nice weekend

Dr PinkCake

One update per year, one update per year...

 

[Takkatakka]

We found the Maya fan

Oh, yeah, we did.

All of the girls have some kind of issue, that is why they are interesting. Ironically one of the biggest fan favorites here also has probably the most issues: Quinn.

And the second point is just objectively true, if you want a decent game finished inside the next 2 to 3 years, also exhibit A:

One update per year, one update per year...

 

[Turki 10]

Poor Jill. She's already on her way to cuckqueen because of Bianca.

Oh, one more thing I want to advise you. You are most likely writing from your phone, you can adjust the size in the image upload settings. Because they get very huge.

Thanks first for the advice. Secondly, I think this would be bad. I think this could really destroy Jill, so I would prefer to avoid it.

 

[Darkwen]

You can pinpoint accurately can see when her character became a total different person then who she previously was.
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from this point on, she became a mentally undeveloped person, in a 21 years old of body. it's like that movie with Jennifer Garner, 13 Going on 30, when a 13 years of girl, wake up the next day, as a grown adult woman, except her brain is still a 13 years old girl. That is Jill since episode 6. but yeah truth to be told, she was very consistent on this behaviour, until episode 9 and the "off Jill path ".

While at this point Jill takes a hard turn I don't think she knows how to handle an adult relationship thats becoming sexual. Jill try to break free of this in 8 and 9 ( on Bella path) when she stands up for herself because she had enough of Tybalt and when she confronts Bella

 

[Darkwen]

This weekend, a cosmetic poll for Josy will start.

better not fuck this up

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Thanks first for the advice. Secondly, I think this would be bad. I think this could really destroy Jill, so I would prefer to avoid it.
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You're welcome.
I love to see world burns, so I'll try the Bianca's fruit.

I don't know about this. Zoey's glutes are glorious, followed up by Cammy's rippling rump. But Quinn and Sage? Sage's ass looks ready to sag, and Quinn looks like she's got nothing going on back there at times, even Sally would give her a run for her money in that department.

I love Sage and Quinn's characters, but Sage is one weird looking, gangly, chicken legged bitch. And Quinn could convincingly be post op trans.

... Sorry, I don't know where that came from!

Oh, it looks you, like me, notice bad renders, and they come across. Especially in animations. Periodically, her ass looks too big and bloated, periodically normal.

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I didn't notice anything terrible with Quinn. The only ugly asses in the game is Ashley, and you know... Madame.