VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[KАRАMBA]

Very good that you also show mentally handicapped toddlers with epilepsy their drawings,
they also deserve a chance in society !!

Well, mentally handicapped toddlers writing dumb rhymes have already got their chance here.

 

[raffo]

It's a cathy scene.

nope i checked, in the gallery it's the scene right next to the cathy one.
From the preview I saw it was Sage at the cinema I think

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Very good that you also show mentally handicapped toddlers with epilepsy their drawings,
they also deserve a chance in society !!

 

[D34K0N]

How far away is new update?

 

[KАRАMBA]

How far away is new update?

 

[hakuna-matata]

How far away is new update?

 

[D34K0N]

Damn I'm gonna die of old age before

 

[godkingxerxes]

Damn I'm gonna die of old age before

You can join the rest of us.

 

[Gh0st_Harambe]

How far away is new update?

3 if you mean status update, if not nobody knows exactly but probably ep 11 will be released in november/december.

 

[ChipLecsap]

Joshy said earlier that it made him uncomfortable to sleep with M and J when they were still a couple, but no one felt uncomfortable about leaving their beloved Father alone on Thanksgiving, Or going to another man's house and accepting his hospitality with the intent to lie and steal from him. Am I the only one that was bothered by that?

Yes.

 

[ffive]

Found this on one of the unofficial fan discord servers, yandere Josy is a common vibe now.
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Nothing wrong with a tiny, devoted murderer, smh at people acting like it'd be some bad thing.

 

[Porthas]

Yes, that's so much easier than getting Jill's lawyer to file a writ for the documents. Or they could have gone online, learned how to file a writ, it's not really difficult, just a few legal hoops to jump through and you don't need to be a member of the bar to do it. In fact it would settle the whole Loan storyline, Patrick wouldn't dare to act against Maya once the issue had been brought before the courts.

Why pay lawyers money for doing something completely legal another way? That makes zero sense.

 

[ChipLecsap]

Yes, that's so much easier than getting Jill's lawyer to file a writ for the documents. Or they could have gone online, learned how to file a writ, it's not really difficult, just a few legal hoops to jump through and you don't need to be a member of the bar to do it. In fact it would settle the whole Loan storyline, Patrick wouldn't dare to act against Maya once the issue had been brought before the courts.

The problem is as Jill pointed out, that Maya signed a legal document, without even reading it. There is not much her lawyer can do about it, her signature is on a - so far assuming - legal document.
circumstances doesn't really matter, otherwise everyone would always complain. Artemis main protagonist signed up a paper, while he was drunk and did not read what he signed, because he trusted in his " girlfriend " and he learned he was fucked over by her, and he can't do anything about it legally.

Maya was an idiot, there is no other way to put it. But she grown so much in people eyes

 

[Porthas]

Citing CW writing just proves my point, DPC is not a good writer. That's not to say that he hasn't written a few good scene's, the backyard guitar lesson from ep4 always springs to mind, but he is horribly inconsistent. I sometimes wonder if he hasn't used a ghost writer in the past

Your point wasn't that he wasn't a good writer. You said, "I've heard the college sitcom argument a lot on this forum, but the argument is getting pretty weak what with burglery, kidnapping, and assault with a deadly weapon entering the game."

All I did was point out all those elements ARE part of "college sitcoms" - whether or not that's considered good writing - or whether or not DPC's writing is good/not good - is a different topic.

 

[Porthas]

The problem is as Jill pointed out, that Maya signed a legal document, without even reading it. There is not much her lawyer can do about it, her signature is on a - so far assuming - legal document.
circumstances doesn't really matter, otherwise everyone would always complain. Artemis main protagonist signed up a paper, while he was drunk and did not read what he signed, because he trusted in his " girlfriend " and he learned he was fucked over by her, and he can't do anything about it legally.

Maya was an idiot, there is no other way to put it. But she grown so much in people eyes

No, Jill's point was there wasn't much her lawyer could do about it without the documents to look at.

 

[noahsombrero]

Ain’t that the truth. I try out a new game every month or so. And sometimes I download it, play it for an hour or so… then close it without saving anything, and delete it.

Sometimes because the premise, which sounded interesting in the description, turned out to be completely stupid. Sometimes because it’s nothing but goddamned mini-games. Sometimes the writing: either nobody sounds remotely realistic, or even human; or it’s a shitty translation from whatever the author’s native language is, because they used Bing Translator or let a friend, who totally lied about their English skills, take a whack at it. Sometimes the art is shit, but I’m usually willing to overlook that… but not when it’s impossible to navigate.

Mostly it’s because of bad writing. Too many idiots think all you need for an AVN is a series of fuck scenes with hot girls, loosely connected by the thinnest of plots. True, that’s exactly how they make porn… but if we wanted porn, we’d watch porn! We want a story. With fuck scenes, but still. And if you don’t have a story, with characters we care about, don’t waste everyone’s time.

Like the guy said, really great stuff is rare in all genres, including printed novels. Here is my list of pretty good vn's

Corporate culture

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BaD https://f95zone.to/threads/being-a-dik-v0-10-1-dr-pinkcake.25332/
Strangers on Paper

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One Day at a Time https://f95zone.to/threads/one-day-at-a-time-ch-16c-zoey-raven.67104/
Friends in Need

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Defending Lydia Collier https://f95zone.to/threads/defending-lydia-collier-v0-15-8-white-phantom-games.33797/
City of Broken Dreamers https://f95zone.to/threads/city-of-broken-dreamers-v1-14-0-ch-14-phillygames.25739/
Tales from Neverwhere https://f95zone.to/threads/the-neverwhere-tales-v0-4-0-ceolag.126219/
Race of Life https://f95zone.to/threads/race-of-life-ep-2-extra-new-underground-studio.130096/
Where it all Began https://f95zone.to/threads/where-it-all-began-ch-3-beta-oceanlab.19856/
Summer's Gone https://f95zone.to/threads/summers-gone-ch-5-beta-oceanlab.29981/
Fates Collide https://f95zone.to/threads/fates-collide-v0-4b-katanavn.90433/
Bad Memories

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Radiant https://f95zone.to/threads/radiant-v0-5-2-rk-studios.49572/
unbdroken https://f95zone.to/threads/stwa-unbroken-pt-6-stwadev.85108/
A Man For All https://f95zone.to/threads/a-man-for-all-ep-13-venus-waltz.65913/
The Author https://f95zone.to/threads/something-to-write-about-the-author-ch-7-1-stwadev.48868/
Hillside https://f95zone.to/threads/hillside-v0-14-1-darkblue.52621/

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Nothing wrong with a tiny, devoted murderer, smh at people acting like it'd be some bad thing.

 

[ChipLecsap]

No, Jill's point was there wasn't much her lawyer could do about it without the documents to look at.

Yeah. It doesn't matter really, Jill's face when maya told she not read it, and she not even know what was in it, said it all. I would be surprise if her lawyer could do anything about it if it is indeed a legal ducument.

No matter what, this whole thing does not do any Favour to Maya, dpc try to soften it by saying derek also signed a similar contract but .... Yeah. Maya offically take the biggest moron tittle from Jill, and that say something.

 

[Porthas]

Yeah. It doesn't matter really, Jill's face when maya told she not read it, and she not even know what was in it, said it all. I would be surprise if her lawyer could do anything about it if it is indeed a legal ducument.

No matter what, this whole thing does not do any Favour to Maya, dpc try to soften it by saying derek also signed a similar contract but .... Yeah. Maya offically take the biggest moron tittle from Jill, and that say something.

Yes, it certainly is stupid to trust in your parents.

 

[whiterabbit23]

hey guys how do you get it to work, I don't get the talk to Sage after the first minigame, is there a fix for that? thank you for your help