I've been thinking about this since the start, but I think one issue with this game is the lack of dialogue during sex scenes
You mean descriptive narration like, "your massive shaft barely fits into her shaved cunt, but nothing will prevent you from thrusting deep into her ribbed tunnel"... That kind of shit? Or actual dialogue like, "yeah, fuck me , you like that, fuck me harder, make me cum, oh yeah baby!", you know, some shit like that?
Personally I find it refreshing that the conversation is more realistic, that sex scene with Sage after the movie night was classic, laughing and struggling yet failing to keep the noise down while totally enjoying each other. I think the visuals during the sex scenes are enough, no written description is required, but the conversation was gold:
sa "*Whispers* Ok, stop teasing me... Put it in..."
mc "*Whispers* Are you sure you won't moan loudly when I do it?"
sa "*Whispers* It's not that big- OH GOOOD-"
mc "*Whispers* For fuck's sake, Sage! You have to control it better, if we're gonna do this your way."
mc "*Whispers* I'm not gonna move my hips until you stop moaning like that."
sa "*Muffled moans* Give it to me! Give it!!!"
mc "*Whispers* Hey, did I say you could move?"
sa "*Muffled moans* Mmm... Yes!"
This is fun sex, as opposed to cliched porno sex.