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Damn, I actually hope those rumours are not true. I mean, I'm sort of a (pretty crappy) amateur writer myself, and I get how crushing hearing criticism is (specially after working your ass off all night on a story), but you must also keep in mind that chances are... you are not the best writer there ever was. You must try to be objective when it comes to the way other people look at your work (although good luck with that, trust me; if you think that sounds really hard... let me tell you it's way harder than that).
I have no talent for writing fiction myself but at the same time I don't think this should disqualify me from having opinions about things I see and read. Beyond really basic academic stuff I'm useless, thank God I don't have to do that anymore, but Jill is the weakest point of the story, which is serviceable and campy, not a work of genius. Even beyond her being poorly integrated with the rest of the cast, she's unbelievably naive. It's absurd, but I think DPC has the all the major story points mapped out beforehand so there's no turning back now.
 
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Machete

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Man, there really is no coming back from your enemy fucking your mom. What's the rebuttal to that? Like how do you respond to the guy who stole your obsession away also deep cleaning your mom's vaginal interior and shooting the club up afterwards?

Tybalt would have to kill MC. It's the only response.
Or he might play the card to finally get in Jill's underwear.
 

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Or he might play the card to finally get in Jill's underwear.
I support this just to witness the fallout. Jill fans would ship themselves via FedEx overnight shipping to Sweden or wherever DPC is from just to protest and it would be glorious.
 

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It's kinda sad that Jills face turned out the way it did. I'm not sure what came first but her 2D gallery makes her look gorgeous. Still I get this weird urge to pursue her further, if not for me then for the future of my family. I mean, girls marry rich all the time. I can do that too and be a trophy husband that just smiles and nods.
 
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