Does it make any sense? It makes no sense. Who’s telling us about the loan? Maya. Has she proven herself to be credible and infallible? Absolutely not.
Surely once she explains any of this to the Burkes they’ll be like, “This is total nonsense, your dad is bullshitting you”. And the cat will be out of the bag.
If DPC drags the loan on much after this meeting, it will be ludicrous.
It could certanely go that way. Personally i would hate that outcome and will consider Badik story worst for it. Varage already explain it, the most important aspect of this story are human emotions and relationships, not financial law. You guys made a huge deal out of this but I find it the least important aspect of this story.
As I see it the loan is a pretext to give Maya's dad a tool to control her. That way DPC can built tension with Maya and Josy and a trigger for Maya to join the Hots. It generate conflict, Maya is in trouble, Sage can help, the MC... well he got a double blowjob for this issue. The tool for Maya's dad to control her is just a tool, you can change it for, I don't know: Maya's dad pay her tuition with his saves... and the story remain exactly the same.
But if you change the story as you propose... ok maybe the loan got sense now, but who cares?... We know DavDR is not going to stop haiting the story anyway. On the other hand, Maya it's portray as a stupid when she already get a lot of hate (with Josy, the MC and Sage on the same place); most of the drama since the game started is reveal as a stupid misunderstood, pure air; Patrick, who seemes to be a new antagonist is out of the story, Burke, another antagonist loose an oportunity to be integrated more into the story from a position of power, wich means more dangerous.
The financial law is happy now, but the personal dramas, the conflict beetween people, the strugle for indepence, love, power, suffer a lot.
but keep the petulant old baby talk, it's kinda fun and this thread wouldn't be the same without it.
Funny for you. In my family, my cuore family, dad, mother etc, they made jokes out of people, not for the porn games they like, but for the literature classics they read. I came to my father the other day and i told him i was reading Gone with the Wind. I wasn't bragging i was just curious about the book. He made fun of me for reading: "low tier books". It's a fucking classic with a whole country teaching it in schools as some form of national treasure and yet I got the bullying anyway.
Now imagine my reaction when I came here and I see someone making a huge snob theater couse: "Badik is bad writing, not like A house in the Rift". Sweet lord, as long as i tried to not be like my family, still I was educated to see it as a worm bragging about being tall.