VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[bigdick289]

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Cursed Jill looks like an animatronic of Five Nights at Freddies

 

[felicemastronzo]

Btw, I hope you are just exaggerating for humor, if not, you are arguing in bad fate. No one was defending the NTR nutcases, its clear that they play those types of games because of the fetishes of cuckoldry and swinging and what not, so they are by default excluded from conversations about the quality of writing.

on this I disagree, it has nothing to do in my opinion with the quality of the writing, it is not that it is particularly difficult to handle
however, this would bring DPC a flood of complaints, and it is also understandable that he wants to live it serenely
this choice however harms the characters in the story a bit, but it is a conscious choice, not an accident

 

[mindern]

for me this terror that DPC has of the whining of his patreons, which I can also understand, damages a lot the realism of what he tells. but most of all it damages the characters in his tale

This is one of my bigger gripes about the game. Why were 4/5 of the central LI in relationships if he was so overwhelmingly against showing so much as a kiss? The lack of… anything between people supposedly in relationships is absurd. It’s not like we’d need to see their entire sex lives (neither is there a need to as Chips points out) but just basic interactions to show an authentic relationship would be nice.

It’s not like he didn’t know people online were like this after Acting Lessons yet he went ahead with all these relationships.

 

[ChipLecsap]

Then why are you seeing what Quinn, Rionna and Tybalt are doing? Its clear that its not a POV story, I don't even know why you try to use that as an argument. While being mostly focused on the MC we often see things MC does not, we see other characters inner monologue and flashbacks that enrich the game world beyond Fuckface's scope, which often begins and ends around the tip of his penis.

Because it's relevant to MC. It will be relevant to the general story. Like it or not Every character Personal life only relevant if it's connected to MC.one way or another. Or it Will be connected. We see the Pink Rose girls drug things and etc, We know it will be connected to MC in way or an another.

But felicemastronzo Really want to blur out any line, like there is no definitive lines between the things.
But the game is like an Onion, is has its layers. And the least important part of it is the different love interests personal "love" life outside of MC's scoop.

And I have direct evidence for this, In Fact I'm pretty sure you all have

in the very first time, I only realized after this that I have not Seen Bella at all in episode 4..
Because She was not Relevant in the moment. Whether Josy Gonna fuck with a Jock or not will only have Relevance, if MC is involved somehow or not. Otherwise, it's not relevant, the LEAST important thing.
And That is my whole point. In an Extent it can bare some relevance, but it is the least important thing. And who know May Be it's gonna this way with the Branching, they will only exist in a bare extend outside of MC's scoop.

 

[sixart]

The alternate would have been if Zoey is having a Threesome there.

Nope That's your wish at best The alternate is that there is no trouble around the phone BS everybody gets their happy ending ( ? ) BS and all is peachy when she comes back... though the intended one is that there IS trouble ( how much depends on you ) but whatever should happen in EP9 it wouldn't be peachy at all

Even though I'm not a fan of bringing Zoya back into the fold BS I'm curious just WTF DPC is thinking about heading at and more importantly HOW he's gonna pull it off... while I ( for instance ) stay interested in that line and not just laugh it off as an amateur telenovela hour

 

[OFT]

I'm still amazed that all the talk of the Nu Tau Rho fraternity (sorority?) doesn't include Derek as a member. Fuckface is fully aware of at least two instances of Derek cheating on him. No, he didn't exactly witness the events, but he saw the explicit evidence:








And don't give me that crap about Derek not being a love interest. Although they haven't quite been to first base, we have seen many intimate moments with Derek. For example:

• Spoiler: Hangs out with the MC before they were DIKs with his dick hanging

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• Spoiler: Nuzzles the MC's crotch, in front of the entire fraternity no less

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• Spoiler: Propositions the MC

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• Spoiler: Lets the MC suck on his toe

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• Spoiler: Their PDA broccoli moment

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• Spoiler: Sleeps with the MC both naked and in women's lingerie

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So, if the bylaws of the ντρ fraternity involve a love interest cheating on the main character, surely Derek deserves to be considered.

Spoiler: I'll see myself out...

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[Ilhares]

But you don't see Elena and JB , outside of MC perspective.

Please tell me you actually get what I'm pointing out?. You know I'm right, right?.

I understand what you're aiming for here, but you're completely wrong. We see a lot of interaction between other characters that is not a flashback, and in situations that have absolutely no MC presence whatsoever.

The alternate would have been if Zoey is having a Threesome there. Now that would Be Relevant
seeing ugly tattooed chick with metrosexual having sex, was not relevant. That's at least a week that could have been spend on episode 9 instead.

Well.. I can't argue with you on that one. I found zero appeal whatsoever to her 'friends' there. The drunk chick was amusing, whatever her name was.

Cursed Jill looks like an animatronic of Five Nights at Freddies

Dude, that's not 'Cursed Jill'. That is 100% everyday Normal Jill.

Don't stick your dick in goblin-kin, kids. It does not end well.

 

[ChipLecsap]

I understand what you're aiming for here, but you're completely wrong. We see a lot of interaction between other characters that is not a flashback, and in situations that have absolutely no MC presence whatsoever.

I feel like I'm running in circles here. .
Let's try this way, I use Bella as an example because I'm gonna get likes for it

I'm on the Bella branch. She and I just Fucked in her pool. The next scene.
A, Lily and Tommy talking about drug. A scenario that directly involve the Diks , and will have effect on MC. A Main Plot
B, Josy and Lucas, talking about some random thing, How She liked the way he said " Hi Josy" - so She wanna suck his Dick, and we get a sex scene.

Which one has the most relevant to me on the Bella path, or for the game general plot. ?. It is the least important thing in the game to see Josy love life.
if Josy comes to me and Say hey my new Boyfriend is beating me, abusing me, could you help? Then in that case it's became Relevant.
other than this, if She is beyond my scope, MC's scope, aka MC is not presented, this is not relevant.

people falsely have this idea that if we don't see them move on, and getting an extended details about their life its means that these character stuck in a loop waiting for MC the player to change his mind. .

But I hardly get this expression, when I didn't see Bella at all in episode 4. Nothing happens, we are back in the same track, she became relevant for the story again, so I meet her. And I think this is how bracnhng will work, some characters just won't be as heavily presented anymore, because they no longer relevant for that specific branch. Beyond the plot.
it has nothing to do with fear of NTR. It is simply just, when you are on a Bella branch, you dont have to see a random scene thats hold no value to the story aside of being a personal storyline for a rejcted girl.

I cant explinit any better, I feel like at this point it's just arguing for the sake of arguing.

 

[hakuna-matata]

MC is classic Marty Sue. I would call him James Bond from the AVN world. After all, this game is compensation for what the players don't have in real life (basically, maybe one of the players, like Tremolo, fucks three chicks a night).The player wants to try himself the most desirable, the sexiest, the most beloved.
But on the other hand, he really lacks an opponent. Chad and Troy gave a little rivalry, but they were quickly exposed. Chad is just gay, which sounds like a joke, and Tybalt is just a clown. The new rivalry is apparently a rivalry between Tommy and MC for informal leadership.

I can see where you coming from with Mary Sue reference. MC shows up to the campus and is practically anointed a king. He's able to seduce lesbians, teachers, virgins, pimps, men, animals and even the dead. A little competition can be good for both story and drama purposes. It can also give some balance to the game.

 

[ChipLecsap]

I can see where you coming from with Mary Sue reference. MC shows up to the campus and is practically anointed a king. He's able to turn lesbians, seduce teachers, virgins, pimps, men, animals and even the dead. A little competition can be good for both story and drama purposes. It can also give some balance.

or He just a Giga Chad like Anos Voldigoad . and I' just realized I'm gonna rename my Character to Anos

 

[sixart]

or He just a Giga Chad like Anos Voldigoad . and I' just realized I'm gonna rename my Character to Anos

As in anus ?

 

[ChipLecsap]

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[Wonder Wolf]

My favorite songs from Being a DIK. I made a top 8 that stands for the 8 episodes that have been released so far. (I left out the Interlude story and songs).


My number I: Quinn's theme (EP6) - Time to rise - Kensington Studios

This song is my absolute favourite, I listen to it whether I'm feeling good or bad and the song suits perfect Quinn. Whether it's hate or love towards her, brought by players or those around her inside the game, Being a DIK needs Quinn in the story.

My number II: Let's dance Jojo! (EP8) - You're Easy To Love - Diverse Music

Great song, great scene with the dancing and a great dance partner with our beloved Josy.

My number III: Ending of (EP7) - Maybe Someday - Olive Musique

The song fits perfectly with the end of the episode connecting the thoughts and feelings of the characters.

My number IV: Sleeping with Josy (EP7) - Mayday - Doo Dah Music

I started Being a DIK because of Josy and haven't regretted it. Beautiful, nice girl and great song. Josy will always have a place in my heart and this song on my list.

My number V: Taking care of Sage (EP6) - In the Morning Light - John Lowell Anderson

A cute sleepover with the hottest redhead in the game with a great song in the background. With something like that, even a sick Sage immediately feels much better.

My number VI: Nicole and Sandy (EP6) - Lovin' Loud - Wolves

A good beat and rhythm paired with the best unfortunately only side girl not main girl Nicole.

My number VII: Date with Jill (EP6) - The Summer Song - Max Brodie

A sweet innocent song on a date with a sweet innocent Jill fits perfectly and for a short time inside the game, Tremolo gets size competition with the horse in the background.

My number VIII: Pool with Bella (EP4) - All of the Pieces - Emily Ventre

A song with the best librarian and teacher has to be in my top list there is no other way. Great woman and great song and Bella's heart is big enough for more great new songs in the next few episodes.

 

[AchedCroissant]

or He just a Giga Chad like Anos Voldigoad . and I' just realized I'm gonna rename my Character to Anos

Anos is Anus in spanish

 

[ChipLecsap]

Anos is Anus in spanish

and The Popsi Max that Maya drinks, mean Ass in hungarian

 

[Arigon]

Exactly, Nobody cares !! So it's a Goddamn Fucking WASTE of TIME.
It's like the second sex scene in the Interlude. Waste of Time. Because it has nothing to do with Zoey, and She was the main character.

Folks Saying DnG is waste of time, it is filler, but waste of time would be, if you as the player, MC is not part of it.
All of you guys NTR defence always based around : people just too sensitive, - its fall apart.
No, the reason for it , Because it's Waste of time. No Need to See Sage or Jill, and Joys or Bella, getting fucked by somebody else, because it is waste of development time. Expecially if MC not care about them , Becasue Why and How he would be know about this. ?!

or You suggesting , that He hide outside of the girls window and peek them getting fucked? Why would He do that. Why would be that a storyline in the game? Do You really consider this game on this level of Garbage?

You want DPC to waste the development time to create, Renders and Animation, for one of the love interest who you not end up with, showing her life, that see she is fine she get her morning bukkake, becasue of Realism ?
and others are the snowflake because they don't want this?.

DPC doesn't show us, Lily or Envy, Rio, mel, sara , etc, serving someone in the VIP room not because of Snowflakes , But because it's a Waste of Time, and Everyone Will Rightfully bitching about.

He does not even show Josy and Maya sex scene, if you not part of their relationship. Because otherwise, it's not MC's business , it's not the player's business. You dont need to know about it. Once MC decided to choose stay with a girl, the other Girls Personal Life is no longer his concern.

If one of them is Cheating on the MC , thats a difference. But you not gonna see the actual cheating storyline, you going to caught the cheating. Like getting a letter of a photo, or you walk in the room. But that is a whole diferent Scenario.

Peace

Someone is venting today!!

Personally, I am not an NTR fan, but frankly, I think that it is better for the story if the MC is shown some consequences that are not related to leaving a girl on the floor of a burning house when he clearly could have carried not just one, but both of them out.

Seriously for a moment.

You guys all know by now that I do like and am a fan of DPC's art. You also know I do not have the same feelings about his writing. Consequences in a story matter. It doesn't have to be leaving a girl to die stupidly in a burning building to make our guts wrench. It could be as simple as FuckFace MC walks in on one of the DIKs plowing Quinn. Tommy could be in that situation, or Rusty even if Quinn pitched it right.

He should know that there are consequences, and all the readers as well, for not doing something, or doing something, or sometimes shit just happens. That makes the story resonate. Again, I am not a fan of NTR, but I also am not a flinching coward about it either. To think that the MC is the only one getting ass is stupid. To think the MC is the only one getting ass from all the HOT girls is even more stupid. Show them fucking someone, and maybe you don't support the menu items.

Anyway, I am really not looking to change anyone's mind on this. I am just saying that it doesn't have to be a THING that ruins a story, especially if it is not a Love Interest. Of COURSE if it were Bella or any of the others, I would be crushed with respect to that love interest. Maybe I should be. I personally was very offended at the way DPC handled his Acting Lessons story. So were a bunch of us. So I get it as far as this goes I suppose. Still, my post was for comedy bud. No harm no foul!
Peace

 

[Arigon]

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you had to ruin your great post with the GOBLIN PRINCESS pic??????

 

[AchedCroissant]

and The Popsi Max that Maya drinks, mean Ass in hungarian

Popsi pic when Chip?

 

[dalli_x]

if you're talking about animations, time-consuming in development, where they have sex, I also agree. but how can their personal relationships be unnecessary and a waste of time? whether MC is present or not is secondary, we are the ones being told the story, not him.

seeing John Boy and Elena in bed together, always all over each other is not a waste of time, it serves to characterize them.

seeing Maya and Josy's flashback was not a waste of time, it served to characterize them and show instead of tell.

on the contrary, Bella's flashback is so aseptic that the only way to digest it is to invent theories (the sixth sense) that anyway do not seem so absurd in order to explain what we were shown

You have to differentiate. A review is there so that we as players can better understand the characters in the game. So it's not a waste of time.

But when the MC was at EP7's HOT party, for example, it would have been a waste of time and unrealistic for DPC to show us what Tommy, Rusty, Jamie, and Leon were doing at the time. Realism would have been lost because the MC can't be in two places at once in the present, so it would have been a waste of time to create scenes for Tommy, Rusty, Jamie, and Leon. Through a text message from Jamie to the MC, we know what Jamie and Leon are doing. They are going to a bar. But do we also need to see what they are doing there?

Again to NTR. How many people in this world cheat on their relationship partner without them knowing? Many. In real life, very few people know about it, so they don't know anything about being cheated on, because you can't be in two places at once. So such scenes are not necessary until the MC catches a LI or Side Girl inflagrantie.

 

[ChipLecsap]

Popsi pic when Chip?

Here a Popsi for you. Very nice Popsi indeed