VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Hesteros]

Surely, Maya already has sex with MC, has fun with MC, is in relation with MC but still it's like one step at a time for her. I expect her to tell everything to MC in ep8 considering their relation grew stronger in ep7, bcuz of Josy or Maya choices.

She definitely would trust MC more.

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I Honestly wish that this loan fuck up gets over in ep8, and Maya lives a happy life with a big smile on her face. I do not wish her to remain sad and depressed.

The problem's not yet solved, but we have seen glimpses of a more cheerful Maya near the end of Ep 7, after talking with Ashley & Sarah.

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It was before Sage came to her room, so then she still had no way out of her problem. She was in an even better situation by the end of the episode.

 

[DavDR]

FYI, The impressive photoshop is done by DPC himself Seems like you didn't notice.....

MC asks Maya in either ep2 or 3 whether is she sure of the tuition thing, She has doubts at that time. During the swimming pool scene, Quinn asks the daughters whether they have heard about the rumor regarding tuition to which they all reply yes. Quinn continues saying that some HoT member can't keep her mouth shut. She asks if all of them are ready to pledge, to which Camila responds yes, Mona responds free tuition, sign me up and finally Maya responds yes as well.

Now if the other two agreed, surely they would have also heard and maybe confirmed about it, but SURELY, they might have not done it. Maya had a small hope of getting this tuition and seeing Quinn say like that ,neither agreeing nor denying and other girls trusting it as well, her hope became big.

The worst thing is that none of the other sisters said about it or denied the fact or interrupted Quinn. Sarah and Mel were there as well and If I am not wrong some other HoT's as well, why didn't they denied the rumor regarding tuition? were they deaf? Neither the other sisters said anything about it. This is why I believe that Maya trusted Quinn's word.



She had trust in her father earlier, after the fuck up, her trust might have decreased a lot but hasn't disappeared. She believes that her father will not fuck up anymore since he has already done a lot. And maybe he might not fuck situation anymore.

Maya trusting Quinn's word, I explained it above.

One is a father, one is a girl , something Maya has experienced. MC is a boy, Maya has never been intimate with a boy before, Derek is her brother...Several times she has thoughts like "this is my first time with a guy, this guy is making me feel happy", And at one point Maya starts to fall for MC. It's been a month approx. , would you expect Maya to tell MC all about her years and problems? Trusting a person and a word are 2 different things. Deep Trust in someone does not build within a month.

Surely, Maya already has sex with MC, has fun with MC, is in relation with MC but still it's like one step at a time for her. I expect her to tell everything to MC in ep8 considering their relation grew stronger in ep7, bcuz of Josy or Maya choices.

And maybe this is the reason why MJ path gets blocked if you go Quinn's path. IF a DIK MC knows about Maya's complications, there are chances he would spill it to Quinn, and then classic Quinn fucks Maya's life more.

I Honestly wish that this loan fuck up gets over in ep8, and Maya lives a happy life with a big smile on her face. I do not wish her to remain sad and depressed.

The only Sister's present for the tuition conversation are Quinn, Rionna, Sarah and Mel. Sage, Heather, Elena, and Arieth enter the room together and don't hear the conversation.

 

[`Ray`]

The only Sister's present for the tuition conversation are Quinn, Rionna, Sarah and Mel. Sage, Heather, Elena, and Arieth enter the room together and don't hear the conversation.

But that doesn't change the fact that Sarah and Mel were quiet. They didn't Deny the rumors regarding tuition. Surely one of the reasons why I hate both of them

PS: They might be in the restaurant but they aren't that close to Quinn. We have seen 1-2 conversations maximum with between the three of them.

 

[arpaschad]

PS.
On the topic of suspension of disbelief...
Why doesn't anyone complain about the MC being hung such that it'd make porn stars jealous?
Where's the complaints that:
"Hey! That guy is short and most short guys have short cocks! It's not real enough!
I want to play a short MC that a realistically small dick!!!"

Yeah I agree...why do male MC's in games like this always have horse hangers between their legs? why are they always attractive white men?

Can't you start as an average (ugly) looking south-east Asian man with a micro dick that can pass for a woman's clit?

suspension of disbelief...suspension of disbelief...calm down...you don't need to play your loser self in a porn game set in a fantasy world...suspension of disbelief...suspension of disbelief...

Good thing we won't go down that slippery slope then lmao...

 

[Deleted member 3428287]

Can't you start as an average (ugly) looking south-east Asian man with a micro dick that can pass for a woman's clit?

to each his own i guess

 

[dalli_x]

I don't know where you're getting him wearing the same suit for 20 years?

The image in season 1 isn't a flashback.

But later when we meet this man he's wearing the same jacket as a guy we're shown earlier.

The guy with the red hair is talking about a vacation not business.

And we learned Jill had a sister far before she was introduced, it's been an important part of her character for a long time.

It's the reason she does everything she does.

Lynette having a brother who just so happens to work at the school the MC is going to, is a storyline you created with no evidence, just some batshit crazy theory you want to be true.

You should not talk things up.

So you think the image in EP1 is not a flashback? Well then, fuck the wall. Neil had contact with Lynette's father for 18-19 years. That's news.

The guy with red hair talk a lot about tax savings and a business meeting. Read it again.

But we didn't learn in EP1 that Jill had a sister. Again, fuck the wall. We even learn she's a Royce much later.

If you had read my theories better, you would have known why. The inheritance from the MC came with a lawyer's letter which Neil and the MC didn't understand. I could very well imagine that there was also a life insurance policy for Lynette, which is certainly not small. Lynette's father could have been a fornicator and fathered a bastard. Accordingly Lynette's brother.

In the game, every woman is inseminated at some point.

 

[AchedCroissant]

Actually, Ashley joined, because Maya did it.

Oh, so you like Maya hmm, to bad you are Derek's girl, otherwise , we might invite you to our little fuck fest. You , Maya, Josy, Me

I never came up with this because I never saw it as something special but we know that Ashley and Maya in the end while Ashley goes out with Derek Maya is her "sister-in-law"

and some folks dare to say that Maya was not treated like shit and meet with a hostile environment, when we have direct evidence of how they saw her . " Quinn's Toy ". it's worse than being "Quinn's Bitch " if you are her Bitch at least you can fuck her

I don't understand Malenie's expression because she looks surprised so what the hell does she play?

. it was not as discrete, it was less discrete than Josy and MC Fucking in the Hots pool.

She is so beautiful

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I mean so that someone would not come as happened with me and trolled as he did to you Ward

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[`Ray`]

I don't know where you're getting him wearing the same suit for 20 years?

The image in season 1 isn't a flashback.

But later when we meet this man he's wearing the same jacket as a guy we're shown earlier.

The guy with the red hair is talking about a vacation not business.

And we learned Jill had a sister far before she was introduced, it's been an important part of her character for a long time.

It's the reason she does everything she does.

Lynette having a brother who just so happens to work at the school the MC is going to, is a storyline you created with no evidence, just some batshit crazy theory you want to be true.

"DPC tends to re-use assets in different places" ↓↓↓

DPC tends to re-use assets in different places, like the newspaper:

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Bella and Jill's book:

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The drawers and desk in the MC's bedroom and Maya's dorm:

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Even the MC and Tommy have the same skin map:

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it could just be another case of re-used assets.

It is not necessarily a Hint or something. It could be a re-used asset as well. And it's not like it was the one and only suit in the whole world.

 

[dalli_x]

Unless you are undercover DPC trolling the pirates of his game
how can you be so sure when on the contrary , there is so much evidence against it

1.st of all from the photo frame projectile domestic violence scene from the opening of ep3 and Jade's conversation with MC about her priorities being her career and KIDS , its 100% fact that little tybee has a sibling

2.nd episode when MC was going to bang Sage out in the open party only to get cockblocked by Jacob ,
Jacob thinks thinks banging Sage in the open will be CNN breaking news which will reach chad before sunrise and also someone else who who will also be bothered by 2 consenting adult students fucking in a party
this raises some questions
*like why people fucking in frat party that newsworthy (maybe because its the Dean/professor's daughter)
*why would that certain someone get pissed because 2 people fucking in a frat party (pretty good guess would be her influential parents) .
*Unless that certain someone is closely related to the day to day operations of the college and important enough to be known by a simple dik like Jacob (like dean/professor), how will that news news reach the certain someone so quickly

3.Quinn despite of being the VP needed Sage to convince Tybalt (who was a dick even to Rusty) to hire HOTs for their party

4. During the prep party Sage said her dad was out kissing rich ass and looking for business venture , but to me it seemed like the manbun guy was just chatting with students and one occasionally forced his way to a holiday invite
On the other hand the kissing some rich ass was very reason Tybalt threw this party , and who could tech his son the art of ass licking better than the father (the professor)

5. The manbun guy was expecting to see her daughter in the party .
*Jill lives in the mansion and said she attends some of the prep parties ,and most likely she would have attended the last one but had to skip it in the last moment because of Cathy
*Sage and hots were supposed to be at the diks party but at the last moment they ditched them for the preps

6. lastly is it that unlikely that Sage a college girl dyed her hair to become a firey red head

I don't mean the redhead guy with the braid with Sage's dad either. The one with the red short hair.

The one with the braid could be Rusty's father. Rusty once said that his father was pretty cool. So he was in a good mood. He's also important enough to talk to all the professors.

 

[zizo10z]

I think the minor characters are more important than the main characters, because always, if you want to know something, you just find it by chance with the minor characters, And also something strange. Why does Madame Rose have something special, I mean, why is she the only one we take her phone number and why is she the only one wearing a face mask.

because you already have a month's subscription to the club, why is she the one who takes her phone number and wears a mask and she was not mentioned from anyone ? A character like what Tommy mentioned Tania when he said that i slept with her and everyone liked her although i find that Madame Rose the most beautiful.

but i feel that she has a role and I have a feeling that the developer does not drop a character like this without knowing her face or anything about her just to have sex.

because it is possible That makes it easier than that, as i said, you already have a free month, so you can go at any time and sleep with any girl, but the developer made you with only one character, Madame Rose. I just think she has a role in the story even if it's a small part and not just for sex

 

[`Ray`]

I don't mean the redhead guy with the braid with Sage's dad either. The one with the red short hair.

The one with the braid could be Rusty's father. Rusty once said that his father was pretty cool. So he was in a good mood. He's also important enough to talk to all the professors.

But Dalli think of it, If He is Rusty's father who is a Burgmeister who maybe is at the same level as Royce, wouldn't he have a lot of people around him and following him like a dog. You know how families try to make a relation with high families.

And I don't think Rusty's father was even present in the whole campus. He would have surely informed Rusty and moreover, the same night after few hours or maybe 1 hour ,they return to their mansion and find the windows broken and Rusty goes to call his father. If his father was present in prep's party, he would have visited their mansion as well.

 

[dalli_x]

But Dalli think of it, If He is Rusty's father who is a Burgmeister who maybe is at the same level as Royce, wouldn't he have a lot of people around him and following him like a dog. You know how families try to make a relation with high families.

And I don't think Rusty's father was even present in the whole campus. He would have surely informed Rusty and moreover, the same night after few hours or maybe 1 hour ,they return to their mansion and find the windows broken and Rusty goes to call his father. If his father was present in prep's party, he would have visited their mansion as well.

I don't think Rusty's father will be that popular because he doesn't have a stick up his ass. He is in a good mood and has fun. In certain social circles, such things are not welcome. But his word carries weight. I seriously wonder what Rusty's father discusses with the professors. It is also strange that the DIK Mansion is destroyed on this very evening. Rusty calls his father and he doesn't help him anymore.

Believe me when I say that everything is a big test concerning the MC. He was in trouble at 15 and someone helped Neil and the MC without revealing themselves. There will be some at B&R who know more about the MC than the MC himself.

You will also see that the Pink Rose will change and the Madame has to do with it. When I look at how I did my game, not illegal anymore, I wasn't in the bar, MC asks Rusty if he called the police yet, I don't trust Tommy, etc. The Pink Rose is crashing more and more and becoming a shithole. Something will change there, I'm relatively sure.

 

[Niu6609]

I think the minor characters are more important than the main characters, because always, if you want to know something, you just find it by chance with the minor characters, And also something strange. Why does Madame Rose have something special, I mean, why is she the only one we take her phone number and why is she the only one wearing a face mask.

because you already have a month's subscription to the club, why is she the one who takes her phone number and wears a mask and she was not mentioned from anyone ? A character like what Tommy mentioned Tania when he said that i slept with her and everyone liked her although i find that Madame Rose the most beautiful.

but i feel that she has a role and I have a feeling that the developer does not drop a character like this without knowing her face or anything about her just to have sex.

because it is possible That makes it easier than that, as i said, you already have a free month, so you can go at any time and sleep with any girl, but the developer made you with only one character, Madame Rose. I just think she has a role in the story even if it's a small part and not just for sex

You fucking better bet she has a role in the game. Her role is for me to fuck her so I can finally get all the 101 scenes to quell my completionist side

On a serious note, she might play an important role in the story in the future, that much I agree with, mainly because of her position in the Pink Rose. We might run into her whether or not we've chosen to accept the VIP pass, since she after all is the owner (I think?) of the Pink Rose. Her current role is vague, since we've only been to the Pink Rose a few times, but I'm hoping that something related to Nicole will pop up in the future, and maybe she'd play a role in that scenario as her employer.

 

[zizo10z]

I don't think Rusty's father will be that popular because he doesn't have a stick up his ass. He is in a good mood and has fun. In certain social circles, such things are not welcome. But his word carries weight. I seriously wonder what Rusty's father discusses with the professors. It is also strange that the DIK Mansion is destroyed on this very evening. Rusty calls his father and he doesn't help him anymore.

Believe me when I say that everything is a big test concerning the MC. He was in trouble at 15 and someone helped Neil and the MC without revealing themselves. There will be some at B&R who know more about the MC than the MC himself.

You will also see that the Pink Rose will change and the Madame has to do with it. When I look at how I did my game, not illegal anymore, I wasn't in the bar, MC asks Rusty if he called the police yet, I don't trust Tommy, etc. The Pink Rose is crashing more and more and becoming a shithole. Something will change there, I'm relatively sure.

Allow me to join you in the discussion
I only have one question why at this time the mother's diary, clothes and money were sent
Isn't everything related to the mother supposed to be in the husband's hands since the mother's death and he keeps it until his son grows up and gives it to him

 

[LoDoN-]

As I tried to explain to you, the DIKs weren't in the dark (as far as they knew). What was the rush to discuss something the DIKs already know? The HOTs changing plans might be a bummer, but there would be plenty of other opportunities to party with the DIKs. It only became a disaster because Quinn ducked out of warning the DIKs, and we know Quinn kept that part a secret.

And that's assuming the HOTs knew they were originally going to be at the DIKs; Heather clearly did not know that.
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I agree that Elena would probably have learned about the Hell Week plans from John Boy if nothing else, but again, there was no pressing need to discuss the disappointing news right then. You say the girls must have had some warning since they had to get dressed, but they already knew they were going to a party and it's not like they changed to clothes especially suited to the prep party. It's likely they really did learn at the last minute since Quinn wanted to keep this quiet.

So I replayed the whole part of the game, to be sure.

As I tried to explain to you, it doesn't make sense, that no one knew anything until late at night.

As I replayed the chapter I noticed some things and will correct my statements now.

1. The girls didn't need to dress fancy (I just remembered Maya and Josy) they were all in HoT's uniforms (except for daughters).

2. There is no way you can deny Quinn's fault here, she was the operator behind everything, tho Sage still to blame for the omission.

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My main point was that this whole radio silent thing that caused all this commotion was contrived since these people live on their phones. Notice how Josy still had her phone. And I will not back out of Elena just not talking with John-boy as even the game realizes this hole, but acknowledging doesn't change its existence.

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Btw, as I replayed I noticed how red Riona's eyes always are (yes, I didn't notice before), damn girl you need to lay off the weed.

 

[zizo10z]

You fucking better bet she has a role in the game. Her role is for me to fuck her so I can finally get all the 101 scenes to quell my completionist side

For sex, I find it very expensive, but it is worth it
Man, to get a bj , I have to pay 4 dollars, what do I pay when I sleep with her then
This makes sense. In episode 7, you update the wallet. I think, my friend, that you will reach the viewer, but make your wallet full of money

 

[JETracktor]

Allow me to join you in the discussion
I only have one question why at this time the mother's diary, clothes and money were sent
Isn't everything related to the mother supposed to be in the husband's hands since the mother's death and he keeps it until his son grows up and gives it to him

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[zizo10z]

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Yea i know that , but in the end, the mother's belongings were sent, and of course they knew that their daughter had a son, and of course they knew that she died after she gave birth to the baby.

you know what , It was a misplaced question because it would bring more questions than answers

 

[LoDoN-]

The problem we run into when we hang out on the forums (too much? ) discussing a piece of writing is that we run out of big things to talk about. Then we start nit-picking little things and, maybe, reading too much into it when it doesn't line up with reality.

Reminder: Suspension of disbelief.

LoDoN,
You're absolutely correct that in reality there's almost zero chance one of the girl-friends wouldn't have mentioned it to their DIK boyfriend. Or any of that HOTs wouldn't have said something on social media.
But the B&R campus is a work of fiction.
We apply 'suspension of disbelief', accept that this is the way it happened because that's the way the author said it happened.

If DPC were to try and write it to line up with reality it would A) bore you to death, and B) make 'War and Peace' look like a light read.

We should discuss our theories of character motivations, where the story is going, what we don't exactly like about the story, etc, etc. to our hearts content.

But when you catch yourself nit-picking details, remind yourself of those 3 words. 'Suspension of disbelief'


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On the topic of suspension of disbelief...
Why doesn't anyone complain about the MC being hung such that it'd make porn stars jealous?
Where's the complaints that:
"Hey! That guy is short and most short guys have short cocks! It's not real enough!
I want to play a short MC that a realistically small dick!!!"

Ok, this one got me mad, not gonna lie, had to calm myself down before answering.

This will depend on what you consider Nit-picking. I don't consider constructive criticism as nit-picking. I'm not going DavDR and saying the story is trash.

I'm merely pointing out how this entire exchange made no sense in the setting of the story. As you mention "suspension of disbelief" is applied when the audience feels inserted in the world of the story, hence you can not simply utilize it to disregard the complete void of interactions between characters for the sake of this little subplot to happen.

I hate when people try to dismiss you with the "lol you cared what a loser!". As in my previous comment, I realize I was misremembering things and corrected myself after a playthrough of the events. But my overall thought remains, in the previously established lore of this story there is no way the HoT's would go party with the preps with no one finding out, Elena not talking to John-Boy, Josy not calling the MC (she is seen with her cellphone at the party).

Once the rules of the story are broken suspension of disbelief goes out the window, just think 'The Last Jedi', that dumpster-fire, SW had a previously set of rules applied to it, we assumed that Space work normally, but according to the Last Jedi, Space has gravity. Luke is not the saviour, Leia has superpowers, etc... If you look at it as an independent movie, it looks like a Sci-fy Michael Bay flick, but if you look at it understanding the rules of the overarching story it becomes garbage.

As I previously pointed out in many statements, the story is not perfect, but it is really good. The game is vanilla so what keeps us here ain't the kinks, it's the characters, so when they act differently from what the story would dictate them to act it will feel like a contrivance, that will go according to the type of writer that is making the story, some like to just drop their characters and see where the story goes, others like to make their characters for specific actions, the narrator vs the architect.

And again, at the end of things what changed in the overall story? Nothing. The Dik's go back to the HoT's (I mean they are Hot so can't blame them), Tommy goes back to Quinn (coz he is a drug addict and she is his dealer). You could say that it served to make the protagonist take a bigger part of the responsibility in the fraternity, and instill distrust among the DiK's in Tommy's leadership. But that will remain to be seen, and if this quick rupture that happens in chapter 5 doesn't lead anywhere we would be staring at a Chekov's gun (A completely useless story element that just serves for the author to shoot himself in the foot). It was a good excuse for the MC to have exclusive use of the whole HoT corps tho, that I will recognize.

Tl;dr: I'm not saying the story sucks, but if you just clap and cheer people won't ever get better at what they do. Contrivances matter to keep the story congealed and although I care, it didn't take away from my enjoyment of the VN.

Edit: Typos

 

[Kukipett]

Yea i know that , but in the end, the mother's belongings were sent, and of course they knew that their daughter had a son, and of course they knew that she died after she gave birth to the baby.

you know what , It was a misplaced question because it would bring more questions than answers

That's exactly what makes that game good, always more questions than answers !!
And that's why there are 6990 pages here with people trying to imagine and guess what's it's all about.