this looks interesting and it's a very well structured request, if i can make a suggestion though:
Your download links do not work because you put them all together
you should structure your download links a bit better so they can fit more inline with the other posts on the site, something like this
WIN:
You must be registered to see the links
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You must be registered to see the links
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You must be registered to see the links
MAC:
You must be registered to see the links
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You must be registered to see the links
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You must be registered to see the links
also for the SPOILERS you are using you can remove the extra SPOILER in them just for aesthetic reasons
finally I see you are the developer of this game and I suggest you contact admin/staff and ask for a 'Game Developer' tag for your profile so that you can be easily identified as the developer.
Best of luck with your game
EDIT: also I see that you mention English is not your first language, there are many helpful people here that can help you proofread and re-write the script if need be, myself included. All you have to do is ask for help