Wich ending do you reached in game? Ver 1.01Full


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Joraell

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VoidSite I said it before. Give me maybe 20 years and I will make the game where averybody can do what they want. I think you guys complayning about possible oportunities. First may look that this game is Almost 1 man project and not making 50 000/month to hire other 50 people to fulfill your dreams about game where everybody can do what they want. BTW even GTA V have it's limits.

About Writtings. Yeah I know it is not the best.

Also.. if you match the premise being dead.. one month.. superpowers etc.. would you care about sleeping early to wake up early, so you are not late for school? REALLY? Youre last month on earth and all you care about is: Not beeing late for school, "I cant do this and that because it would cause problems to XY", "There is a volleyball tournament tomorrow" etc..
Exactly these things where making me thinking how old the dev might be..
There is so much trivial stuff in this game. For a 15 year old, yes.. coming late, get detention, looks, socializing etc is important. But for grown people this is by far the last important thing on earth. Espeacially when its your last month on earth.
And this is the maybe most funny thing. Cause it's not about how old dev is, but about how old is MC of the game, and he is definitelly not 30.
BTW Dev is 34 and more you can find .

About map. Yes now map is almost 100% useles, but it is here cause in next updates another possible things to do will come. Game is in development. That means you must include things from near begining even if you will use that later.

Little more realistic look on the things doesn't hurt you.
 
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VoidSite

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VoidSite I said it before. Give me maybe 20 years and I will make the game where averybody can do what they want. I think you guys complayning about possible oportunities. First may look that this game is Almost 1 man project and not making 50 000/month to hire other 50 people to fulfill your dreams about game where everybody can do what they want. BTW even GTA V have it's limits.
Yes. You are right. But I dont want to have the opportunity to peel a banana, read an ingame book from a bookshelf that contains 200 Books or have the possibility to clean the floor because its dirty. I was not talking about that kind "Freedom of Action". I was talking about the expectation I had, as I realize the Idea that you had.

See... if someone comes to you, hand you a remote, and explain: This is the button to be Invisible, this one is to possess other people, here you can press to see the last special Moments of a person, here you can shrink people, here you can enlarge them and finaly here you can fill them up with lust.
What would come to your mind, with this set of skills?
And even if I have no idea who you are, I am sure that most of the things that come to your mind, would also come to mine.
But in the game...

I am a programmer myself. I know exactly how much work it is. And beside VFX, I have no share to 3D modelling and Rendering etc. But I know that this is even more hard work. Thats why I would never compare an F95 Dev with a real game Dev.
I know that almost no Dev here has the Ressources or the Money to by them. Most are like you, small teams between 1-3 peeps. And thats totaly fine. It also makes some of the games here special.

The lack in your game (from my perspective ofc), is that the fact that I am died and have superpowers seems like an excuse for "You play different MC's". The Boy is not interested in his own death, he dont think about it, he dont investigate it, his crave to speak to his mother is extinguished in a blink of an eye.. And YES, I know this is a porn game, no Erotic adventure, no Adult game with pron in it.. A porn game. But I still think the fact that you are DEAD now, shout matter more then "Yes lets go shopping! I wish I would have the boob-expander-pills with me".



And this is the maybe most funny thing. Cause it's not about how old dev is, but about how old is MC of the game, and he is definitelly not 30.
Well.. could be a point for you. I'll give you that.
At least it would be a total unique experience for everyone here, to play a "real" 15 Year old. Not the body of one like in almost all other games then even the thoughts and the behavior of a 15 year old. I am honest, no sarcasm, no ironics.. it can be an interesting experience. But also It can easily backfire to you. We'll see when it is done.

Game is in development. That means you must include things from near begining even if you will use that later.
We both know, that include dont means: show.
An easy algorithm with state-flagging. I know that there is no Switch-case in phython. But you have dictionary mapping which is even more powerfull.
And for dev mode, you can easy comment it out or define a "dev"-method.
sorry.. I know that you know that, but I felt a bit triggered ^^

Little more realistic look on the things doesn't hurt you.
Sure it doesn't. But I hope you dont see my critic as a personal attack. It is just critic on the product you delivered.
Reviews are not carved in stone. If upcoming iterations of the game change anything on my thoughts, I will reflect this in the review.
 
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Joraell

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Sure it doesn't. But I hope you dont see my critic as a personal attack. It is just critic on the product you delivered.
Reviews are not carved in stone. If upcoming iterations of the game change anything on my thoughts, I will reflect this in the review.
If you don't realise. Your thougts is not realizable by rockstrar games and you think one guy (me) can make it? Well I don't know man but one of us is little naive.

About my idea you just saying .Well you get great idea but it is your curse now. cause making the game that is realizable by this idea will takes you 20 years. thats is your opinion in short...

So Other much more stupid games is fine cause they have no idea.... So they can be just stupid as othesr... Cool.

In short you complaining about how game can be not about how game is. If you will use that view on every game on f95 they all will go into same trash as mine, even Phillis CoBD wich is probably by story best game here. Still there is big holes and cliches and for someone stupidthinking. But man that is not holywood movie with 300million budget.... That is still the difference. One person cannot be great graphic, great writter, programer and musican at once. Making this games is all about compromise between qualitty and time.
If you are programmer. You know it pretty well. And in this game it is 10% programming 90% GFX. Making 2 paths is double the work and so on tripe and etc....
 
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Android Version?
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The fan mod bugs out the game. This should really be part of the game itself, so you don't have to risk blue screen and it doesn't' break every time there is an update.
There are no known bugs with the mod and it does not break the game every time there's an update!
If you've encountered bugs with the mod, please report them in the mod thread.
 
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