Thank you!Really good so far. Thank you, Debating Panda.
A couple of nitpicks/thoughts:
Considering all this high tech stuff 2029 seems a bit soon, that's just 5 years from now.
"Some apes could beat chess grandmasters in less than ten turns..." moves, not turns. Also, no, no matter how supersmart, you won't beat a grandmaster in ten moves or less, that's still the opening phase. Just apes beating grandmasters sounds impressive enough, no need to lay it on too thick.
Little bit of imagination and also a fictional world so I have some tolerance. Also with all those publicly available high tech, how do you know what non public technology already exists?
The other points are valid, gonna have a look at them!