T51bwinterized

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Hey Drooskati congrats on all the work you've put into becoming a developer. Hope the project works out sucesffuly for you. (Feel free to Private Message me and I can give you some marketing tips).

On a personal level, I'm always on the lookout for games that contains themes like BDSM and Slavery with a female sub in them. Ya enjoy what you enjoy, you know? I saw you included them on the list of tags. Mind spilling the beans a bit in terms of what you have planned on that front and how extensive you plan to make it?
 

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Okay, finally finished the release.

It was good, the renders are top notch and the story feels like it has potential. That said I think this is going to be a wait and see for me. There are SO many "planned" tags listed that I am nervous this is overly ambitious and an attempt to please nearly everybody. In addition I really like the story that is going on right now, the everyday slice of life story, to the point I am actually dreading (to a small degree) the inevitable switch to the "other world". I hope this is going to be a story that goes back and forth between the two worlds versus being a "stuck in fantasy land" story.
Anyway, even though Hannah is a very cute redhead, I still don't like starting the game in a committed relationship. Unless she does something terrible I don't see any reason to have the MC breakup, I nearly always go for the redhead so I don't need to have the MC chase her this time. The rest of the ladies are cute but the MC already has the best one. It's also cool to see a committed gay couple in a game instead of the "Token gay best friend" stereotype we often see.

Drooskati I look forward to seeing this continue, good job, and best of luck!
 
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Drooskati

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Okay, finally finished the release.

It was good, the renders are top notch and the story feels like it has potential. That said I think this is going to be a wait and see for me. There are SO many "planned" tags listed that I am nervous this is overly ambitious and an attempt to please nearly everybody. In addition I really like the story that is going on right now, the everyday slice of life story, to the point I am actually dreading (to a small degree) the inevitable switch to the "other world". I hope this is going to be a story that goes back and forth between the two worlds versus being a "stuck in fantasy land" story.
Anyway, even though Hannah is a very cute redhead, I still don't like starting the game in a committed relationship. Unless she does something terrible I don't see any reason to have the MC breakup, I nearly always go for the redhead so I don't need to have the MC chase her this time. The rest of the ladies are cute but the MC already has the best one. It's also cool to see a committed gay couple in a game instead of the "Token gay best friend" stereotype we often see.

Drooskati I look forward to seeing this continue, good job, and best of luck!
Thank you :) And I can actually set your mind at ease on one thing right now. My pattern is already set to do Real World > Game world > Real World > Game world, etc. Each release will focus either entirely, or primarily (There will be some crossover, as indicated by the description), in one world and then the other.

For example, Chapter 2 will start out with some prep work regarding the choice made Re: Emily, then move into the game world (Which is why I ended Ch 1 on Wed night, because Thursday is Game night). Chapter 3 will then go back to the real world, and the choices you make here in Chapter 1 will play out (Primarily having a party vs going to the lake).

And thank you again regarding Oscar and Kenny. I spent a significant amount of time crafting them as more than just background noise. They will absolutely play important roles in the game in their own rights.

Edit: Just want to add a note regarding the planned tags. Keep in mind that many of them are natural progression of some relationships, even if only 1 on 1 with Hannah. 10 of the tags, on their own, could easily apply JUST to her, without ever having to involve a single other character, and some of them have even been hinted at by Hannah to do with the player in Ch1. But yes, overall I'm being ambitious, and yes, even if I get zero monthly support, I'll be seeing this all the way through. I have a story to tell and I want to tell it :)
 
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MrFriendly

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Is anyone else getting the vibes that the gf has crush on that blue haired girl or something? Or am I just overanalysing it?
No, I got that. If that happens my MC will dump her ass... For some reason a lot of people think that the lack of a penis doesn't make it cheating. As written right now the MC doesn't seem overly interested in anyone but his girlfriend, yet Hannah seems to definitely have a thing for her roommate - pressing her to get lingerie, watching her change clothing, pressing her to get a sexy swimsuit, etc. I am tired of the trend of all women in porn (game or otherwise) being bisexual.

It is too early to tell but for me if the gf has a bisexual fling or tells the MC she wants to have a threesome with her roommate I hope we are given the chance to break up with her. I also hope that all of the sex is optional. Don't give me a bunch of story branches but then require the MC to fuck.
 
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darth_hiruma

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Overall plot looks interesting but story is meh in ch1 right now. Understandable since it's just intro. Decent render and animation. And it's harem :BootyTime:
 

ChesseKun

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no big tits and no milfs I'm in. and a cute redhead, if the animation is decent and it manages to avoid the DAZ Psyco face this could be magical.
 

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Not too bad so far. Nice supernatural element as well, which is fun. You already started the game out with the MC having a redhead girlfriend, so A+ on that lol. Usually when a game has you start with a girlfriend, I try to play the faithful boyfriend route right away. Always fun to try and resist temptation. But I noticed a harem tag planned for the future, so curious how that is going to play out now.

On a side note, we seem to get times where we see what Hannah is up to when the MC is not around. Is this going to lead to a multiple protagonist tag? Like making choices for Hannah as well as the MC? Don't mind if it does, as I actually find that fun (controlling both partners). Just thought I'd ask since there is a lot of scenes where the MC is not there and we are watching what Hannah is doing instead.

Overall though, nice start. Simple introductions to get a feel for the characters and set future events in motion. Awesome work, look forward to see how it all plays out. ;)
 
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Not too bad so far. Nice supernatural element as well, which is fun. You already started the game out with the MC having a redhead girlfriend, so A+ on that lol. Usually when a game has you start with a girlfriend, I try to play the faithful boyfriend route right away. Always fun to try and resist temptation. But I noticed a harem tag planned for the future, so curious how that is going to play out now.

On a side note, we seem to get times where we see what Hannah is up to when the MC is not around. Is this going to lead to a multiple protagonist tag? Like making choices for Hannah as well as the MC? Don't mind if it does, as I actually find that fun (controlling both partners). Just thought I'd ask since there is a lot of scenes where the MC is not there and we are watching what Hannah is doing instead.

Overall though, nice start. Simple introductions to get a feel for the characters and set future events in motion. Awesome work, look forward to see how it all plays out. ;)
Thank you :) Re: Scenes without the MC present, those will be phased out over the next chapter or two. The focus on this chapter was to build the characters, and the world. I wanted to show that they exist even when you're not directly interacting with them. There will be a little more in Chapter 2, since it'll be building the game world, but not as much since the base characters have now been established, and who they are will obviously bleed over. Beyond that, anything you see outside the view of the MC, will be for narrative purposes only, and no choices will be presented, since you, as the player, should be the one to make those choices.
 

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Thank you :) Re: Scenes without the MC present, those will be phased out over the next chapter or two. The focus on this chapter was to build the characters, and the world. I wanted to show that they exist even when you're not directly interacting with them. There will be a little more in Chapter 2, since it'll be building the game world, but not as much since the base characters have now been established, and who they are will obviously bleed over. Beyond that, anything you see outside the view of the MC, will be for narrative purposes only, and no choices will be presented, since you, as the player, should be the one to make those choices.
Cool deal, thanks for the heads up! I don't mind them, just wasn't sure how that was going to progress is all. Thanks! :)
 

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Best of luck to the developer....
It seems like the swarm of, "if the game has/doesn't have XYZ" bees has already descended... which is a shame as I hope it doesn't prevent you from making the game you want to make.
 

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Best of luck to the developer....
It seems like the swarm of, "if the game has/doesn't have XYZ" bees has already descended... which is a shame as I hope it doesn't prevent you from making the game you want to make.
Not in the least :) I'm old enough to be aware that it is impossible to please everyone. And besides, I know the story I want to tell. It will be told. I'm just happy to bring people along for the ride!
 

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Will you be able to break up with the gf? She obviously has a thing for her roommate and i'm not really into that.
I don't think so. I kind of want to break up with her too because of that but there are 3 girls in the banner and I'm guessing they're the Lis so you would essentially be cutting off 2 of them right of the bat and the third one is their friend so idk how that would work tbh.

So I think we're stuck with her.
 
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ChesseKun

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ok, I just finished it and it's not bad the animation quality is really good. however, in the beginning, it says all characters are at least 18. a shame since bailey is quite cute and I think she might be up for a threesome with big sis. but you also have the incest tag however there has been no mention of the MCs family and from the girls, all the siblings seem to be 14. that leaves what Hannah and her mom.
 

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ok, I just finished it and it's not bad the animation quality is really good. however, in the beginning, it says all characters are at least 18. a shame since bailey is quite cute and I think she might be up for a threesome with big sis. but you also have the incest tag however there has been no mention of the MCs family and from the girls, all the siblings seem to be 14. that leaves what Hannah and her mom.
A future character? oh and...There coming to get you Barbara.
 

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Most devs start with levitating objects, poking clothing, and weird charaters' expressions, let alone lighting. But your renders are perfect.

Also, I like your MC. Her hairdo fits her very well; the shape of her lips draws the eye in a good way.

The story looks interesting. Good luck with your project!
 
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Most devs start with levitating objects, poking clothing, and weird charaters' expressions, let alone lighting. But your renders are perfect.

Also, I like your MC. Her hairdo fits her very well; the shape of her lips draws the eye in a good way.

The story looks interesting. Good luck with your project!
Thank you :) There are a handful of renders where issues are present, that I've noticed after the fact (I won't say where, because they are quite small and most people would never notice them!), but I absolutely spent a lot of time redoing renders and poses when I discovered issues. Also, again I must credit recreation (Bad Memories). His lighting guides, and in depth review of the tone mapping section of Daz were incredibly helpful in learning how to light things properly, and make them look presentable. I still have much to learn, but I'll get there!
 
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