VN Ren'Py Abandoned Blairewood [Prologue Rework] [BlackFeather]

[Gamesstar]

If you guys think it has has NTR just because some random indie dude said so.. I don't know what say, but There won't be any NTR or cuck hold scenes in this game. if there is one that would in an other way around lol.. Yeah we were planning for that "Girl finding someone else if you reject her." part but we were just planning and scratched that part. I'll update future tags soon.

Please add femdom for the future tag

 

[Cpt.SumTingWong]

Renders looks good

 

[Canto Forte]

Renders look stupendous and this is a rework, not anything more not anything better
in terms of story, good renders and interesting predicaments, but poor lore and
poor intrigue and less than understandable build up:
MC had a bad childhood, now has a bad adulthood and a make belief bipolar babe,
to add to the growing list of traits that make him unreliable as a narrator,
as a protagonist and somewhat of this antihero antagonist to the babe
he had strong feelings for as a child.
To make things worse, we got fly on the wall perspectives on scenes
of which MC could not possibly know about with people we know not
and of all those kiddies in the bathroom from the splash aggressive neauseating start
of this game there is no one but the MC left in the midst of triads wanna be posers
acting like the agency in charly”s angels.

Oh FFS guys he's only just released it on patreon and its already on here.. the guys worked his ass off and normally i wouldnt care about a leak here but given the work duration and time put in that fucking sucks

Renders looks good

There is nothing here to write home about, certainly nothing better over the former
installment, a story still hella disjointed mess going into the first chapter
that is already anounced pat re on exclusive we still have no clue what it will be about.

 

[Takkertje]

Renders look stupendous and this is a rework, not anything more not anything better
in terms of story, good renders and interesting predicaments, but poor lore and
poor intrigue and less than understandable build up:
MC had a bad childhood, now has a bad adulthood and a make belief bipolar babe,
to add to the growing list of traits that make him unreliable as a narrator,
as a protagonist and somewhat of this antihero antagonist to the babe
he had strong feelings for as a child.
To make things worse, we got fly on the wall perspectives on scenes
of which MC could not possibly know about with people we know not
and of all those kiddies in the bathroom from the splash aggressive neauseating start
of this game there is no one but the MC left in the midst of triads wanna be posers
acting like the agency in charly”s angels.



There is nothing here to write home about, certainly nothing better over the former
installment, a story still hella disjointed mess going into the first chapter
that is already anounced pat re on exclusive we still have no clue what it will be about.

So , your advice is to ignore this mess?

 

[LegendaryAsura]

Well, this looks promising. The prologue didn't explain too much of the story but hopefully we will get to know more things in future updates. Renders are really good, and yeah, it also gave me Summer's Gone vibes, but I don't want to compare them, cause this is just a prologue and Summer's Gone is... well, Summer's Gone.
I will keep a look on this project and see how frequent updates are and how much content each of them has. This has potential, so much encouragement to both creators.

 

[Freeze10p2w]

Is this you Oceanlab?

I thought the same thing with the intro image and the warning before the game starts xd got me confused for a moment

 

[Larry2000]

If you guys think it has has NTR just because some random indie dude said so.. I don't know what say, but There won't be any NTR or cuck hold scenes in this game. if there is one that would in an other way around lol.. Yeah we were planning for that "Girl finding someone else if you reject her." part but we were just planning and scratched that part. I'll update future tags soon.

We're gonna miss that storyline :'(

 

[Larry2000]

Is this you Oceanlab?

I mean a VERY similar style and more importantly, it took just about as long as an OceanLab update

It's all in good fun Don't kill me Deadpool DP D:

 

[delacroix2]

If you guys think it has has NTR just because some random indie dude said so.. I don't know what say, but There won't be any NTR or cuck hold scenes in this game. if there is one that would in an other way around lol.. Yeah we were planning for that "Girl finding someone else if you reject her." part but we were just planning and scratched that part. I'll update future tags soon.

Another """""""""""""""realistic game""""""""""""""". No thanks

 

[Elrompeortos2000]

Is pregnancy going to be a feature?

 

[skater555]

This is why i hate playing prologues, when something is this great, oh the wait the long wait for ch1 : /

 

[Deadpool DP]

This is why i hate playing prologues, when something is this great, oh the wait the long wait for ch1 : /

Don't worry I'll definitely make it quick on chapter 01.

 

[Black Swamp Ent.]

Renders are amazing, but the clusterfuck of a "plot" in the prologue definitely doesn't help. I get they're trying to be vague, but generally with an opening scene(s) like this you have further explanation right after or at least a beginning of world and character building. But because this is a work in progress, it's missing all of that build up after the "cold open", leaving everyone going "wtf?".

 

[RockyBalboa1985]

Ntr=I'm out
No Ntr=I'm in

 

[Mister_M]

Is she

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a romanceable option?

 

[Canto Forte]

Were you not paying attention at all?
She gets shot by the assassin with the gun

 

[darth_hiruma]

This is so fun to see, only the prologue is not setting up anything.
The many people in there have no explanation for them being there.
We do not understand or actually care about the dude who picks the hottie up from school.
We want him gone, serves no purpose, is dissing her, has nu likeable traits, just chilly.
We do not know anything about the three bloodied boys in the bathroom.
We are none the wiser about the girls in there and MC is not sayin jack.

This so called prologue is a cop out of the first chapter, serves nothing to the plot,
just cut outs of stories of various characters we care not about nor get the hang
of their actual purpose to telling the story of MC.

The later scene with guys trempling over eachother in the bathroom
is just turning the stomach blearghhhh.





The description in the Overview says nothing about the prologue,
not sure what it is supposed to set up,
there is no older guy bringing back MC in the life of a younger girl.
Nothing of that in this prologue, so what is shown is much like smoking aces:
snippets of bad people being bad for the sake of bad
and some hotties getting the brunt of their misdeeds.

Hope you come back for ch1 and hope it clears things up for you. Or don't but I hope you come. I like your ping but idk why you ping me. I'm not a dev ffs.

 

[darth_hiruma]

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We'll have to wait for someone to leak the game here unless you want to buy it.

Or you clicky clicky until you find the link. I miss the hacked you.

 

[Deadpool DP]

Were you not paying attention at all?
She gets shot by the assassin with the gun

I think you need to calm your tits down.. he's talking to me not you.

 

[Deadpool DP]

Is she

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a romanceable option?

Hmmm if i let you it can be a potential spoiler... And if you don't mind the spoiler. i can't do it here. Join us on discord!