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Who do you guys like the most?

  • Brianna

    Votes: 55 3.7%
  • Olivia

    Votes: 74 5.0%
  • Tori

    Votes: 268 18.1%
  • Sophia

    Votes: 328 22.1%
  • Lily

    Votes: 758 51.1%

  • Total voters
    1,483

SonsOfLiberty

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DeemLeem12

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You know when I first planned this game out I wasn't going to do any NTR or any thing like that with Sophia I wanted the relationship with her and the MC to be pure, but the amount of comments about her has changed my mind, so swinging will be in full effect
I understand that decision. But how do you plan to make the wife react when the husband is a cheater who fucks her daughter and her friend? Can we really expect her to be all loyal and still expect her character motivations realistic? The narrative would seem to favor her going behind his husband's back as payback, especially considering how she reacted if you flirted with Tori in the party.
 

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DirectXD1943

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You know when I first planned this game out I wasn't going to do any NTR or any thing like that with Sophia I wanted the relationship with her and the MC to be pure, but the amount of comments about her has changed my mind, so swinging will be in full effect
Eh, I think with the amount of content you're making each update, going "yes, another separate route" isn't the play. Like if you want to go back after there's a significant amount of content and add it, then sure, but right now it'd be better to actually focus on what's there than try and add yet another bloody NTR route.
 

knightblade155

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Some sections (Tori and Mike in the living room) are pretty obviously chatGPT/LLM generated, and not in a good way. They're interspersed with what is probably human writing, but goddamn do they kill the flow. Given the pretty consistent grammar/spelling errors throughout the human authored sections (and the very strange idea of what the CIA and navy seals actually do lol), I'm guessing that english isn't the author's first language (and they're certainly not American, the storytelling feels very Russian if anything), so my honest opinion is that LLMs were used because maybe that style of writing is less obviously awful to non-native speaker (or maybe it even seems 'smart' since it uses tons of purple prose) and not because the author was trying to sneak anything by or was just lazy.
"The tension thickens between the three of them (there are two), their hushed voices echoing in the empty living room."
Actual human would never put hushed + echoes together, and would know a living room just... doesn't do that.

"A devilish grin spreads across his face as he speaks in hushed tones, weaving tales of past adventures and conquests."
'weaving tales of past adventures and conquests' is a fairly reliable tell. It shows up constantly in ai writing because the model wants to reference an ultimately pointless substory without burning through context and many of these models (especially llama finetunes) were heavily trained on fantasy where this pops up in taverns.

"The forbidden fruit of desire tantalizes their senses, and the promise of illicit pleasures pulls them into a vortex of temptation."
Do I even have to explain this one? It's 'I just loaded a 7b llama model and tried to make it write smut' distilled.
The human writing is good, please stop with this junk. At the very least, edit it so it actually makes sense (and use a smarter model).
 

BulgariAMARA

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This isn't helpful to me at all, I never see an option for her to give him her number or to let him stay over.
Thank you! this is the tiny detail I was missing and it was driving me crazy trying to figure it out.
Unfortunately, this little detail does not help me, there is no way to give him a phone number and leave him to spend the night in the master bedroom.
After that, Tom leaves:
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Buddy, if you found a continuation of this story, could you write down every choice from the very beginning of the game? I've already started over many times and nothing works out for me.
 
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fidgetspinner

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Positive: One of the few VNs out there where the MC has a "daughter" (or at least a step-daughter) who can either be seduced by the MC or by other men. That kink is rarer than a shiny pokemon.

Negative: Somewhat fugly artstyle which seem to take so much time there's barely any updates.
 
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