beny

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Hi guy i play in thia game but i in episode 2 and i donth howto continue the game
I try everything
 

MUPLUR

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Nov 18, 2017
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Hi guy i play in thia game but i in episode 2 and i donth howto continue the game
I try everything
Send korra to 'kuvira's lgbt' to train her. eventually you will know the rest.
 

saqewo

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Dec 23, 2017
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i was able to finish quest 1, 2, 4 and 5, but wasn't able to unlock the #3. what am i missing?
 

medgecko

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Jul 26, 2017
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How do I trigger quest 5? I've gotten the others but can't seem to tickle 5 and a thread search has yielded nada other than when it will happen.
 

MUPLUR

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How do I trigger quest 5? I've gotten the others but can't seem to tickle 5 and a thread search has yielded nada other than when it will happen.
Complete korra's 2 obedient lessons, 2 moral lessons, go to your room at day time.
 

baneini

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Extremely derivative. The presentation is mediocre, a copy of 4 elements trainer except worse. Everything is kinda trying to go where the bar is lowest, the rooms are just acceptable, the city screen looks like placeholder, the expressions are not very good as the jaws are fixed in place, the intro isn't an intro its just words put together in a funny way before you're put in the game to start corrupting someone on a dodgy premise etc.

The writing style is amateurish, like the author hasn't had education or practice in how to write characters aren't him. Same thing with the scenes. You come across a couple fucking at night in the park...anally, just spontaneously without lube, in the cold damp grass. The couple speak nonsense like they're in a super cheap porno movie. It could've been a sensible scene where the girl just gives bj and communicates like a human so it'd be vaguely believable but it seems the author wanted a sub anal scene rather than something that fits the game progression/context so that is the first sex scene of the game.
Whenever someone talks it makes me imagine a guy typing words together on a laptop trying to emulate other peoples work rather than making me think I'm listening to a unique character.

The game looks OK overall, just the writing, some decisions and deliberate copying of other more popular games drag it down.
If nothing else the author should practice writing characters with different personalities.
 
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Squark ⚧❤️

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A lot of words strung together
This kind of "review" is pure bash work, almost to the point where it seems that you work for Mity. It's unhelpful and ultimately damaging.
The dodgy premise I feel is a commentary of the lack of real plot in porn games. Bear in mind that "the author" as you call him doesn't speak English as a primary language, so some parts are going to feel a little janky.
I will agree though that while functional, the city map could use a bit more work.
As regards claims of copying, do you realise how difficult it'd be to make a completely original trainer-style game that takes place in the world of Avatar? Of course some parts are going to feel like a copy.
I think the backgrounds are the way they are so as to draw attention to the characters themselves. They may not be lore-appropriate but they don't have to be.
Mity's been making his game for a lot longer (and with a truly massive scope) so of course it's going to feel like it has more polish. AFAIK, he also speaks English as a primary language. I still remember a time when it looked like his project had been abandoned.

It's explained (however vaguely) that everybody's acting all wrong and out of character but not all the dialogue is out of a cheap porn. Work clearly went into making Sandy and Lin sound at least sort of normal.

If you visit Muplur's patreon and look back to when he started, you'll see a huge improvement in art quality. Most of his time goes into that. And other commitments. Not everyone can afford to work full-time on a porn game.
Your review is ultimately too scathing. I'm not saying "be super nice" but you're comparing a game that's been in development for more than two years to another that's been in development for less than one. There will be a marked difference in direct accordance to development time.

I don't think it's quite fair to judge the final product when it's not even halfway there yet.
 

MUPLUR

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Nov 18, 2017
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Extremely derivative. The presentation is mediocre, a copy of 4 elements trainer except worse. Everything is kinda trying to go where the bar is lowest, the rooms are just acceptable, the city screen looks like placeholder, the expressions are not very good as the jaws are fixed in place, the intro isn't an intro its just words put together in a funny way before you're put in the game to start corrupting someone on a dodgy premise etc.

The writing style is amateurish, like the author hasn't had education or practice in how to write characters aren't him. Same thing with the scenes. You come across a couple fucking at night in the park...anally, just spontaneously without lube, in the cold damp grass. The couple speak nonsense like they're in a super cheap porno movie. It could've been a sensible scene where the girl just gives bj and communicates like a human so it'd be vaguely believable but it seems the author wanted a sub anal scene rather than something that fits the game progression/context so that is the first sex scene of the game.
Whenever someone talks it makes me imagine a guy typing words together on a laptop trying to emulate other peoples work rather than making me think I'm listening to a unique character.

The game looks OK overall, just the writing, some decisions and deliberate copying of other more popular games drag it down.
If nothing else the author should practice writing characters with different personalities.
Thank you for your honesty, friend. I want to tell you everything, but I am afraid that'll bore you. So, I tell you one important thing.
This game is a copy of AKABUR's Princess Trainer not MITY's Four Elements trainer. I barely spend 10 minutes in 'Four elements Trainer', then I quit it.
My friend Squark explained you rest of the things. Have a good day and Thank you for playing my game :)
 

MUPLUR

Greatest Adult Game Maker
Game Developer
Nov 18, 2017
701
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This kind of "review" is pure bash work, almost to the point where it seems that you work for Mity. It's unhelpful and ultimately damaging.
The dodgy premise I feel is a commentary of the lack of real plot in porn games. Bear in mind that "the author" as you call him doesn't speak English as a primary language, so some parts are going to feel a little janky.
I will agree though that while functional, the city map could use a bit more work.
As regards claims of copying, do you realise how difficult it'd be to make a completely original trainer-style game that takes place in the world of Avatar? Of course some parts are going to feel like a copy.
I think the backgrounds are the way they are so as to draw attention to the characters themselves. They may not be lore-appropriate but they don't have to be.
Mity's been making his game for a lot longer (and with a truly massive scope) so of course it's going to feel like it has more polish. AFAIK, he also speaks English as a primary language. I still remember a time when it looked like his project had been abandoned.

It's explained (however vaguely) that everybody's acting all wrong and out of character but not all the dialogue is out of a cheap porn. Work clearly went into making Sandy and Lin sound at least sort of normal.

If you visit Muplur's patreon and look back to when he started, you'll see a huge improvement in art quality. Most of his time goes into that. And other commitments. Not everyone can afford to work full-time on a porn game.
Your review is ultimately too scathing. I'm not saying "be super nice" but you're comparing a game that's been in development for more than two years to another that's been in development for less than one. There will be a marked difference in direct accordance to development time.

I don't think it's quite fair to judge the final product when it's not even halfway there yet.
Hey Squark, I am very very very happy to get you as my friend. Thanks for stand by me, my friend. :)
 
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thedemus

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I'm enjoying this so far and Asami is adorable but it would be great if you could make it clearer as to which locations have a quest waiting it would save a lot of clicking. Maybe have the exclamation mark be a different color or something?
 
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MUPLUR

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I'm enjoying this so far and Asami is adorable but it would be great if you could make it clearer as to which locations have a quest waiting it would save a lot of clicking. Maybe have the exclamation mark be a different color or something?
Not sure about that mission option. Since the overall gameplay is very easy, At least this one must be little tough ;). If more people talk about that, I will try to do something. Thank you for playing the game :)
 
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