VN Ren'Py Abandoned Bootylicious [0.1] [Crocest]

[eddie987]

Bruuuh, the same can be said about comments like yours... same non NTR haters, same low-quality trolling, same love for NTR... the usual 'constructive' stuff.

Nobody forces you to play the game. You don't like it, move on and play something else, or share some constructive criticism so the dev can correct their mistakes and do better in the next updates.



Yeah, the MC acting like a pussy with those gold digging bitches in his own damn house is simply ridiculous. Let's not forget that at least one of them is cheating on his dad, Veronica IIRC, something the MC could use to force her into becoming his submissive lil slut or at least hate-fuck her good as many times as he wants, but instead, he lets the hoe bring her male 'friend' to his dad's house to fuck her in his bed. Da fuq kinda harem game is this supposed to be ?? A NTR harem ??

The MC also talked about how he thinks his father fucked his girlfriend, and we got this "post-credit" scene

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that shows he even got the stepsisters...

I guess instead of the usual girl with daddy issues, we have a guy with a "dad's sloppy seconds" fetish or something... So we have a loser MC (It was actually funny when the dude said he's not a loser, right after Kendra huimiliated him and he still begged her to let him jerk off using her underwear... That had to be a joke, right? Right?) who might eventually end up with a harem of gold-digging whores... When his father's not using them himself of course!

I know the dev said he's gonna remove the bj scene, but this needs a serious rewrite if he really wants to sell it as a harem game, since that's the end goal according to him. And I'm not talking only about the unlikeable female characters, but the MC himself, who most of the time acts like a 12 year old, who accidentaly took a whole bottle of viagra and can't think straight for even a moment...

 

[bodyharvest]

Все пишут про сюжет, а я напишу про код. Вместо show надо использовать scene.
При использование show картинки не удаляются если у них не одно название, они накладываться друг на друга. Из за этого забивается память и начинает тормозить и зависать игра.
При использование scene когда добавляешь новую то старая закрывается.
Так же можно добавлять scene а поверх неё show.


Everyone writes about the plot, and I'll write about the code. You should use scene instead of show.
When using show, pictures are not deleted if they have more than one name, they overlap each other. Because of this, the memory is clogged and the game starts to slow down and freeze.
When using scene, when you add a new one, the old one closes.
You can also add scene and show on top of it.

Dev. take notes buddy, because your "game" isn't running very well!!!

 

[Famescua]

ill hold

The MC also talked about how he thinks his father fucked his girlfriend, and we got this "post-credit" scene

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that shows he even got the stepsisters...

I guess instead of the usual girl with daddy issues, we have a guy with a "dad's sloppy seconds" fetish or something... So we have a loser MC (It was actually funny when the dude said he's not a loser, right after Kendra huimiliated him and he still begged her to let him jerk off using her underwear... That had to be a joke, right? Right?) who might eventually end up with a harem of gold-digging whores... When his father's not using them himself of course!

I know the dev said he's gonna remove the bj scene, but this needs a serious rewrite if he really wants to sell it as a harem game, since that's the end goal according to him. And I'm not talking only about the unlikeable female characters, but the MC himself, who most of the time acts like a 12 year old, who accidentaly took a whole bottle of viagra and can't think straight for even a moment...

I didn't get that far, I stopped at the bj scene. So even if the dev removes that scene there is so much in this that needs to be removed or changed so that the harem players would even want to play it.

 

[xXwankerXx]

So wait, the dad has a huge mansion and can afford multiple wifes, both their lifestyles and the necessary bribery, but the son can't get his own car?

Well, judging by how retarded he is, he probably thinks he's gonna get a unicorn to ride to school, since he's dad is rich AF and an influential businessman. Who the fuck needs overrated and overpriced cars when they can ride that ?? Not many rich daddy's bois can brag about having their own unicorn.

The MC also talked about how he thinks his father fucked his girlfriend, and we got this "post-credit" scene
that shows he even got the stepsisters...

This shouldn't be a surprise to anyone coz almost everybody cheats on everybody here, except for the MC coz he suffers from an alarming amount of stupidity, so he's excused. Just reread his funny conversation with Nicole. I laughed really hard after hearing her ask her step-son's opinion on her slutty clothes she wanna go out in to 'celebrate'... without his dad. Surely she going with her lady friends like Veronica, right ?? But an occasional gangbang or some no-strings-attached sex is said to help slutty, married women feeling happy again, so maybe she just likes 'celebrating' very often to feel happy. It's not her fault she ends up getting fucked almost every time, despite loving her husband soo muuuch.

So even if the dev removes that scene there is so much in this that needs to be removed or changed so that the harem players would even want to play it.

He should give that MC a brain, some self-esteem and make him find his missing balls, if he wants harem or non NTR players to buy his promises. Since the MC's a daddy's boi, the sluts could be asking him for money in exchange for special 'favors', no more cheating or NTR required IF harem or non NTR fans really are his target audience. If they not, it's better to come clean about it and at least give the NTR fans what they want, coz lying to both sides means no support and no money, so an incoming abandoned tag.

 

[eddie987]

ill hold

I didn't get that far, I stopped at the bj scene. So even if the dev removes that scene there is so much in this that needs to be removed or changed so that the harem players would even want to play it.

There's not that much content after that bj scene, but that was a weird scene in general, right? As soon as the stepmom saw the MC watching them, she thought that if his father saw him too he's gonna beat him up... Ok, let's ignore the fact that she was sucking his cock in the fucking kitchen, where anyone could walk in and see them, his father was gonna beat him up? What? Well, at least she didn't think he was gonna put him over his knee and spank him...

 

[DavyDaoist]

There is good potential, but there’s still much to improve.

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

what do you say about,
living in a house with multiple hot stepmoms and a couple of stepsisters?

I say fuck this step-shit, i don't dig it.

 

[Fzoner95]

Everyone writes about the plot, and I'll write about the code. You should use scene instead of show. When using show, pictures are not deleted if they have more than one name, they overlap each other. Because of this, the memory is clogged and the game starts to slow down and freeze.

I totally agree. This is a Renpy game and yet it nearly crashes when switching from fullscreen to window mode and vice versa.

 

[XV71]

every now and then you get a dev like this that's so out of touch its hilarious

 

[Alex Lem]

Crocest Was this supposed to be a harem game or a NTR game? If the first, then you need to rewrite it from scratch. Everything is bad, MC is a bitch and a loser, "father 's" harem, MC's father is still alive and fucks his harem, MC thinks about how his father fucked his girlfriend , male friends of stepmothers, all this should not be in the game if you are creating a "harem" game, which it absolutely is not, and considering the scene with a blowjob in the kitchen, where a pathetic MC peeps, then it's even ridiculous that you planned this as a harem game, what were you even thinking about adding such a scene in a harem game?? And only now you have been convinced that it should be removed? It should have been obvious that no one would like that scene, there are also problems with the code of the game. This is your game, do what you want with it, but you have just started and I would advise you to reconsider a lot in this game, but right now it's garbage, at least the girls look great, even though they are absolute bitches.

 

[michael1984]

Just finished playing trough this mess of a game

Lets just say this the mc feels like a total weak beta character

The women are all insufferable and too dominating over the mc caling him names and what not

Not to mention the father around to fuck those women silly

And oh yeah the mc his girlfriend also probally cheated on the mc since she came half naked out of a room his dad was in altho we dont actually see it but its talked about so yeah great stuff

Is this supposed to be a ntr game if so it needs to be tagged as one

Dont see this becoming a harem game at all too many things that are already messed up for that

Now i understand why most fathers are killed off in other AVN games

Were is the mc his mom we can move in with her instead and leave the dad this hot mess of a game

It would have been alot better if we played as the Father instead then the game would have made sense alot more

 

[XV71]

devs' only choice now is to go full-on ntr, it already has everything needed, a beta cuck spineless mc and a dad with a harem.
mc is only gonna get sloppy seconds, still salvageable if the dev actually advertises it for what it is, a maso-cucks dream of eating your dads cum, this game has no future being a harem lol, like i said the devs so out of touch, i don't even think the dev knows what he wants this to be so really only chance he has at getting support is selling out to the cucklords

 

[Kalsan]

Oh my god I have never seen a so badly executed harem game. There is so many red flags for harem players. First of all who thought it was a good idea give the protagonist his father sloppy seconds? Like seriously? Not only that all the girls are mindless slutty bimbos that seen to be cheating on his dad with random guys, and what is worst they treat the protagonist like shit. But well I can't blame them because I have never seen a protagonist as lame and retarded as this one, is exasperating. And I'm not even talking about the writing that is extremely ridiculous, you get better story leaving a monkey with a keyboard alone in a room. Removing the blowjob? No the dev need to delete the entire game, research what harem fan are into and remade it from scratch because I'm telling you this shit is the antithesis of harem. This game is so bad that I think the US government should contact the developer to make playing this a new torture in Guantanamo. Those jihadis don't stand a chance against this shit.

 

[Bloodxdd]

this game and dev can be described in one word
"XD"

 

[Alex Lem]

this game and dev can be described in one word
"XD"

It's just complete madness that he thinks he's creating a harem game

 

[Kalsan]

I think he is a ntr fan and is trolling all of us with this "harem game"

 

[Bloodxdd]

I think he is a ntr fan and is trolling all of us with this "harem game"

i mean Netori is part of ntr tag yes?

 

[Kalsan]

i mean Netori is part of ntr tag yes?

Let me rephrase that he is a cuck fan, netori is cool but so far this game is going more like the dad cucking you.

 

[Bloodxdd]

Let me rephrase that he is a cuck fan, netori is cool but so far this game is going more like the dad cucking you.

+1

 

[Punto]

I will try