The game is going in a good direction. Nice models too. I think people should chill out
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- Aug 4, 2019
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Legit not understanding the hate. I think the game is finally getting on track. My only complaint is how short it still is and how long ago the first version came out. I wish the dev would just ditch the side stories except for the twins background, which should be incorporated in the main storyline. Takes time from developing the actual game and cannon story. My feedback is as follows:
Please stop adding characters. The cast was already big enough as it was with the principal, school staff, students and family. Thats like 20 different girls right there. Just trim it out. Focus on the MC's family and professional life. The shrink and the MC's traumatic background should serve as catalyst for his actions, good or bad. Make it two standard paths for each girl, a love/devotion/manipulation route and a more devious domination/corruption/blackmail style route.
I really think this game has quite a bit of potential butI don't see it going anywhere if the dev keeps getting sidetracked. Just figure out a destination and stay on the path!
Please stop adding characters. The cast was already big enough as it was with the principal, school staff, students and family. Thats like 20 different girls right there. Just trim it out. Focus on the MC's family and professional life. The shrink and the MC's traumatic background should serve as catalyst for his actions, good or bad. Make it two standard paths for each girl, a love/devotion/manipulation route and a more devious domination/corruption/blackmail style route.
I really think this game has quite a bit of potential butI don't see it going anywhere if the dev keeps getting sidetracked. Just figure out a destination and stay on the path!
This game is getting worse with every patch. The scenes don't make sense, the conversations have no flow or logic, and the story doesn't go anywhere. At first I thought it might be a language issue but there's just no direction to anything...
And why are you distancing us from the hot wife who wants to jump us every time she's alone with us? She's a kinky freak!! Have her help you seduce the others!!!
And why are you distancing us from the hot wife who wants to jump us every time she's alone with us? She's a kinky freak!! Have her help you seduce the others!!!
- Jul 10, 2017
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Dev mistreated the most devoted girl in the game, arguably the most beautiful, certainly best babe.
Is the Incest Patch one of those that I need to reload EVERY TIME that the game is updated?
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- Aug 24, 2021
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A pity for the game, but it is obvious that it is going to fail like many other games, but I hope this is not the case.
The author is doing the same as other creators of games, movies and series, doing things without thinking and without listening to consumers.
A game that promised good content, both graphical and character creation, however, if it does not improve the story and those failures that make as a player no longer take interest in the game, will make so much time spent on the game is wasted time.
The basis of a successful series, movie and game is in part to take into account the opinion of the general public and not just the creator.
Games like No Mans Sky, had a crushing entrance being hated by those who had high expectations, however, that over time the company began to fix by listening to the consuming public, managed to get the game off the ground to succeed.
We don't know how much time the author has in his personal life, but if every content of every update he releases every 3 - 6 months has tiny content, people are going to lose interest in the game.
That being said, I don't hate, and I have faith in the game and hope it will be one of the best games of this content, because it has good modeling and the creator has talent.
The author is doing the same as other creators of games, movies and series, doing things without thinking and without listening to consumers.
A game that promised good content, both graphical and character creation, however, if it does not improve the story and those failures that make as a player no longer take interest in the game, will make so much time spent on the game is wasted time.
The basis of a successful series, movie and game is in part to take into account the opinion of the general public and not just the creator.
Games like No Mans Sky, had a crushing entrance being hated by those who had high expectations, however, that over time the company began to fix by listening to the consuming public, managed to get the game off the ground to succeed.
We don't know how much time the author has in his personal life, but if every content of every update he releases every 3 - 6 months has tiny content, people are going to lose interest in the game.
That being said, I don't hate, and I have faith in the game and hope it will be one of the best games of this content, because it has good modeling and the creator has talent.
A common mistake that writers (both new and experienced) make is that they try to do too much. They have 5-6 great ideas that they try to pack into one story. When it's just writing, it's bad enough, but when you have to toss in artwork and modeling, I can't begin to imagine the ensuing nightmare.
This dev has already - and wisely - started to reign in the plot. I'm not sure what it was; some noir/Underworld/Powerbroker thing, it seemed like. The interesting (and for this site, oh-so-apt) vehicle was for the MC to enter it via the offspring. Toss in some long-standing familial incest, gang-related content, and some of the best models I've seen, and it started to quickly spin out of control.
There are a LOT of positive things here. Terrific models with some quite already well-established personalities, an elite-school mechanic, a route choice of love or dominance, and more.
I think the dev would be well-served to sit back and ponder, "What am I trying to do here?" It's still early enough to make changes (on top of the major ones already made). Heck, it could be done without being obvious.
One route I could see is that the PC, with his superior teaching/people skills, could slowly build his own little sphere of influence through gaining control, through love or dominance, over the girls at school - the daughters of the nation's elite and the next generation of power brokers. Some could be positioned to gain a great deal of responsibility (while still under his influence), while others could be conditioned and 'packaged' to other elites to gain power and influence. This already has kind of been started with the Olivia/Ava path. His new rival could be just that - or someone to turn/coerce to his side. The Therapist could also be key.
Plus, all the juicy stuff at home.
And, of course, Ruby! All the Ruby! After all, she's "top of the list".
The good thing about 'too many great ideas' is that you finish one, and you can then move onto the next one.
This dev has already - and wisely - started to reign in the plot. I'm not sure what it was; some noir/Underworld/Powerbroker thing, it seemed like. The interesting (and for this site, oh-so-apt) vehicle was for the MC to enter it via the offspring. Toss in some long-standing familial incest, gang-related content, and some of the best models I've seen, and it started to quickly spin out of control.
There are a LOT of positive things here. Terrific models with some quite already well-established personalities, an elite-school mechanic, a route choice of love or dominance, and more.
I think the dev would be well-served to sit back and ponder, "What am I trying to do here?" It's still early enough to make changes (on top of the major ones already made). Heck, it could be done without being obvious.
One route I could see is that the PC, with his superior teaching/people skills, could slowly build his own little sphere of influence through gaining control, through love or dominance, over the girls at school - the daughters of the nation's elite and the next generation of power brokers. Some could be positioned to gain a great deal of responsibility (while still under his influence), while others could be conditioned and 'packaged' to other elites to gain power and influence. This already has kind of been started with the Olivia/Ava path. His new rival could be just that - or someone to turn/coerce to his side. The Therapist could also be key.
Plus, all the juicy stuff at home.
And, of course, Ruby! All the Ruby! After all, she's "top of the list".
The good thing about 'too many great ideas' is that you finish one, and you can then move onto the next one.
- Aug 13, 2021
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This is one I think I can just wait until it's completed...if ever. Long time between updates and the updates are not even worth it.
this game was fucking awesome, when was announced here for first time....(was patron)...
now it is huge shit with half year updates.....
now it is huge shit with half year updates.....
- Nov 27, 2019
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<sigh> Picked up from my last save and...
While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'chapter3Claire1'.
Wonderful... just getting somewhere interesting and boom, fail. Decompiling doesn't show any label that is similar so it's not just a typo in the label name. There is instead a different jump later...
that also doesn't exist.
Go back to the beginning and check another branch...
ScriptError: could not find label 'pJanet'.
Yea, this developer is testing the code they put out, right.
While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'chapter3Claire1'.
Wonderful... just getting somewhere interesting and boom, fail. Decompiling doesn't show any label that is similar so it's not just a typo in the label name. There is instead a different jump later...
Code:
jump chapter3Claire2Go back to the beginning and check another branch...
ScriptError: could not find label 'pJanet'.
Yea, this developer is testing the code they put out, right.
u did not lost anything...all update is about "redone" kitchen scene to be in living room and some talk about maledom with sub MC...
What happened to this? I last played v0.1 and recall liking it, but the content after that is just a mess. The dialogue isn't great, there are a number of instances of lines being said by the wrong person (which just adds to the confusion) and the pacing feels choppy and all over the place. It feels like there's little or no structure/plan/road map, which is just a recipe for disaster.
- Nov 22, 2018
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Well, the game seems to be on track again. Which is good. However, like some others, I also worry that maybe, the dev is trying to cram too many things into one game. The cast is huge. That said, there are games with an even larger cast that are doing quite well, so who's to say.
I've also seen some criticism about the side stories, and with that, I completely agree. Side stories are a bit of a problem, from my perspective. Not only do they take up time that might be better spent working on the main game, which I'm sure we're all more excited about. They can also be a source of confusion. I replayed the whole main game today, and at some point the MC thinks about the twins and references something about a forced marriage. I was confused, because I hadn't heard anything about that. Apparently that comes from their side story, which I haven't read. Now, I don't know if the MC finds out about it in that side story; if he doesn't, why does he know in the main story? And if he does find out in the side story, why is it a side story? If this is important information for the reader to have, hiding it away in optional side stories is the worst thing you can do.
Moving on, one thing that has become abundantly clear is that a proofread is in order. There are stretches where the text flows nicely, but throughout most of the game, we've got weird sentence structure, or random capitalization, or missing punctuation (especially at the end of lines).
Another source of potential mistakes is the numerous relational variables used in the script. There are about 70 variables, all named the same two letters followed by their number, each holding a word to express how two characters are related to each other. As a programmer, I have to say that this is a recipe for disaster. I'm surprised how rarely the wrong variable gets used, but I still found a couple instances. The one I remember is when first meeting Amy, MC calls her "aunt" once.
Speaking of Amy: The scene with her in Luna's room is bugged. If you get her to give you a hand, no matter how much further it goes, at the end it jumps back to them standing near the door, and he cums in her hand. It's quite jarring.
I would really like to see this game become what it promised to when I first checked it out. These days, I am a lot less hopeful about it. A thorough proofread would go a long way, I think. And maybe, just maybe, the dev needs to ask themselves if the cast might have become a bit too big, and as a result, the story lost its focus.
I've also seen some criticism about the side stories, and with that, I completely agree. Side stories are a bit of a problem, from my perspective. Not only do they take up time that might be better spent working on the main game, which I'm sure we're all more excited about. They can also be a source of confusion. I replayed the whole main game today, and at some point the MC thinks about the twins and references something about a forced marriage. I was confused, because I hadn't heard anything about that. Apparently that comes from their side story, which I haven't read. Now, I don't know if the MC finds out about it in that side story; if he doesn't, why does he know in the main story? And if he does find out in the side story, why is it a side story? If this is important information for the reader to have, hiding it away in optional side stories is the worst thing you can do.
Moving on, one thing that has become abundantly clear is that a proofread is in order. There are stretches where the text flows nicely, but throughout most of the game, we've got weird sentence structure, or random capitalization, or missing punctuation (especially at the end of lines).
Another source of potential mistakes is the numerous relational variables used in the script. There are about 70 variables, all named the same two letters followed by their number, each holding a word to express how two characters are related to each other. As a programmer, I have to say that this is a recipe for disaster. I'm surprised how rarely the wrong variable gets used, but I still found a couple instances. The one I remember is when first meeting Amy, MC calls her "aunt" once.
Speaking of Amy: The scene with her in Luna's room is bugged. If you get her to give you a hand, no matter how much further it goes, at the end it jumps back to them standing near the door, and he cums in her hand. It's quite jarring.
I would really like to see this game become what it promised to when I first checked it out. These days, I am a lot less hopeful about it. A thorough proofread would go a long way, I think. And maybe, just maybe, the dev needs to ask themselves if the cast might have become a bit too big, and as a result, the story lost its focus.
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Mac Version cannot be opened on my system. Tried twice. Any others or isolated?
- Feb 25, 2018
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I think I may have expressed myself wrong, I don't want to say that everything should go fast, but that a certain development takes place until it reaches the point I said (in the end), actually games that start with sex I tend to not like it, because is not well development and has no challenges.
- Nov 20, 2018
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Yeah, it's basically a full day's worth — from leaving his house in the morning until coming home and showering. There are things that happen throughout that time, of course, but that's pretty much the span of time for this update.
- Sep 13, 2017
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I dunno if I agree with your take on NMS. It was marketed as a complete game with certain features, but it turned out to be an incomplete game with only a few of those advertised features and a whole lotta bugs. Sure, it is better, now, but that is because it is finally approaching what was promised from the very beginning.
You are right about trying to do too much, though. Good game design is to focus on doing a few things well, and to have a roadmap of where you are going with it so you can stay on track. Not everyone who decides to "cash in" on videogames understands that.