VN Ren'Py Abandoned Buried Desires [v0.5] [Betisis]

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AdamJohn36

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Hm, Wow, this game was in my top most anticipated but now, I am not sure i can enjoy it. Even for being an experimental build i certainly didn't enjoy where the story is going. I think i would actually be relieved if the entire update was a dream because the main character was still knocked out by his niece. Even though that would make the entire update pointless. It would still be better than where the story is headed otherwise. Hell now there will have to be a time skip cause the main character will have to heal before any sex again. Not to mention other plot inconsistencies. Ugh, yeah i don't know about this game anymore.
 
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Content_Consumer

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Yeah this is pretty bad.
Can't really be a teacher while you're in hospital with a gun-shot wound to the chest and then 3+ months of recovery time after that and thats if no major organs were damaged.
Assuming he even recovers mentally, since it'll be stacking a whole new trauma of not only being shot but also seeing Luna being taken away to an unknown fate on top of whatever thing happened with the girl in the past.
Probably need years of therapy to be mentally stable enough to be a teacher again.

Also, bye Luna, since MC wont be taking part in saving you from whatever you were involved in.
 
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AdamJohn36 said:
Hm, Wow, this game was in my top most anticipated but now, I am not sure i can enjoy it. Even for being an experimental build i certainly didn't enjoy where the story is going. I think i would actually be relieved if the entire update was a dream because the main character was still knocked out by his niece. Even though that would make the entire update pointless. It would still be better than where the story is headed otherwise. Hell now there will have to be a time skip cause the main character will have to heal before any sex again. Not to mention other plot inconsistencies. Ugh, yeah i don't know about this game anymore.
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I agree, Dev had a simple story about fucking your family and your student/co-workers, then decided to do some random ass shit ... What really sucks is all the girls are super cute, especially the daughters and twin-redheads ... what a waste ...
 
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Avaron1974

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TommyTuba said:
I just want to have sex with the redheads and the little brown haired girl. Is that possible in this update?
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No, you aren't anywhere near the family or doing any teaching anymore.

You go on a road trip with Luna and end up banging some random girls while weirds shit goes on then some mob like types show up and it gets even weirder and after what happens at the end he won't be having sex with anyone for a long time.
 
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Onysko

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The story will have a hard time getting back on track. It's utterly random, and all the scenes and events just feel meaningless. A new character gets introduced almost every scene, and we get further away from the main cast we are actually interested in, which the game was meant to focus on.

Is it a story about a teacher and his family and work? Or a guy wandering around aimlessly and fucking everyone he meets like he's living an 80's porn movies? Nothing makes sense, and I hope they ditch this direction fast and refocus on the original premise of the game.
 
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MrLKX

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KoGa3 said:
Attention!
According to the devs post here this is an experimental build for beta testers which was leaked here. So this is NOT the final v0.2!!
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I would like to emphasize that here once again. The so far unofficial beta version posted here has some problems and makes some mistakes that would be called serious DM sins in pen & paper circles. So I'll wait and see how the official version develops and then make my judgment.
 
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Avaron1974

Avaron1974

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MrLKX said:
I would like to emphasize that here once again. The so far unofficial beta version posted here has some problems and makes some mistakes that would be called serious DM sins in pen & paper circles. So I'll wait and see how the official version develops and then make my judgment.
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That's only bugs, the story will still be the same and it's the story that is the biggest problem.
 
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Man you are twisted: im starting to understand why you said it takes more time to progress on the main story than side stories. Of course its more complicated if you screw up the timeline like this.

Pros:

So great renders!
Good convos and personalities

Con:
I feel you want to do too much. Sidestories, retrospective timeline, etc. Try to make it a lil more simple. Big dev corps screw up with obercomplicated things as well
Please learn how to write release notes. Use different boxes for different versions, and im stupid or you changed the order, because now it shows that in 1.5 is the sidestory and 1.0 there are the progress in main story
 
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