Yeah, story got strange. And not in a good way. For a moment I thought there was a purpose with the meeting a woman in the motel, when I thought blonde girl she loved would have been Luna. I could have taken them to same room (and have threesome, perhaps), but no. Instead of that, we got another non-interesting story about girl's father wanting her back.
Also, it would have been nice to avoid earlier sex-scene with random woman. Gotta have choice on where you stick your valuables. Guessing game with her was not good either, at least choices on what MC would ask.
When I got points of dominance with Luna, info about it stayed on the screen way too long, so little bug there.
Those back-flashes about the girls weren't very good either.
ps. Instead of telekinesis, you meant telepathy, right? Telekinesis is moving objects with a mind, story was about reading mind, which is telepathy.