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Standalone, those two sentences serve as some unintentional dark humour.
- Sep 3, 2021
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Not an unreasonable end goal for a transition that started this young. I imagine most transitions start off as them already feeling like a 'normal' girl.
Yeah... I was curious about that a few posts back too. Though I did learn from another game that it may be possible to have butt-babies!Also I don't know what kind of surgery would make him able to get pregnant
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No problem. I see a good VN in the making and dislike them being held back. I couldn't find where the Intermission card Scenes were in the files, so "Quite" is still "Quiet", but I think someone else pointed that error out elsewhere, so I'm sure you can fix it.
You should be able to just replace your script with mine as I only touched on the mistakes, so it should work exactly as yours.
Warning: as I did this while having a couple of drinks, I only fixed the mistakes I saw whilst playing the game (game one window, Notepad in another
), so any mistakes in the route I did not take will still be there. I took the most depraved route at every opportunity, so look for errors in any sections of 'tamer' choices 
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You're a hero if you took your precious time to edit this oh so common and highly annoying mistake.Vinyard I took the liberty of going through the script and touched up some of the spelling / grammar. You can take a look if you like, and use it if you want. I needed to do it for my own playthrough anyway
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I did the capital 'i', did the 'im' 'dont' etc along with 'there / their', all the 'your / you're', 'its' I saw and many others.
You can check my script yourself - I linked it a couple of pages back. Needs a new game (and remember to delete script.rpyc file).and let me (or Vin) know what I missed. There will be some
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I did notice some of the others and they do annoy me some but your/you're in my minds voice become you are, not whoever you're is suppose to be pronounced (English isn't my first language). That just throws me for a loop, had the story being a bit less engaging/interesting it would have been enough for me to stop reading.I did the capital 'i', did the 'im' 'dont' etc along with 'there / their', all the 'your / you're' I saw and many others.
You can check my script yourself - I linked it a couple of pages back. Needs a new game (and remember to delete script.rpyc file).and let me (or Vin) know what I missed. There will be some
I have an even higher pet peeve but that one doesn't come into play in this story. I would had stopped playing had that one come into effect though.
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It does not. The first part is only needed if one actually follows through with the second part – which one really shouldn't do. Ren'Py will merge your script changes into the compiled one upon launch i.e. update script.rpyc. This allows for old saves to be loaded as well as make new ones that will generally still play nice with the official game version.
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Sooo..I had your text side by side and followed along till a certain point then decided I got this and did it freehand. I dont remember fixing any dont/theirI did the capital 'i', did the 'im' 'dont' etc along with 'there / their', all the 'your / you're', 'its' I saw and many others.
You can check my script yourself - I linked it a couple of pages back. Needs a new game (and remember to delete script.rpyc file).and let me (or Vin) know what I missed. There will be some
already submitted the new version. hordragg's file was easy, pointed out exactly what line the error was in lol but np I'll ninja edit the links at some point or with the next update
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If I'd listed line numbers, it would have been "Most of them"Sooo..I had your text side by side and followed along till a certain point then decided I got this and did it freehand. I dont remember fixing any dont/their
(A joke - it wasn't actually that bad lol!). However if you got it, you got it. I also put the space in "Mr. Morrison"'s name, in case you missed that - there should be a space between the point and the surname.Addendum: While I'm here, could I suggest switching from .Jpeg to .WebP, for a smaller download? Many thanks!
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You learn something new everyday. Would have made my editing faster. Ah well, next time!
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Vinyard I noticed you fixed the first part regarding Genre in the OP
, but it seem like there is still an issue with the 2nd part I noticed in the OP regarding the preview gallery.
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Yeah for some reason updating the preview photos still confuses me. I did it the manual way but I'm told there's a different way to do it.Vinyard I noticed you fixed the first part regarding Genre in the OP
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I've started working on the Bugfix script, with added highlights on lines I've edited this time. To preemptively fix most of my edits, I'll say 'alot' is not a word
Great game, so not too bad to go through again.
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OK, done down to the thumb-sucking scene. As you didn't use my previous script to the end, let me know if you want me to do more.
Because of the line-change indications, it's not a drop in script, but if you're just putting them side by side it'll help you in this.
Great game, so not too bad to go through again.
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OK, done down to the thumb-sucking scene. As you didn't use my previous script to the end, let me know if you want me to do more.
Because of the line-change indications, it's not a drop in script, but if you're just putting them side by side it'll help you in this.
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Horrifying, art work. characters limbs out of proportion from the main body. Plus the story like just is not for me. Find it sick and revolting. But Good luck with the concept and idea. No offense meant just saying it could have been better than a wam bam thank you mam kind of game.
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Mega link is down, says account has been kicked, gofile doesn't work for me today at all, so only racaty was working.
No prob, since I got it, but I wanted to inform whoever created the DLs, in case they hadn't noticed.
No prob, since I got it, but I wanted to inform whoever created the DLs, in case they hadn't noticed.