Pretty solid vn but there's a few nit-pick things that took enjoyment out of the visual novel idk if someone said this before but i cba to look it up
- i know it's probably a lot of work but having custom dialogue and a lil variance for every LI sex scene in the ship would have made it 10x more enjoyable
- when we got to the point where we could check the Orion planet stats I had no idea how to boost or change them a lil explanation before would have been cool /////
+Other thing to keep in mind is that you did the right choice keeping this a solo ending, anyone with more than 5 braincells could tell the other LI didn't want to share maybe except for Tanya, almost every harem game gets to a cancer point so I congratulate you for making this call
That isn't to say that, you shouldn't consider having "mini harem endings", for example having Lia and Tanya as a 3 people relationship since they we're fairly close or with the two lesbians, all I'm saying is while I do realize it would have been complicated to do for this game, you should try to consider it for your next one
Not Adding a sex scene for the girl you choose in the end was also a miss opportunity since I wanted to see another scene with Lia before I close the game for good, i can't speak for other endings since the ones I saw was Lia's and Tiffany's but they were well made according to their position and personality.
All and all this shit was unexpectedly good i wasn't expecting that good of an animation, story and even music from a guy with a relatively small following
For the dudes that are mad for Kara settling down with another guy since they didn't pick her are just too funny to me and I can't fathom what kind of mental gymnastics they are doing
Cheers bro ty for the game