Game looks pretty good and I'm excited to try it, but I wanted to know how much porn content there is before going in, anyone can tell me?
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Hi, Lance Lot! The game doesn't have a lot of porn content in it at the moment, we suggest you waiting a few updates before playing or you can try it now to see the beautiful art our artist was working hard on.
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The art is fantastic, but the writing is seriously cringe. If you get a better writer or an editor, this could be amazing 
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Well, it doesn't change so much in relation to previous dialogues overall, but worth checking out anyway.
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Personally, I prefer the MC to say no in that kind of situation. If these choices prevent me from developing a relationship with Laurel, then that relationship doesn't interest me, so I will continue to ignore these kind of requests.Well, it doesn't change so much in relation to previous dialogues overall, but worth checking out anyway.
Yuss... So I wasn't retarded after all... Keep up the good work. I really expect this to become great.
I do not agree with this. Do you have any idea how hard it is to develop a game with a good story with Sandbox elements? Not to mention how much more complicated a sandbox game can get when it comes to completing CGs. If you have played as much VNs as I have you'd find that games with sandbox elements require a walkthrough to get to the content you want.
Let me give you a number of reasons why it is a bad idea:
- Time - a sandbox game ultimately is the most time consuming format for any game not to mention an H-game. With only a small team, it is not a good idea to start with a sandbox game especially with most of the content is custom (not default/premade assets). Sure, a mod can be made to make the FULL game into a sandbox, that is only feasible and ideal when the game is complete.
- Story - a sandbox game of this nature only has one logical story. A harem. If a developer has a vision and wants to be creative or focus on the story for each character, a sandbox game makes very little sense.
- Definition - a visual novel by definition is a game type that focuses on the story. 20% of VNs have the same format. A branching story or a single kinetic story while the other 20% have RPG elements. If you're complaining about doing multiple playthroughs to get all the content, you're playing the wrong type of game bro. What's the point of making choices if they have no impact on your current story progression? It would not be so much as a visual novel but a gallery.
- Dating Sim - I believe this is what you want. It is somewhat similar to a sandbox but less complicated. The difference is that dating sim lets you choose which girl you want but will lock you in to the story of 1 character and branching only the ending (good/bad/true end) while a sandbox doesn't lock you in anywhere and usually has a fixed outcome regardless of choice.
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Aight.
This game is interesting and has his own charm, however needs quite a bit of polishing.
-Characters art and backgrond arts are very nice.
-"Milkers" is dayum.
-The dialogues need to be improved. They feel unnatural, odd paced and sometimes slightly cringe (tho, I believe certain "fella" char is supposed to talk in such odd ways). I guess the devs are not eng native speakers?
-Descriptive narration is almost nowhere to be seen.
-MC can go from nicest nigg alive to unbearable mofo by making just one choice regarding his behaviour. He can feel a lil bit erratic but I guess this is a consequence of how the narrative aspect of the game is still on the lacking side.
-Get a second or third bgm, pls. Even placeholder copyright free ones work. While the main theme tune is catchy, it can ruin the mood of the scenes.
I firmly believe this game can turn out hecking good with enough time, dedication and love.
Best of lucks.
This game is interesting and has his own charm, however needs quite a bit of polishing.
-Characters art and backgrond arts are very nice.
-"Milkers" is dayum.
-The dialogues need to be improved. They feel unnatural, odd paced and sometimes slightly cringe (tho, I believe certain "fella" char is supposed to talk in such odd ways). I guess the devs are not eng native speakers?
-Descriptive narration is almost nowhere to be seen.
-MC can go from nicest nigg alive to unbearable mofo by making just one choice regarding his behaviour. He can feel a lil bit erratic but I guess this is a consequence of how the narrative aspect of the game is still on the lacking side.
-Get a second or third bgm, pls. Even placeholder copyright free ones work. While the main theme tune is catchy, it can ruin the mood of the scenes.
I firmly believe this game can turn out hecking good with enough time, dedication and love.
Best of lucks.
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The game is in early development. AFAIK, all you can get is a boob massage and a butt oil tan application
Art is fantastic, dialogue is workmanlike.
As others have said, the protagonist could stand to be more consistent.
As others have said, the protagonist could stand to be more consistent.
Idk if the author of the game is actively watching this thread but im posting this here cuz I would like to offer my help with proofreading the english, and assisting with writing the story. Im not talking about actually writing the story but I can offer some quality suggestions on how to make it proceed a little more logically and not seem like some fast paced nonsense. I have a background in writing stuff so I can proudly claim to be quite skilled . If you see this OP then by all means message me, ive been feeling quite bored and have wanted to write/proofread something on F95 for a while and this project feels appropriate.
. If you see this OP then by all means message me, ive been feeling quite bored and have wanted to write/proofread something on F95 for a while and this project feels appropriate.
Hi, Man of Steel! You can reach out to us on ourIdk if the author of the game is actively watching this thread but im posting this here cuz I would like to offer my help with proofreading the english, and assisting with writing the story. Im not talking about actually writing the story but I can offer some quality suggestions on how to make it proceed a little more logically and not seem like some fast paced nonsense. I have a background in writing stuff so I can proudly claim to be quite skilled
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I've been paying attention to this game. It's a common concept, but executed pretty competently and with good art/nothing offensively stupid.
General question is if the game has non-vanilla elements planned, and if so to what extent?
Hi, T51bwinterized! We do plan some non-vanilla content, it will appear in the game as the story progresses.