Edited MTL? Mate if this is your level of "editing" than maybe you need to go back to kindergarten, cause your English is as bad as google translate. There is nothing edited in this, you neither bothered to do it nor wanted to but claim its edited, double text lines, text going outside of the box into the far reaches of the universe, typical machine translation poetry, hell you did not even bother Chris being constantly referred by "Him", "His". There is no way in hell you would miss any of that if you would be sane, which means either we should question your sanity or your truthfulness.