Hi there. I'd like some feeback on the last update with brothel events + Geoffroy and dark alley.
Since I didn't have any, I'd like to know if I'm going into the right direction or not. Criticism is always welcome as long as it is contructive.
I'm now working on 0.5, many ideas for something epic ! I'll be back soon on my blog and Patreon about this.
Well, this is not actual feedback about the last update since I haven't played it completely through yet but I have a few things on my mind which I like to let you know :
Thank you Maelion for such a great game.
Have to admit that I skipped it at first. The preview pictures promised some hot action but the presentation style just weren't my thing. Boy had I been wrong.
What program do you use for your pictures by the way? It's not Poser nor DAZ Studio and I don't think it's SFM either. My guess would be one of the Illusion Game Studios?
After I gave it a try I was hooked. The game is full on my road with it's nice mixture of violence, sex and humor. The story is sweet and sometimes funny as hell, I really like the combination of seriousness and hilariousness. Presentation is better than I thought at first once I got used to it. The RPG maker maps are cool and certainly show how much work you invest into making them. Voice acting is also pretty good and sexy.
The game over parts are always fun to read and watch and they never leave the feeling that you wasted time by checking them out. Also had a nice blast when I saw that Sylia (and Fiona) got killed after she served monsters as a pleasure tool, like with the abomination. As a fan of snuff that always gets me
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And that also brings me to a critic point. Most of the enemies announce that they would, quote : “I rape/fuck you to death and turn you into my sex slave”. Not that I mind the “rape to death” part but you can't turn someone who is dead into a sex slave. Reading such sentences is kinda odd. Think if your write something like “I rape/screw your brain out” or “I rape the living daylight out of you” it comes around much better.
Secondly, “The defeat of Fiona”. In the book version you find she get raped by the orc leader in front of the villagers and he break her neck once he is through with her. In the Crystal Shard version which find in a cave west of Masa Fiona spend some time as her sex toy before she perish. Not a big issue but it is another oddity.
I like the Crystal Shard by the way. It is a good way to include playable stories of the past and show how Sacred Warriors, Deviant and Saints, on missions which they succeed or fail without interfere with the actual story line.
If 0.5 is the end of the main plot I hope you gonna include a really bad ending where the Sacred Warriors truly get raped to death and their bodies get thrown away like trash. But that's just the snuff lover speaking, don't mind him
Anyway, great game so far and I'm pretty certain I'll gonna enjoy what you will add in the future.
