VN Ren'Py Completed City of Broken Dreamers [v1.15.0 Ch. 15] [PhillyGames]

[LuciferPrometheus]

I just played chapter 14. Yet to play 15.

Does anyone else feel that the writing gets more and more retarded every chapter after like chapter 6 or so? Maybe 7? Idk. It's just so fucking disappointing. Just so fucking disappointing. I can't believe that years of hardwork and hype culminated into this.

 

[cxx]

I just played chapter 14. Yet to play 15.

Does anyone else feel that the writing gets more and more retarded every chapter after like chapter 6 or so? Maybe 7? Idk. It's just so fucking disappointing. Just so fucking disappointing. I can't believe that years of hardwork and hype culminated into this.

normal and this had been going 5 years and even most dedicated devs get tired eventually.

 

[aruzen19]

I find it pretty hilarious when some people try to act like literary critics here. I mean, come on, these are porn games! What do they expect? A freaking William Gibson cyberpunk novel? That said, COBD story is one of the best I've read among other AVNs on this site.

 

[LuciferPrometheus]

I find it pretty hilarious when some people try to act like literary critics here. I mean, come on, these are porn games! What do they expect? A freaking William Gibson cyberpunk novel? That said, COBD story is one of the best I've read among other AVNs on this site.

There are plenty of games here with actually good writing.

I am not saying this is a bad game. I am just disappointed because I remember playing this game for the first time when only the first 2 or so chapters are out and thinking how good it is. This was the first game I played on this site that felt like it was more than just a porn game.

In fact it was so good that I kept playing it even after I was done jerking off (the highest compliment a porn game can get).

And now finally finishing chapter 15, I can't help but feel sad about how bad the writing comparatively starts to get after the halfway point.

I really hope that Philly will hire a writer for his next game to work alongside him. Philly is one of the most talented avn game devs and he's probably one of the most respected ones here, but there's no shame in hiring someone to help him. Not replace him though obviously. I still want him to write it but someone else to write it alongside him.

 

[aruzen19]

There are plenty of games here with actually good writing.

I am not saying this is a bad game. I am just disappointed because I remember playing this game for the first time when only the first 2 or so chapters are out and thinking how good it is. This was the first game I played on this site that felt like it was more than just a porn game.

In fact it was so good that I kept playing it even after I was done jerking off (the highest compliment a porn game can get).

And now finally finishing chapter 15, I can't help but feel sad about how bad the writing comparatively starts to get after the halfway point.

I really hope that Philly will hire a writer for his next game to work alongside him. Philly is one of the most talented avn game devs and he's probably one of the most respected ones here, but there's no shame in hiring someone to help him. Not replace him though obviously. I still want him to write it but someone else to write it alongside him.

I see what you mean. Sorry, I just had no idea there were people who really appreciate the writing in these adult games. I totally enjoy a good story too, and when I played COBD, I didn’t have a disappointing experience at all—maybe because I played the full version in one year.

 

[Neio69]

Can anyone give/share the link of Android port(ch.15)?

 

[cxx]

Can anyone give/share the link of Android port(ch.15)?

searching and changing order to show latest works.

https://f95zone.to/threads/city-of-...-mod-v1-15-0-ch-15-scrappy.30754/post-5685965

 

[Reru01]

Well just played the game and it is wonderful how story is driven but want to get the scene where gloria works for Victoria any idea how to reach there

 

[pitao]

Well just played the game and it is wonderful how story is driven but want to get the scene where gloria works for Victoria any idea how to reach there

Check the prior page of the thread, have a post there about it.

 

[flaviopaganini]

The game has just received 16 more achievements on Steam.

Book Two should be coming soon.

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[RC-1138 Boss]

I just played chapter 14. Yet to play 15.

Does anyone else feel that the writing gets more and more retarded every chapter after like chapter 6 or so? Maybe 7? Idk. It's just so fucking disappointing. Just so fucking disappointing. I can't believe that years of hardwork and hype culminated into this.

I would not call it retarded, but there is some quality drop in the story in the last few chapters even. Besides still disapointed how Chandra was just used as bait but never got her own ending...