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Well this week turned out well. I thought it wouldn't since customs took me way longer than I thought at the start of the week, but things turned out well. Speaking of customs I want to start that a little earlier this month so I can also have some fun end of month for Halloween! So, with that expect a poll this week for Octobers customs.

Now for the update on the next chapter. Work done on all fronts again. Sitting just over 200 renders now. A few more animations done bringing the count up to 17 and again I got another setup and running before doing this post.

Now time for a beer!

As always guys, stay awesome!

Philly
Seems Shanlon is easily turning into the second game's eye candy, first being Venus. Not that i am complaining about it. :p
 

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She's one of the more interesting characters in the game right now imo and it was kinda funny seeing her have a cat fight over the MC. I think she's somewhat changing first appearance she came off as a straight bitch but after that she's not been so bad
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Much like Chandra, she really is becoming quite the guilty pleasure for me, and when you least expect it, shows she’s more than who she appears to be, outwardly anyway.
 

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Nobody has these in full rez 1920x1080 eh? If not, I won't ask again. Just thought someone would do a good deed for the day that's all.
You could do your own good deed and pay the whopping dollar it costs to view that post....but who am I kidding....haha
 

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She's one of the more interesting characters in the game right now imo and it was kinda funny seeing her have a cat fight over the MC. I think she's somewhat changing first appearance she came off as a straight bitch but after that she's not been so bad
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:unsure: That desk is too high. It looks like they're seated at the kiddie table. The trend nowadays is a lower desk to show off the goods. And of course lots of low angle shots that border on upskirts! :oops: The set designers and directors don't even try to hide their intensions.
 

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I'd love to keep this going and give you an outright response, but I have to tend to her now. Excuse me.

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We can keep it going. While you tend to Katie, Vic will be tending me.

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Alleged attention whore aside, I've been replaying the game lately (yet again) and there's something I feel I need to bitch about. Someone mentioned it in passing a few days ago, and now that I paid attention to it he/she was absolutely right, although perhaps the way in which it was said wasn't the best because that user just focused on the lack of messy creampies.

Here it goes: Philly's orgasms leave a lot to be desired :HideThePain: :HideThePain:
Seriously, he's a master at everything; all his sex scenes (barring sexbots) are sensual, well-paced, varied, and really hot.
But then most of the times everything ends with a render and a line of text saying... well, that it ended. There's no focus on the climax, it's all very rushed.
I'm not saying we nead 2 litres of cum dripping from the LI's pussy, but some more attention should be paid to orgasms and cumshots.

Oh and I spotted a few typos! Yeah, I know, it's incredible but I did!
Unfortunately I was playing on my tablet and was silly enough not to write them down :(

Some other day we'll discuss the way in which the game's very first scene was remade, maybe before the Steam release (not sure).
In my opinion, for the worse.
 

moskyx

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Alleged attention whore aside, I've been replaying the game lately (yet again) and there's something I feel I need to bitch about. Someone mentioned it in passing a few days ago, and now that I paid attention to it he/she was absolutely right, although perhaps the way in which it was said wasn't the best because that user just focused on the lack of messy creampies.

Here it goes: Philly's orgasms leave a lot to be desired :HideThePain: :HideThePain:
Seriously, he's a master at everything; all his sex scenes (barring sexbots) are sensual, well-paced, varied, and really hot.
But then most of the times everything ends with a render and a line of text saying... well, that it ended. There's no focus on the climax, it's all very rushed.
I'm not saying we nead 2 litres of cum dripping from the LI's pussy, but some more attention should be paid to orgasms and cumshots.

Oh and I spotted a few typos! Yeah, I know, it's incredible but I did!
Unfortunately I was playing on my tablet and was silly enough not to write them down :(

Some other day we'll discuss the way in which the game's very first scene was remade, maybe before the Steam release (not sure).
In my opinion, for the worse.
The writing in the current intro is trash compared with the tone set in the original one. That's a fact.
 

Aristos

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The writing in the current intro is trash compared with the tone set in the original one. That's a fact.
Right?????

It's a shame I didn't keep an original version but only the Book 1 version published after the Steam release.
As you say, the original version of that intro set the tone much more effectively than it does now. It was darker, probably wordier, and resorted to some sort of external narrator that is usually uncommon in Philly, but the atmosphere was amazing.
"There will be screams, there will be pain, there will be *i can't remember*." It's gone.
Now it's all much more aseptic and rushed.
 

Aristos

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And now to illustrate what I wrote about orgasms, let's have a look for example at Gloria's sex scene from the latest update.

This is the exact sequence in which it takes place.
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From my POV that's too fast. For such a long and steamy scene it makes no sense.

Second and last example: Victoria at the MC's apartment.

Firstly they have sex against the wall and it ends with a very good animated cumshot on Vicky's face, which is a rarity.
But then they go for round two on the couch, and this happens:

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moskyx

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Right?????

It's a shame I didn't keep an original version but only the Book 1 version published after the Steam release.
As you say, the original version of that intro set the tone much more effectively than it does now. It was darker, probably wordier, and resorted to some sort of external narrator that is usually uncommon in Philly, but the atmosphere was amazing.
"There will be screams, there will be pain, there will be *i can't remember*." It's gone.
Now it's all much more aseptic and rushed.
It's still present in my translation files, although it's not displayed in game anymore. I refused to delete those now useless lines as a silent protest.

"The slow hum of the neon lights stretches out over the dark city."
"Poor witnesses to the events about to unfold."
"As the sharp snap of violence begins, then ends abruptly."

(Ghosts kill Gloria's friends and listen to her voice message telling them about the Noir, that segment is stilll the same.)

"The fast rhythmic beat of the Tech Noir mixes with the pounding of the dancers on the floor."
"A young girl waits for friends that will never come."
"Her patience turns to worry."
"Those around her, passing her by. Their only excitement is waiting back stage."
"Discussions in the dark, their meanings unknown."
"Friendly? Maybe. Fiendish? Perhaps."
"Regardless, the show must go on."
"A once shining star goes back onto the stage."
"Above that stage, he waits."
"Like a sentinel. Watching, biding, for his time. A time that will soon arrive."
"The former star approaches the mic."
"Trying to relive her old glory."
"Glory shall not arrive tonight."
"There will be pain."
"There will be fear."
"There will be panic."
"There will be chaos."
"And there will be death..."
"On this night."
"Blood shall rain from the sky."
"The three intruders finally meeting their match."
"For only gods would cause such suffering."
"Confusion takes over as the crowd flees."
"Terrified by what she has witnessed."
"The young girl stumbles out alone."
"Shock takes over. In a daze, she staggers to the doors."
"Battered and broken, she lurches outside into the night."
"Then in a panic."
"She flees."
"Her destination unknown."
"Anywhere. It does not matter. As long as it's far away."
"Then, with a crack, she trips."
"Laying on the cold concrete of the streets of LA, she passes out."
"Only to be found again by the one who watches."
It wasn't perfect, probably, but it had tone and rythm. Short, dark sentences that raise you alert levels. You feel what it's told... and then the superb intro video kicks in and swallows you into the game. Now almost all of that is replaced by inane dialogue lines that don't convey any emotion at all. Didn't understand the change.
 

Aristos

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It's still present in my translation files, although it's not displayed in game anymore. I refused to delete those now useless lines as a silent protest.



It wasn't perfect, probably, but it had tone and rythm. Short, dark sentences that raise you alert levels. You feel what it's told... and then the superb intro video kicks in and swallows you into the game. Now almost all of that is replaced by inane dialogue lines that don't convey any emotion at all. Didn't understand the change.
Thank you, compadre. It's great to hear those lines in my head again.
Seeing it again, I would probably prune some excessively bombastic sentences, like "for only gods would cause such suffering". Which on top of that didn't have any connection with what was happening (gods?).
But the essence should have remained. Paired with the music, it gives me goosebumps :oops:
 
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