hey,
Creator13,
thanks for sharing your project; Godspeed with it.
the plot seems really interesting, but the English text needs deep proofreading — on both its structure and spelling.
I hope you'll find a good professional to help you with that.
wish you a great Holiday Season;
cheers mate.
Hello, thank you for regards.
You're right. The English at the beginning was (is) terrible. In the later parts of the game I started using a better translator. I'll definitely go back and try to adjust it in later versions.
I hope the new parts of the game (especially the Dungeon) have better English as well as Renpy and Daz3D. I'm still a beginner, but now I'm running into more of a hardware limitation where rendering some scenes took hours.
Btw. I was hoping that the "code" wasn´t too complicated. In latest part of game where Clara transport to Otherworld, she must find another code. Again 3 digit...this time letters. B-blue, G- green, Y- yellow, O - orange, V - violet, W -white. Those are colors of flames. three of them were use for code and Clara must find which one by visiting different locations. But it is on player to try/find the order (it is maximum six combination).
I wish you also nice Xmas holidays