SaVa007
I have a question, if it isn't to much trouble.
I myself don't have a huge problem with Jacqueline's past, as I have known a couple that had that kind of relationship.(though it only lasted a couple of years, due to each not respecting the others say in partners or such).
My question is:
If Kate allows Jacqueline to finally get with her and the MC. Will you have Jacqueline keep her lifestyle and still fuck others? or are you going to have her to be faithful to the harem/MC and Kate?
I kind of get the feeling that the later is the answer. Going from her telling Kate that she is now way more selective in partners, and telling the MC she is basically getting tired of her husband and possibly the whole open relationship scene?
I would prefer if she loses her thrill for the open relationship and opts to start a real thing for the MC and Kate/harem.
Also just a little annoyance is that you've made the MC have a big cock and even Jacqueline is very impressed with it. The only problem is that you made both of her partners (her husband and coach) that we've seen have exactly the same size as the MC.
Wouldn't it have been better to have giving them just average or even below average size? so it would give Jacqueline and the MC's last scene more credibility or impact for her character?
Anyway I'm impressed with the story. and I absolutely love the romance that your creating between all the love interests.
Thanks for your hard work....................Peace!!