I like the story you have put together in College Life. I love how Kara is developing slowly into a confident woman exploring her sexuality. I like how Jane is showing her vulnerable side to the MC, even with the new cheerleader issue. I like that Jessica, whose age range I can’t pin down but she can’t be much older than the students she treats, is also exploring her sexuality and discovering new things about herself. Joan is a bit of a puzzle. She travels to the city when her father tries to rape her in her bed at home and she turns to her brother for emotional support after that trying episode. That part is clear. The developing love her like a woman not a sister part is a little shaky. The MC is headed in the same direction as their father, just doing it very slowly and letting Joan get there by herself without the same pressure that the father was applying. In the end, she will still end up having sex with a family member that should be looking out for her, instead of looking to get into her.
I understand that this is a porn game and doing your sister or daughter or mother seems to be a thing these days so I’m going to let the Joan thing go.
What I am interested to see is how you manage to get the MC to convince these fairly fragile young women to accept sharing him with each other, if it is even possible. You may find that the path to a harem ending is too difficult to navigate and the player might have to pick a favorite and try not to get in trouble with the others.
Regardie