I enjoyed the game, really nice demo. Found some typos but nothing too harsh.
The only bug i found was when looking at the WT in the game, when you click the map icon while in the WT, it opens the map while the text on it, but its easy fix in game so its not a big issue.
Observations:
-In the last "quest" with Cody and Cadence, the conversation got kinda boring, but that's my opinion, some ppl like to know the full background.
-The character models were nice, the tits where big enough to please and at the same time they didn't look weird, BUT maybe you can do something with the gravity part of it, maybe make them more natural, but the size is perfect.
- Alice's eyes look weird, to big in proportion to the face. Maybe you could look into it?
Overall, good game, girls look nice, good story and good game play. I'm all ready eager for the next update, i'm intrigued on how will you develop the game in the relationship department; if you're gonna go for the romantic harem style or corruption style making them all slutty (personal fav).
I hope you start soon to apply the cloth part of the game, making them use sexier clothes the more love/corruption they get.
Gods speed my friend.