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You guys have no idea how much I laughed at this part. I wrote in my review that one of my criticisms for this game is that the "bad guys" feel very 1 dimensional, like an RL Stein villain. But man, maybe it's a good thing if I get scenes that make me laugh so much that I start crying.

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You guys have no idea how much I laughed at this part. I wrote in my review that one of my criticisms for this game is that the "bad guys" feel very 1 dimensional, like an RL Stein villain. But man, maybe it's a good thing if I get scenes that make me laugh so much that I start crying.

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Unfortunately, my experience has been that the "casual" haters—you know, the ones that mutter under their breath just loud enough for you to hear—are the ones you can brush off without too much thought. But the Nick Fuentes of the world are becoming more and more brazen in their attacks. Whatever societal filter that used to keep these dogs in check just doesn't seem to apply anymore. These broadly-drawn caricatures of human beings are as one-dimensional as you can get. And they're multiplying.
 

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Game wont start with patch
There's no reason it shouldn't. Be sure you have the v0.5 patch if you're using it. If you kept the original .zip file, restore the folder and be sure you copy the patch file into the game folder. But either way, whether you use the patch or not, it shouldn't prevent the app from loading.
 
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The Brad scene for me is extremely over the top, that's the most "confusing" scene for me in the last update.

Regarding Ellie, there are a good amount of reasons for her to have trauma, but I can't really forgive her, because she's trying to completely ruin the life of the person less guity about her traumas. I think I'll replay the game just to reread Ellie's scenes, but for me she's a horrible person. I guess she has a very strong case of Stockholm Syndrome, considering how she still praises that Jordan bastard.
 

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The Brad scene for me is extremely over the top, that's the most "confusing" scene for me in the last update.

Regarding Ellie, there are a good amount of reasons for her to have trauma, but I can't really forgive her, because she's trying to completely ruin the life of the person less guity about her traumas. I think I'll replay the game just to reread Ellie's scenes, but for me she's a horrible person.
Yeah, credit where credit is due, I do think the author did a fantastic job with Ellie's antagonism. It's rooted in a legitimate issue that most people go through (sibling rivalry) that has added consequences related to Alex's trans identity. Cudos to the author, and I agree that she's a bitch lol.
 

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What agenda does she have against Ellie? We saw what happens with Ellie as a flashback from her perspective and if anything it would explain why her mom didn't nip her abuse towards Alex in the bud.
The way I see it, is that both parents, but especially the mother, are quite activistic, pro-LGBTQ and probably progressive in general.

This is evidenced by the non-traditional / gender-neutral names they gave their children. It then stands to reason that the mother is actively supporting Alex in her gender dysphoria rather than waiting it out or discouraging it like a conservative parent would probably do.

Ellie's reaction is first feeling abandoned because all the attention goes to Alex, except her fathers inappropriate attention, until that goes away as well. And then feeling resentful because of that situation continuing for many years (in game: maybe 10 years? I don't recall how old Ellie is now). As a result she develops a political orientation which goes directly against her mother (and by extension her siblings) which leads to even further confrontations.

People focus on the abuse her father visited on Ellie because it's more visible but her mother was/is abusive as well.
 
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Main games files are not available on gofile either "file is not public"
We know. We're having a little disagreement with Gofile right now that should be fixed tomorrow. In the meantime, all of the other links should work until then.
 

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I do think there is a way to balance in real trans issues and experiences and it can even be done in a porn novel like this. However reading through this for the first time and I can't help but to have some disappointment.

Almost every character is poorly written into some melodramatic stereotypical caricature. I'm not saying people like Brad, Kevin, Ellie , Zoey, Jordan, Izzy and Karl don't exist people like this do for sure. That said they usually are lessor versions personalty/character wise of it or at least they're not all surrounding one poor trans girl at once in some kind of cosmic coincidental hell. I can also understand to properly tell whatever story this novel wants to tell you would need a hell of a lot more characters and time which wouldn't be a feasible or production capable thing to create. So instread you have to cram in a lot of the traits and actions you want people to see into the set of shithead characters you already introduced. I do think it's a shame though and it takes me out of the experience.

You have the bones of a realistic heartfelt story that could be used to help give people an inside perspective of what it's like to struggle as a trans women and could find many ways to be hot. However the family element, the heart of this novel breaks it for me. I'm not against a porn novel/game having incest. I can take or leave it. That said I think when you're trying to tell a serious drama but then you mix in relationships that are that messy you're doing a disservice to the serious parts.

You highlight that bigots like to spew hatred towards trans women, one of the biggest highlights is on perversion. This definitely is a serious and true thing that trans people face, it's highlighted more than ever in the media too. That said you take Alex and you make what the bigots say true, you turn her into a pervert, a twisted girl with perversions for her family. It made me so confused... how can you be seemingly pro trans with the prologue of the story and somehow prove the bigots right with your storytelling... it makes me think this is written to piss off both sides. I want to be clear, there is nothing wrong with a trans girl learning to accept herself sexually and experiment with her sexual orientation. This isn't about her popping inappropriate boners it's the writing... the action around those boners that's the problem.

You start the novel learning that Alex attended a lot of therapy and even group support with other trans people. Problem is the way Alex acts and how inexperience she is really makes me question if she spent even 1 session in therapy or group. It's just not realistic. Which yeah it doesn't have to be it's porn, but clearly this novel wants you to take it at least a little seriously as it does seem to be trying to tell a story with heart. I can tell it wants characters to be complex but even with the reveal of Ellie's past it fails to strike that balance. Too many extremes and too much hatred put into the characters.

Look at Ellie you make her an extreme bigot with immense hatred for her sister. Then you tell us she was abused by her dad. What do you want people to take from that? You create an closeted jock bigot and then show us interactions with his father giving us a key how he become that way. Cool what do you want people to take from that? Yes nature and nurture play a role in how we treat those around us. Is there a lesson coming, will these characters end up growing somehow? Do you actually think there will be a way to redeem Ellie that make sense when on top of all her bullying she's now conspiring with Kevin to take down her own family. Sure you can argue "well she was groomed by her dad" you could say "She's jealous and starved for attention and feels like she was ignored her entire life." No matter how sad you make their backstories if you keep making them bottom of the barrel bad guys in all their actions it's never going to feel right. The funny thing is I know this novels writing can actually be decent on characters, I mean I think Sam somehow came out pretty good so far. She had her issues and jealousy for her sister but recognized her darkness and is making an effort. That's character, that's real character. Whatever this messy thing with Ellie and Kevin is well it's going to need a lot of work in the next chapters to make any sense that saves it from being goofy.
 

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Hey AVNSnax
Great game. Different from what I have seen in this site. Looking forward to seeing develop.
Just curious will this game will have T/M scenes or is it only T/F??
 

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Hey AVNSnax
Great game. Different from what I have seen in this site. Looking forward to seeing develop.
Just curious will this game will have T/M scenes or is it only T/F??
Thanks! Aside from a brief blink-and-you'll-miss-it scene in chap 5, there isn't any T/M penetration if that's what you're asking. Other stuff, yes. Otherwise, mostly T/F.
 

shaq9

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Someone, I guess a moderator, deleted part of my last post, and the whole post from other user. Interesting.

Would be nice if they at least told you.
Dang, maybe they thought we were trying to harass the author. To the author, even if I disagree with you politically, I still support both you and this game (trying real hard to not mention anything specific so the mods don't spank my booty again).
 
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Dang, maybe they thought we were trying to harass the author. To the author, even if I disagree with you politically, I still support both you and this game (trying real hard to not mention anything specific so the mods don't spank my booty again).
I fail to see how someone could understand those deleted texts as harassing anyone, much less AVNSnax, I really love their story, LOL. Our only sin was including the evil word "politics" in them. And in my case only to say that I don't know much about american politics, that's it xDDD.

I'm just annoyed because how rude is to delete someone's texts without even telling them. I realized by chance ("wait, my post was a bit longer before").
 
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I fail to see how someone could understand those deleted texts as harassing to anyone, much less to AVNSax, I really love their story, LOL. Our only sin was including the evil word "politics" in them. And in my case only to say that I don't know much about american politics, that's it xDDD.

I'm just annoyed because how rude is to delete someone's texts without even telling them. I realized by chance ("wait, my post was a bit longer before").
There's a bit of over sensitivity on those subjects. As you are quite probably aware, for some people it is akin to religion, and they simply are unable to discuss it without bringing really bad feelings up. Keeping a cool head and all that, is extremely hard to too many people nowadays.

I agree that deletion without warning is a "bit" underhanded, but, time and speed may also be a factor there, also, some people react extremely bad to being notified of things like that, so, it can be a tough decision. I've had to moderate and administrate enough forums to know this, it isn't that clear cut.

Let them do the best they can to keep this place as clean as possible, even if sometimes some things that are "innocent" to us get caught up in the Roomba. I find that a fair price to pay to have some peace and quiet even in threads so divisive as this one (it isn't divisive to us, but you all know it is for a lot of people).

Ah, well, this old rebel pirate will just pick up his soap box and walk away now...

Peace :)
 

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Will she ever love or be loved in return?
The game starts with the run of the mill sib rivalry,
then all of a sudden, like karma turning the tables on MC,
previously uncaring whatever girls drop in the MC lap off the bat, right into his bat,
prooving once again that putting boobs on a guy who had little to no quirrel or interaction with his
sisters made him the go to rag doll malet for all girls to rub off their enthusiasm,
either because look: the boobs guy gets all the girls and boys,
meaning girls will be as girls are - cutthroat about getting the boys they want,
or treat MC like a guy, trying to make him feel like shit or inferior.

End her confusion - that is a way off task not yet attainable,
as players keep getting confused over and over.

At the end of the day, the attention is what many boys and girls look for when they change anything
and more often than not young guys or girls getting sudden surge in suitors will bring them into crysis.

Well, see, the posts were not deleted, as the so called victim admits some posts got trimmed down,
loosing their gibbrish babble.
deletion without warning
my post was a bit longer
Just like this game, MC has a sudden struck of stardom with literally everyone
jumping on him for all sorts a reasons, some good, some bad, surely there cannot be
this whole game only girls going down on him, could it?
 

shaq9

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I do think there is a way to balance in real trans issues and experiences and it can even be done in a porn novel like this. However reading through this for the first time and I can't help but to have some disappointment.

Almost every character is poorly written into some melodramatic stereotypical caricature. I'm not saying people like Brad, Kevin, Ellie , Zoey, Jordan, Izzy and Karl don't exist people like this do for sure. That said they usually are lessor versions personalty/character wise of it or at least they're not all surrounding one poor trans girl at once in some kind of cosmic coincidental hell... Whatever this messy thing with Ellie and Kevin is well it's going to need a lot of work in the next chapters to make any sense that saves it from being goofy.
That's why my favorite villians (Thanos and Paul from Pokemon) are characters where you can go... "ok, I kinda see where they are coming from". They dont have to be sympathetic, but it feels cheap to make them just hateful for the sake of hate, or some other cliche reason like being in the closet. Paul from Pokemon for example, is a reflection of the "competitive" player mindset. Competitive players need "perfect EV and IV" pokemon, or they throw them away. This is the foil to Ash who is the average player, who just wants to have fun and build bonds. Even though we know Ash is in the right, we all have a little "Paul" in us. I'm not saying this is easy to do as a writer (its actually fucking hard), but not doing this can cripple an otherwise good antagonist.
 
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There's a bit of over sensitivity on those subjects. As you are quite probably aware, for some people it is akin to religion, and they simply are unable to discuss it without bringing really bad feelings up. Keeping a cool head and all that, is extremely hard to too many people nowadays.

I agree that deletion without warning is a "bit" underhanded, but, time and speed may also be a factor there, also, some people react extremely bad to being notified of things like that, so, it can be a tough decision. I've had to moderate and administrate enough forums to know this, it isn't that clear cut.

Let them do the best they can to keep this place as clean as possible, even if sometimes some things that are "innocent" to us get caught up in the Roomba. I find that a fair price to pay to have some peace and quiet even in threads so divisive as this one (it isn't divisive to us, but you all know it is for a lot of people).

Ah, well, this old rebel pirate will just pick up his soap box and walk away now...

Peace :)
For me is a very dumb an rude thing to do, but to each their own. Taking time to write something just to have some random invisible hand deleting/altering it because reasons. And there's the fact that whenever they want they could manipulate whatever you say in the forum without you noticing xD.
 
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