- May 20, 2019
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The girl in the middle of the banner is the twin, read back a few pages and the dev addresses it.
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Good start and shows promise for the Future.
a small gripe is either the textbox needs to be more opaque or the text needs some black outline around the white. Just to make it easier to read. the very first screen after entering the MCs name is allready quite taxing on the eyes to read.
the 2nd option would probably the best because
Another thing which is probably just personal preference is: why is the MC telling me about the quirks ect. of Ayana? Instead we could just discover them while interacting with her throughout the Story.
felt like unnessecary exposition in my opinion.
a small gripe is either the textbox needs to be more opaque or the text needs some black outline around the white. Just to make it easier to read. the very first screen after entering the MCs name is allready quite taxing on the eyes to read.
the 2nd option would probably the best because
Another thing which is probably just personal preference is: why is the MC telling me about the quirks ect. of Ayana? Instead we could just discover them while interacting with her throughout the Story.
felt like unnessecary exposition in my opinion.
- Aug 24, 2019
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Great story! The dialog is pretty great! Ayana is such a great gal, I hate to see her sad if mc choose the twin. can we have harem ending?
Tried this one for a bit. Great renders, good story setup. Going to bow out due to a personal quirk. The idiomatic speech, though I understand it is actually in current use, just bugs me beyond tolerance and keeps pulling me out of the story. DO NOT let my quirk stop you from trying what looks to be a great start to an interesting story. To the dev: Keep it up. Your art is great, and the story that you are setting up is interesting. Wish you all the best!
- May 17, 2017
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How about no text box at all? https://f95zone.to/threads/renpy-transparent-text-box-mod-v2-5-9-1.11925/Good start and shows promise for the Future.
a small gripe is either the textbox needs to be more opaque or the text needs some black outline around the white. Just to make it easier to read. the very first screen after entering the MCs name is allready quite taxing on the eyes to read.
the 2nd option would probably the best because
Another thing which is probably just personal preference is: why is the MC telling me about the quirks ect. of Ayana? Instead we could just discover them while interacting with her throughout the Story.
felt like unnessecary exposition in my opinion.
That's made so many games more enjoyable (Putting it on this one too)
See example:
- Jun 24, 2019
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Dont know what game you played but my MC got his dick wet lol
- Aug 24, 2019
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personal preference. hiding the text and textbox can be done at anytime with H on the keyboard or middle mousebutton.
i like to keep the textbox in general just wish the text was a bit more readable.
- Feb 19, 2019
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Just played it and nice shoes btw.
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- May 24, 2019
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I wonder if the dev is a sneaker head.
- Aug 28, 2017
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- May 24, 2019
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Wow, I really liked the 0.1. While it's only the first version, this game seems to have "heart", for whatever that's worth. The chemistry between MC and Ayana is really nice.
Not to mention, Ayana is fine as hell.
Not to mention, Ayana is fine as hell.
- May 9, 2018
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I love a woman who can eat, definitely wifey material.
- Jan 31, 2019
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Facts, She's got a lot of best girl points. Cute, Nice Body, and Doesn't take any of the MC's Shit while still being Kind. I hope The MC's Blood-related Sister has a good personality too.That ass won me and those eyes...
- May 28, 2018
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She's definitely wifey material all around, she's gorgeous and dreamy
- May 28, 2018
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Ayana and MC both have their quirks, but they basically compliment and complete each other, hopefully soon they can and will start building a deeper relationship
- May 9, 2018
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I hope I'm not saying this to prematurely but this is the one. I'm really liking Connected to far, a bit short but that's to be expected. Ayana is soooo beautiful and we also actually have an attractive looking MC as well. Hope the mom doesn't die though.. for obvious reasons *wink* but it looks that way. To sum it up I love what I'm seeing so far, the dialogue is some what different and tone feels different. Stay consistent and I'll glady pledge.
- May 9, 2018
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Definitely would marry herShe's definitely wifey material all around, she's gorgeous and dreamy